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Closure – Chapter 10
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Alice looked around blearily. “New shower curtain?” Dana looked back at Alice oddly. Then she realized that Alice was just really out of it. She strove to keep a normal tone of voice.
“Yes. I replaced it a few months ago.” She did not add that it was because she and Lara had destroyed the last one on an amorous morning.
The tub was ready. Dana even put a little tub pillow in to try and cushion Alice’s back. She turned to Alice. “Do you need any help getting in?”
Alice thought she might, but, did not think it was a good idea for many reasons. “No. I can handle it. Do you think you could make me a cup of decaf tea?” Alice was finally starting to get her wits back around her and wanted to get Dana out of the room before she disrobed for the bath.
“No problem.” Dana gave Alice a warm smile. “I’ll be back shortly. Just call if you need anything, OK?”
“OK.”
Dana was moving out the door when she heard Alice. “Dane?” Dana immediately turned around and headed back to her friend. “Yes, Al?” Alice looked down, looked back up and simply said “Thanks.” Alice was starting to feel tears form in her eyes again — this time for a much different reason.
“No need to say thanks. I’ll always be here for you.” Dana gave Alice a light kiss on the forehead and left to get the tea.
Dana had some time to think while waiting for the water to boil. What now? And how did Jackie fit into this? Alice obviously did not want her girlfriend right now. She hasn’t mentioned her and did not say anything when Dana brought her back to the condo.
Dana had been wondering all evening what happened after the couple left the party. Jackie seemed extremely agitated — although Dana knew she could not have seen the kiss. Did they have an argument about it?
The girls sat around for about 30 minutes after the couple left, sharing their impressions. The consensus was that there was something very wrong and controlling about their relationship. They needed to get Alice out of that relationship.
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Hey there! New Reader! Your story is just, it’s *gapes*. Yep, i’m speechless. It’s fantastic, it’s got so much going on and gave the characters so many dimensions, You’ve put a great spin on everything, the vunerablity of A and D being all ready to kick some serious butt. I’d go ninja on J’s ass, seriously, she wouldn’t be able to sit for a month, grrr. YAY DANISH! Great story, amazing writing, just great great great! PPS!
Another awesome chapter!!!!!! U rock sweety and please have Dana kick Jackies ASS lmfao!!! Well done!! PPS
Thank you for asking, I did not have any nightmares but it took me forever to fall asleep. So I re-watched S1 2nd disc for some A’s happier days, such as “my mom such a slutty, slutty, chicken-chasing pervert.” Anyhow, do not feel bad about your reader’s reactions. We have choices. It is because the story is so powerful, that is why it got to me. I thought I should let you know that you are really doing an awesome job. The last time it was that scary was reading Brteyes’ “Masked Feelings” Both A & D were physically hurt at different times. It was very hard to take. And also Layla Gray’s “Fear” when D was hurt badly. MaGoose, you are definitely heading towards the hall of Danish Fame. Back to this, I certainly welcomed a more sensitive and observant D. It is just what the doctor’s ordered. Now that we have a baseball bat and a tennis racquet, we can all march over to J’s and give her a taste of her own medicine. Thanks again.
WOW!! This was a great chapter. I’m loving the way Dana is taking care of her girl. But I can’t wait to see Aggressive Dana take out a can of whoop ass on Jackie. Pls continue soon.
Yep. You hurt a woman, you reap the consequences. You hurt Alice, you answer to her friends, her family, and to the police. You’re doing a great job on Dana taking care of Alice. I’d probably have her let Alice sleep in the master bed, Dana go about her house chores, but maintaining a constant vigil over Alice. There is no doubt that Alice needs her friends, who are her family, now more than ever. But she needs to get angry. It does no good repressing feelings of hate towards your abuser. She needs to get angry and soon. Please keep the love alive. (Gritting my teeth) And take the bitch down.
First the police,to keep Jackie away from Alice. Then let the gang do the rest. Let Shane shave her head, Dana with the tennis raquet.Tina with her right hook, let Bette beat the crap out of her.and Carman do her thing then give to to Alice to do the rest. That was a bit violent,just let the police take care of her. This does happen in the real world,so be thankfully its not in your world. thanks
I wanna see dana blew a gasket on jackie and then let others finish off whatever is left if there is any. great update….i hope dana can get alice to start thinking better of herself…
It’s officia, I love this story! You’re truly awesome Magoose. I’m very happy that Dana’s taking care of Alice for a change. I hope the other girls would be as helpful too, though I’m pretty sure they are and they’d be there with Alice this time around, hopefully. Thanks Magoose.
Hello MaGoose, I just wanted to say the last couple of chapters have been really amazing, so very deep. You are showing me a different side to both Dana and Alice, and I love it. I love how protective Dana is being of Alice, but I’m thinking once she tells the others about the stuff that has been happening to Alice the others might not be able to hold their anger in, let to rumble begin. I’m having second thoughts; I think Shane should take the B down. Keep up the amazing story, Sincerely, JC
Magoose. you have out done yourself. This story is ingredible. I freaking love it. Keep up the great work. I’m glad to see a few happy Danish moments. But i seriously have a baseball bat if Dana wants to borrow it to go speak to jackies car.
yeah! go dana..i loved the bathroom bit when one was in and the other just sitting beside them, you wrote that so well i found it so sweet! loved this one as usual :)