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Closure – Chapter 38
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“I missed you…”
“I missed you, too, Dane. Geez. We’ve got it bad, huh?”
Dana sat across from Alice at the small table and reached over to hold her hand. She felt she could get lost in Alice’s eyes. They looked so clear and held such obvious happiness in them. The waiter had to clear his throat a couple times to get their attention.
Both girls blushed and ordered. They did not stop holding hands. They made small talk about Dana’s practice and training schedule until the food came. The waiter read the mood of the table well and left them alone after that, but, kept an eye out for if they decided they needed anything and called him over.
Eventually they finished their meal. Although they had a serious talk pending, they both felt very relaxed and comfortable. Alice reached over to hold Dana’s hand again. “So… Last night…” She gave Dana a little smile and got one in return. “I wasn’t prepared for how intense it would be and the emotions of letting someone that close to me again. I mean… I knew it would be intense, but, wasn’t prepared for the reality. In some ways, it was like I was having sex for the first time.” Alice paused again to consider what to say next.
Dana just sat still and listened attentively. She had to stop herself from nodding at certain places. She had read about some of the things Alice was talking about, but, didn’t want her to feel like Dana was taking it lightly.
“I also felt relief and I wasn’t expecting that. I actually felt guilty about being so relieved. I was expecting flashbacks…” Alice trailed off for a few seconds and then looked directly into Dana’s eyes. “There weren’t any. And I think that’s because it was you. I knew I was safe.” Alice rubbed Dana’s cheek lightly with her thumb.
Alice continued. “I know there might still be problems. I know it’s not all behind me. I know there will still be issues to work through in therapy.”
Dana gave Alice a serious look and said. “If you ever want me to come with you to therapy or feel that maybe some separate couple’s therapy would help, just let me know.”
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Another great one :) I’m glad that they really communicate this time around and that Alice is coming back to her old self again. Who needs to wait for a check? Just put some money on that table and go! ;) Hahaha. You rock MaGoose, seriously!
I don’t know how you do it, but you have done it again, another perfectly structured piece of writing – fantastic – please post again soon.
You’re seriously trying to make me throw in the towel on this writing thing, aren’t you? Lol. This is incredible as they all are. I love the way they’re being so supportive of one another.
“Check Please” LoL! If it worked for Dana maybe it wil work for me, idk?! Seriously, i love how they are trying so very hard to make sure it lasts forever and i really like how supportive Dana is being by offering couple’s therapy and everything! Well nuff said, you’re just amaZing! Love this chapter just as much as allllll of the other ones. Great update!
I really loved the beginning scene. Waking up next to the love of your life and taking it all in is just beautiful. I probably wouldn’t have moved them to round 2 this soon after the first time but that’s just me. But don’t let the past get in the way of Alice and Dana’s wonderful future. Thank you.
that was great and I am glad that alice is getting back to her old self even if it is a slow going great update pps
OoOo Am i actually first? lol. “Check Please” Did make me giggle. Yet agen another brilliant chapter. You have nothing to worry bout u manage to keep romance, tension, humour, drama all of thm in the story making Al and Dana believable and keep the story moving. I love this story and this chapter was so cute. It’s so good tht there communicating so well. Cant wait for u next chapter :) PPS Xxx
Sorry i did not comment on last chapter,u beat me to it with this wonderful update!!!! I agree with SummerBreeze with the check please,I laughed too!! Im sooooooo happy that they are talking things out,talking makes a strong relationship!!! U deserve a HDD!!!!! Thanks again for the AWESOME chater,Love ur writing!!! PPVS
I love it. Thank ye.
Hello MaGoose, “Check Please” remind me next time I’m in this position to use that line… and credit it to you :P… that was fantastic… super freaking awesome… I love this honesty thing they have discovered they seem to be the only ones in their universe that uses this concept… if we include the show… other fan fics… and the such. I loved Alice’s reasoning behind not talking to Dana right away… you never know the residual effects a bad relationship are going to have on you and it is best to cover yourself first. As for the referral… while I don’t read many Dana/Alice centric stories… I know a good one when I see one… you keep up the amazing work… I’m eagerly awaiting you next endeavor as well… hehe… look out for another surprise… wink wink… Sincerely, JC
very touching conversation and a much needed one between the two.. do we get a wedding??? see second chances can be so worth it!! :)
awesome chap…can see Dana waving her hand around like a nutter calling for th cheque :D
Can’t help but to laughand to love them. Alice is so rightsome thing Dana doesnt need to question her judgement about. In the future they will need to talk,and talk and them talk some more. Check please. take you woman home and step into your future. thanks