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Choosing final
“.hmm… So, this is the kitchen, and this is the living room?… It’s a little on the small.. and I think the view is way better from here…” she says pointing out at the incredible view of the city “and that’s the room where our kids are going to play?…” She stands in front of me and smiles seductively, “One question though… Where is our bedroom?” She grins.
“I’m still mad at you… and I don’t know if I trust you completely yet. I want to trust you but I don’t know if I do, but I’m gonna try, I’m gonna try and trust you because I believe we can be extraordinary together rather than just ordinary apart, and I wanna be-” she stops me from talking with a kiss.
An incredible kiss… amazing.
Her hands touched my face pulling me closer. Her soft lips kissing mine… it was all so soft… so perfect. Her tongue running over my lips and mine doing the same. My hands came up to touch her face and we couldn’t get enough of each other. I never wanted it to stop. But she broke away.
“So many times I though I had love in my hand you know… but just like grains of sands… love slept trough my fingers. So many nights I asked the lord above to make me lucky enough to find you again, or someone that I could feel the same to… But I couldn’t… Because something happens when you look at me, that I forget to speak, something happens when you kiss my mouth my knees get so week …. I can’t believe that something like you can happen to me. … I’m not afraid of tomorrow if we are together. You are my meant to be. I know it more and more every time we touch… something magical, spiritual something stronger than the two of us alone… something physical something undeniable… A feel like anything, that I’ll even known. I’ve chance Carmen.. I have… but what didn’t change is that my heart… still races when I’m next to you.” She doesn’t quit with the perfect words
“You don’t need to talk me over on choosing you Shane… I did… I choose you”
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(33 votes, average: 3.61 out of 5)
I noticed ur a fan of Nsync and Grey’s Anatomy (?maybe?). But Never the less this was a great story, i loved reading this. SHARMEN ROCKS!!
Awesome Loved it allAnd someone likes Grey’s Anatomy =DAnd again fantastic story
aaaaw! I loved this story! HOT if I might add..haha
5 frickin’ frack stars and a standing ovation…. loooooooovved it soooooo much… although it was killing me to see who carmen chose…. but i loooovvveeddddd it…. u r a bomb ass writer…. keep it up!