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Closure – Chapter 38
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Dana didn’t really understand, but, wanted to support Alice. “OK.”
Dana wasn’t the only one who could read her soul mate like a book. Alice moved to assure Dana that she wanted to talk to her, but, just needed a little time. “Are you free later this afternoon? Maybe I could call you and we can meet up after my appointment and talk?”
Alice was rewarded with one of Dana’s warm smiles. “That would be great.”
The sun was just coming up and the darkness in the room was slowly fading. “I guess we need to actually start the day, huh?” Alice said reluctantly.
“Yes. I need to go for my run and then get over to training.” Dana gave Alice one more strong hug and a quick kiss and got out of bed. “Can I borrow some clothes?” Alice quickly became preoccupied with a string hanging off the edge of the sheet. Dana was amazing to look at, but, she really needed to work through the feelings that came up last night before they did anything again.
“No problem.” Alice managed to squeak out. Dana grabbed some sweats from the drawer and headed to the bathroom.
Once the door closed, Alice got out of bed and wrapped the sheet around herself. The scar on her back was faint, but, she didn’t want anyone — not even Dana — to see it.
Dana came back out of the bathroom quickly. “I’ll shower later after my workout.” She noticed Alice out of bed and with the sheet wrapped around her like a mummy. She walked over and held the writer in a close embrace.
“Are you cold, babe?” Dana rubbed Alice’s back and tried to transfer some of her warmth to the other woman.
Alice knew she could get by with just saying “yes”, but, she really did want to keep the communication open with Dana and she already stonewalled her once this morning. She moved even closer to Dana and rested her head on Dana’s shoulder.
“I know it’s stupid, but, it’s…um…the scar. I mean… I know you have seen it, but, now that we are lovers again, I want to be beautiful for you.” Alice’s voice trailed off to almost a whisper by the end of the sentence.
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Another great one :) I’m glad that they really communicate this time around and that Alice is coming back to her old self again. Who needs to wait for a check? Just put some money on that table and go! ;) Hahaha. You rock MaGoose, seriously!
I don’t know how you do it, but you have done it again, another perfectly structured piece of writing – fantastic – please post again soon.
You’re seriously trying to make me throw in the towel on this writing thing, aren’t you? Lol. This is incredible as they all are. I love the way they’re being so supportive of one another.
“Check Please” LoL! If it worked for Dana maybe it wil work for me, idk?! Seriously, i love how they are trying so very hard to make sure it lasts forever and i really like how supportive Dana is being by offering couple’s therapy and everything! Well nuff said, you’re just amaZing! Love this chapter just as much as allllll of the other ones. Great update!
I really loved the beginning scene. Waking up next to the love of your life and taking it all in is just beautiful. I probably wouldn’t have moved them to round 2 this soon after the first time but that’s just me. But don’t let the past get in the way of Alice and Dana’s wonderful future. Thank you.
that was great and I am glad that alice is getting back to her old self even if it is a slow going great update pps
OoOo Am i actually first? lol. “Check Please” Did make me giggle. Yet agen another brilliant chapter. You have nothing to worry bout u manage to keep romance, tension, humour, drama all of thm in the story making Al and Dana believable and keep the story moving. I love this story and this chapter was so cute. It’s so good tht there communicating so well. Cant wait for u next chapter :) PPS Xxx
Sorry i did not comment on last chapter,u beat me to it with this wonderful update!!!! I agree with SummerBreeze with the check please,I laughed too!! Im sooooooo happy that they are talking things out,talking makes a strong relationship!!! U deserve a HDD!!!!! Thanks again for the AWESOME chater,Love ur writing!!! PPVS
I love it. Thank ye.
Hello MaGoose, “Check Please” remind me next time I’m in this position to use that line… and credit it to you :P… that was fantastic… super freaking awesome… I love this honesty thing they have discovered they seem to be the only ones in their universe that uses this concept… if we include the show… other fan fics… and the such. I loved Alice’s reasoning behind not talking to Dana right away… you never know the residual effects a bad relationship are going to have on you and it is best to cover yourself first. As for the referral… while I don’t read many Dana/Alice centric stories… I know a good one when I see one… you keep up the amazing work… I’m eagerly awaiting you next endeavor as well… hehe… look out for another surprise… wink wink… Sincerely, JC
very touching conversation and a much needed one between the two.. do we get a wedding??? see second chances can be so worth it!! :)
awesome chap…can see Dana waving her hand around like a nutter calling for th cheque :D
Can’t help but to laughand to love them. Alice is so rightsome thing Dana doesnt need to question her judgement about. In the future they will need to talk,and talk and them talk some more. Check please. take you woman home and step into your future. thanks