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Closure – Chapter 10
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Alice had been in the tub for about 20 minutes when she decided to get out. She was feeling completely drained and was about to fall asleep. “Dane?” Dana snapped out of her musings and looked over at the writer expectantly. “Do you think you could get me something to wear? Maybe a clean pair of sweats?”
Dana understood that it was just an excuse to get her out of the bathroom while Alice got out of the tub.
“No problem. I’ll be right back.” Dana took her time picking out the softest pair of pajamas she had for Alice. Alice never used to wear anything so modest to bed before — she was a short and tank gal if she wore anything. She used to joke that it meant easy access. Dana shook her head to clear those memories that she really could not dwell on right now. She returned to the bathroom to find Alice standing in Dana’s robe which had been hanging behind the door.
Dana handed Alice the pajamas and grabbed the mug off the tub. “I’m just going to clean up the kitchen. Come on down when you are ready, OK?”
Dana could see the relief on Alice’s face as she nodded her head. Dana left the bathroom and headed back to the kitchen.
Alice slowly got dressed. She felt slightly better — the bath had loosened her sore muscles a bit and she was no longer shivering. She knew from experience that the morning would be rough. She would have to make sure to have some more aspirin ready.
Once she was dressed she made her way down to the living room. She heard Dana puttering around the kitchen and allowed herself the luxury of sinking back into the sofa and pretending this was a year ago when they were so happy and in love.
Alice must have drifted off to sleep. She woke when she heard Dana’s voice talking quietly to her. “Al? Let’s get you into bed. You know better than anyone how uncomfortable this couch is to sleep on.” Dana recalled the countless times they had woken up on the couch either after drifting off during a movie or making love and how each time they vowed it would be the last as the worked the kinks out of their joints.
Dana realized that Alice was still mostly asleep and gently guided her to the guest bedroom. There was a good mattress in there and it did not seem right to have Alice in her own bed — no matter how much she might want to keep her close and hold her all night.
Once Alice was safely settled and asleep in the guest room, Dana went and called the girls to let them know Alice was safe for the moment. She didn’t go into details. She just said that there was an argument between Alice and Jackie that got pretty heated. She planned to fill the girls in further in the morning. Dana would need their help.
Dana vowed that Alice would never be hurt again if she could prevent it. In the near term, though, Alice needed a friend and Dana would be there for her. She would take care of Jackie later.
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Hey there! New Reader! Your story is just, it’s *gapes*. Yep, i’m speechless. It’s fantastic, it’s got so much going on and gave the characters so many dimensions, You’ve put a great spin on everything, the vunerablity of A and D being all ready to kick some serious butt. I’d go ninja on J’s ass, seriously, she wouldn’t be able to sit for a month, grrr. YAY DANISH! Great story, amazing writing, just great great great! PPS!
Another awesome chapter!!!!!! U rock sweety and please have Dana kick Jackies ASS lmfao!!! Well done!! PPS
Thank you for asking, I did not have any nightmares but it took me forever to fall asleep. So I re-watched S1 2nd disc for some A’s happier days, such as “my mom such a slutty, slutty, chicken-chasing pervert.” Anyhow, do not feel bad about your reader’s reactions. We have choices. It is because the story is so powerful, that is why it got to me. I thought I should let you know that you are really doing an awesome job. The last time it was that scary was reading Brteyes’ “Masked Feelings” Both A & D were physically hurt at different times. It was very hard to take. And also Layla Gray’s “Fear” when D was hurt badly. MaGoose, you are definitely heading towards the hall of Danish Fame. Back to this, I certainly welcomed a more sensitive and observant D. It is just what the doctor’s ordered. Now that we have a baseball bat and a tennis racquet, we can all march over to J’s and give her a taste of her own medicine. Thanks again.
WOW!! This was a great chapter. I’m loving the way Dana is taking care of her girl. But I can’t wait to see Aggressive Dana take out a can of whoop ass on Jackie. Pls continue soon.
Yep. You hurt a woman, you reap the consequences. You hurt Alice, you answer to her friends, her family, and to the police. You’re doing a great job on Dana taking care of Alice. I’d probably have her let Alice sleep in the master bed, Dana go about her house chores, but maintaining a constant vigil over Alice. There is no doubt that Alice needs her friends, who are her family, now more than ever. But she needs to get angry. It does no good repressing feelings of hate towards your abuser. She needs to get angry and soon. Please keep the love alive. (Gritting my teeth) And take the bitch down.
First the police,to keep Jackie away from Alice. Then let the gang do the rest. Let Shane shave her head, Dana with the tennis raquet.Tina with her right hook, let Bette beat the crap out of her.and Carman do her thing then give to to Alice to do the rest. That was a bit violent,just let the police take care of her. This does happen in the real world,so be thankfully its not in your world. thanks
I wanna see dana blew a gasket on jackie and then let others finish off whatever is left if there is any. great update….i hope dana can get alice to start thinking better of herself…
It’s officia, I love this story! You’re truly awesome Magoose. I’m very happy that Dana’s taking care of Alice for a change. I hope the other girls would be as helpful too, though I’m pretty sure they are and they’d be there with Alice this time around, hopefully. Thanks Magoose.
Hello MaGoose, I just wanted to say the last couple of chapters have been really amazing, so very deep. You are showing me a different side to both Dana and Alice, and I love it. I love how protective Dana is being of Alice, but I’m thinking once she tells the others about the stuff that has been happening to Alice the others might not be able to hold their anger in, let to rumble begin. I’m having second thoughts; I think Shane should take the B down. Keep up the amazing story, Sincerely, JC
Magoose. you have out done yourself. This story is ingredible. I freaking love it. Keep up the great work. I’m glad to see a few happy Danish moments. But i seriously have a baseball bat if Dana wants to borrow it to go speak to jackies car.
yeah! go dana..i loved the bathroom bit when one was in and the other just sitting beside them, you wrote that so well i found it so sweet! loved this one as usual :)