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Closure – Chapter 38
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“You would do that?” Alice said with some surprise. She knew Dana was still seeing her own therapist, but, was taken aback at the offer for couple’s therapy.
“Of course! I meant it when I said I was in this for the long haul. If we have problems we can work through them together. I don’t think there is anything we can’t tackle as long as we have each other.” Dana closed the slight distance between them and gave Alice a soft kiss.
“Dana? Are you ready to leave? I would really like to go back to your place.” Alice said with a spark of desire in her eyes.
Dana responded with a sexy smile “And what exactly did you have in mind, Miss Piesecki?”
Alice leaned over to whisper in Dana’s ear. “I want you inside me.”
It got the desired result of Dana giving an involuntary shudder and a soft groan. Dana took a couple deep breaths and asked seriously “Are you sure?”
Alice looked down and moved her chair around the table to be even closer to Dana. She knew Dana would feel bad about what she had to say and wanted to be able to hold her.
“I need to ask you something.” Alice said seriously.
Dana could tell that what Alice wanted to say was important to her and that made it important to Dana. “Sure, Al, anything.”
“If I tell you I am OK with something, please believe me.”
At this, Dana’s started blushing furiously. Alice placed a kiss on the athlete’s mouth and pulled her in to a close hug. “I know why you are doing it and I love you for it. But I am feeling more and more like my old self and I think the questioning will get to me after a while. I promise to let you know if I change my mind about something. I also trust you to listen to me when I need you to.”
Dana hid her face in Alice’s neck and muttered. "OK. I’m sorry…"
Alice dug her out and looked deeply in Dana’s eyes. "You have nothing to be sorry for. Look, Dane, we both made mistakes the first time around. One thing we both did is we stopped communicating. There may be times when we don’t want to hear what the other person has to say, but, I think it is better to get it out and be able to talk about it rather than letting it fester."
Dana gave Alice a bright smile and said "My girlfriend is very smart."
"You got that right." Alice reached under the table to rub Dana’s knee and move her hand to rest on Dana’s thigh. “And your very smart girlfriend is very sure that she wants you inside her, Dana. I think I’ve been ready to take our relationship to a more physical level for a while, but, was scared. Now that we have gotten past that first time, I really want us…well…I kinda need us to spend some time reconnecting…”
That was all Dana needed to hear.
“Check, Please!”
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Another great one :) I’m glad that they really communicate this time around and that Alice is coming back to her old self again. Who needs to wait for a check? Just put some money on that table and go! ;) Hahaha. You rock MaGoose, seriously!
I don’t know how you do it, but you have done it again, another perfectly structured piece of writing – fantastic – please post again soon.
You’re seriously trying to make me throw in the towel on this writing thing, aren’t you? Lol. This is incredible as they all are. I love the way they’re being so supportive of one another.
“Check Please” LoL! If it worked for Dana maybe it wil work for me, idk?! Seriously, i love how they are trying so very hard to make sure it lasts forever and i really like how supportive Dana is being by offering couple’s therapy and everything! Well nuff said, you’re just amaZing! Love this chapter just as much as allllll of the other ones. Great update!
I really loved the beginning scene. Waking up next to the love of your life and taking it all in is just beautiful. I probably wouldn’t have moved them to round 2 this soon after the first time but that’s just me. But don’t let the past get in the way of Alice and Dana’s wonderful future. Thank you.
that was great and I am glad that alice is getting back to her old self even if it is a slow going great update pps
OoOo Am i actually first? lol. “Check Please” Did make me giggle. Yet agen another brilliant chapter. You have nothing to worry bout u manage to keep romance, tension, humour, drama all of thm in the story making Al and Dana believable and keep the story moving. I love this story and this chapter was so cute. It’s so good tht there communicating so well. Cant wait for u next chapter :) PPS Xxx
Sorry i did not comment on last chapter,u beat me to it with this wonderful update!!!! I agree with SummerBreeze with the check please,I laughed too!! Im sooooooo happy that they are talking things out,talking makes a strong relationship!!! U deserve a HDD!!!!! Thanks again for the AWESOME chater,Love ur writing!!! PPVS
I love it. Thank ye.
Hello MaGoose, “Check Please” remind me next time I’m in this position to use that line… and credit it to you :P… that was fantastic… super freaking awesome… I love this honesty thing they have discovered they seem to be the only ones in their universe that uses this concept… if we include the show… other fan fics… and the such. I loved Alice’s reasoning behind not talking to Dana right away… you never know the residual effects a bad relationship are going to have on you and it is best to cover yourself first. As for the referral… while I don’t read many Dana/Alice centric stories… I know a good one when I see one… you keep up the amazing work… I’m eagerly awaiting you next endeavor as well… hehe… look out for another surprise… wink wink… Sincerely, JC
very touching conversation and a much needed one between the two.. do we get a wedding??? see second chances can be so worth it!! :)
awesome chap…can see Dana waving her hand around like a nutter calling for th cheque :D
Can’t help but to laughand to love them. Alice is so rightsome thing Dana doesnt need to question her judgement about. In the future they will need to talk,and talk and them talk some more. Check please. take you woman home and step into your future. thanks