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Closure – Chapter 38
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Dana held Alice tightly and gathered her thoughts. She didn’t want Alice to think negatively about herself at all. “There is never a moment of the day that I don’t think you are gorgeous. No scar will change that.” There was a smile in her voice when she added. “But don’t feel like you have to walk around naked all the time for me either — much as I might like it.”
Alice gave a soft exhale of laughter and relief. Dana understood and wasn’t judging her. They stayed that way for several minutes enjoying the closeness. Dana grudgingly pulled back. She gave Alice a kiss and then went to put on her shoes. She stood and was ready to go, but hesitant to leave. She shuffled her feet and looked at the ground.
“So you’ll call me, right?” Dana said. She meant it to sound confident, but, her nervousness came through. Alice crossed the distance between them and gave Dana a soft, sweet kiss.
“I’ll call you. I promise. Have a good workout.”
Alice called Dana about 30 minutes after her appointment. It was a good one. Although on some level she knew it, it was still good to hear that her feelings were normal although they weren’t what she expected. Alice hadn’t felt this good in many months. She knew she still had a lot of therapy still ahead of her, but, for the first time she felt like there might be an end to this and she might really get back to who she was.
Dana was doing a grueling workout. She was trying very hard to distract herself from Alice and their upcoming talk. A talk she was hoping Alice would still want to have. It felt like a weight was off her shoulders once her cell rang with Alice’s distinctive ringtone. They agreed to meet at a restaurant for lunch.
Dana walked into the restaurant and quickly scanned it. Her eyes met Alice’s at the same time. Alice broke out into a huge smile and Dana could not help returning it as she felt relief flood her body. Something about Alice and her smile always seemed to dissolve any stress she might be feeling. Neither woman could believe how much they missed each other in such a short time. Dana made a beeline over to the table and gave Alice a lingering kiss on the lips.
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Another great one :) I’m glad that they really communicate this time around and that Alice is coming back to her old self again. Who needs to wait for a check? Just put some money on that table and go! ;) Hahaha. You rock MaGoose, seriously!
I don’t know how you do it, but you have done it again, another perfectly structured piece of writing – fantastic – please post again soon.
You’re seriously trying to make me throw in the towel on this writing thing, aren’t you? Lol. This is incredible as they all are. I love the way they’re being so supportive of one another.
“Check Please” LoL! If it worked for Dana maybe it wil work for me, idk?! Seriously, i love how they are trying so very hard to make sure it lasts forever and i really like how supportive Dana is being by offering couple’s therapy and everything! Well nuff said, you’re just amaZing! Love this chapter just as much as allllll of the other ones. Great update!
I really loved the beginning scene. Waking up next to the love of your life and taking it all in is just beautiful. I probably wouldn’t have moved them to round 2 this soon after the first time but that’s just me. But don’t let the past get in the way of Alice and Dana’s wonderful future. Thank you.
that was great and I am glad that alice is getting back to her old self even if it is a slow going great update pps
OoOo Am i actually first? lol. “Check Please” Did make me giggle. Yet agen another brilliant chapter. You have nothing to worry bout u manage to keep romance, tension, humour, drama all of thm in the story making Al and Dana believable and keep the story moving. I love this story and this chapter was so cute. It’s so good tht there communicating so well. Cant wait for u next chapter :) PPS Xxx
Sorry i did not comment on last chapter,u beat me to it with this wonderful update!!!! I agree with SummerBreeze with the check please,I laughed too!! Im sooooooo happy that they are talking things out,talking makes a strong relationship!!! U deserve a HDD!!!!! Thanks again for the AWESOME chater,Love ur writing!!! PPVS
I love it. Thank ye.
Hello MaGoose, “Check Please” remind me next time I’m in this position to use that line… and credit it to you :P… that was fantastic… super freaking awesome… I love this honesty thing they have discovered they seem to be the only ones in their universe that uses this concept… if we include the show… other fan fics… and the such. I loved Alice’s reasoning behind not talking to Dana right away… you never know the residual effects a bad relationship are going to have on you and it is best to cover yourself first. As for the referral… while I don’t read many Dana/Alice centric stories… I know a good one when I see one… you keep up the amazing work… I’m eagerly awaiting you next endeavor as well… hehe… look out for another surprise… wink wink… Sincerely, JC
very touching conversation and a much needed one between the two.. do we get a wedding??? see second chances can be so worth it!! :)
awesome chap…can see Dana waving her hand around like a nutter calling for th cheque :D
Can’t help but to laughand to love them. Alice is so rightsome thing Dana doesnt need to question her judgement about. In the future they will need to talk,and talk and them talk some more. Check please. take you woman home and step into your future. thanks