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Closure – Chapter 9
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Alice could recall every incident, but, it got too depressing to think about.
Alice was not stupid. She got to the point where she could tell when Jackie was getting upset and could usually cut her off before she got too mad. She just had to quickly do whatever it was Jackie wanted. It was confusing. Jackie loved her and gave her anything. She even gave Alice those things money couldn’t buy like her attention and flattery. She cared. Alice felt important to Jackie.
Jackie really was good to her except when she hurt her. Alice shook her head. God. What a fucked up statement to make about your girlfriend.
Alice thought about leaving before but did not have the courage or strength. The party tonight made her realize that she might not be as alone as she thought. That maybe Jackie was not the only person who cared for her.
Alice pulled out the bottle of aspirin and quickly took a couple. Jackie did not allow anything stronger in the house.
She decided to take a chance.
Alice went into the kitchen and grabbed a garbage bag. She made a quick sweep through the rest of the house. She found items of hers that she could and stuffed them in. Most things were purchased by Jackie and she had no intention of taking any of those. She also had no intention of going back into the bedroom. Jackie usually slept very deeply after, well, after. But Alice did not want to risk waking her. She grabbed her car keys and almost ran out the door.
Alice was ashamed that she felt like she was abandoning her girlfriend. She even turned towards the door to go back in. That caused her back to shoot pain up and down Alice’s body and convinced her she needed to get away.
She got in her car and considered her options. Much as she wanted to go to her, Dana was out of the question. Shane said she was going to hit some clubs after the party. Alice headed her car towards Bette and Tina’s.
Bette answered the door as Alice was watching the street for any sign of Jackie.
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WOW u are a very good writer!!!!! U got me hooked!!! Again very good chapter,pls let Dana kick Jackies ass PLEASE!!!! This chapter brought tears to my eyes,please,please continue!!! PPS
I wanna know who is going take care of jackie??? i’m so gald dana found alice, now let dana nurse alice back to health!great update!
Sorry when it comes to Al. I’m pretty straight up. Dana should just beat the shit out of jackie “Sorry accident.” And have like bette as a back up story. who would believe that little gay lezzie tennis star and a highly educated art titan would have gaul to beat someone up. I love you magoose. Great story great chapter
Poor Alice. No person should ever have to go through that. Dana needs to find Jackie and beat the bitch down!! After she takes care of Alice of course. This is really good. Can’t wait to see what Jackie does when she finds Alice gone. Post soon.
I am with HF. Have D bring her tennis racket and go for J’s head. It would take A a long long … time to get back to her old self. I can’t believe all the previous incidents actually happened. That was appalling. Thank you for letting A gather her strength and leave J this time. She should go to the police and file a lawsuit. God knows A will need the money for the many years of psychotherapy to come. The worst really is the emotional scar. Hopefully D would have the patience to take care of A and not run away this time. I am really looking forward to the next update. Thank you.
I’m with HD. Make some use for the racket and whack Dana! Alice definitely deserves more than this. I hope you’ll play this up more, i’s very interesting. thanks for updating Magoose, like you also go me hooked;D
Wow great chapter when Dana finds out what really happened to Al the rest of the girls are going to have to hold her back so she doesn’t kill that b***h Jackie. PPS
The best place to go is to the police. Let them take this from there. I know the gang will be with Alice, If I was Jackie I would stay away from them thanks
It is NEVER okay to beat up a woman. I don’t care if she’s with another person or if you think she’s the meanest person in the world. But this? Jackie deserves everything she gets knocked back at her with the rage of the storm! I have gone from nervous to worry and now…..ANGER. I hope they all gang up on Jackie and introduce her to a real fight at the hands of, in this order, Shane, Kit, Jenny, Carmen, Tina, Bette, Dana, and finally Alice. And to finish it up, have Alice say ‘By the way, we’re through…bitch!’ and have her kick Jackie in the ribs when she’s down.
ofcourse i love this story its a great story..wow i was surprised at the amount of hurt jackie has caused alice physically i mean im glad though shes seen the light fianlly, i hope u write a scene where dana and jackie fight and jackie gets her ass kicked that’d be so so good yay for danish!!
great post! poor alice but i’m glad dana found her.. pms
This story is absolutely wonderful! Im totally hooked! Please repost soon, hopefully Dana gives jackie a piece of her mind!
3 hours later, some scenes are still playing in my head. So I got out of bed to comment more. “The clothes she had worn to the party were rags now”; “The bruise to her ribs”; “Blackeye and bloody nose”; “caused her back to shoot pain up and down.” J must have whipped A severely. This just made me sick. MaGoose, I needed to hand it to you. You really got to me this round. You have done a fantastic job summarizing the past abuse. Portraying J as a very smart and violent abusers and her behavior, such as “usually slept very deeply after, well, after” was so spot on. I guess I am really taking this particular story to heart. It is too damn real. While you are at it, please let D bring A to the hospital and make sure that she did not get an infection. Salute, MaGoose. Hope I don’t get any nightmares tonight.