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Come Back To Me chapter 2.
"Bette, I want your mouth…right here", she uttered huskily, her words halting. At this command Bette allowed the kiss to break as Tina lowered Bette’s head to her breasts. Bette slid herself down the bed slightly to allow for a better angle. She slowly traced her tongue around Tina’s right nipple before taking it in her mouth. Tina slowly rolled over so that she was no longer on her side but fully on her back. She encouraged Bette’s mouth to her left nipple, which unleashed another series of moans and groans from both women. Bette’s mind was racing. Tina’s breasts are different. Fuller. In the last couple of weeks she had noticed that Tina had put on a little weight and it was certainly going to all the right places. Extra weight or no, Bette was still extremely thrilled with Tina’s body. What little of it she was allowed to sample anyway.
Waves of excitement continued to send tingles throughout Tina’s body. Her stomach dropped and the sensation reminded her of being on a roller coaster. This is harder than I thought it would be, she acknowledged silently and at that very moment she understood the agony of rule #1. She wanted so badly to tell Bette that she loved her. She wanted to ask her to hold her, hold her tight and never let go.
Tina deftly slipped off her pajama bottoms and panties and leaned her lips to Bette’s ear. "I want you naked" she commanded. Bette grinned and promptly obeyed, unbuttoning her slacks and clumsily prying them down her long dark legs. Tina slipped her fingers along the waistband of Bette’s panties, sending almost unbearable pleasure to Bette’s core. "These too."
Now that Bette was completely naked Tina took the time to run her fingers up and down the body she missed so much. She caressed her hips and ran her hands along her taut waist.
Whereas Tina had gained some weight she noticed immediately that Bette had lost some. Maybe 10 or 15 pounds, and she didn’t really have it to spare in the first place. Bette, what are you doing to yourself?
Tina finally took Bette’s breast into her mouth. She tasted so good that Tina began to cry silent tears of joy and heartbreak.
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(44 votes, average: 4.34 out of 5)
That was… a lot of things. Heartbreaking, hot, hopeful… but above all, it was very well-written. I hope you’ll post again sometime. Thanks
Dang, no way that can be goodbye. I’m not for anyone cheating, but the cirmcumstances were unique, and lets face it those two love each other in a way that most will never know.
BreakupSex is awful thing and its haeartbreaking,hot and soo many emotions going in all different directions at once.please let them each other again. they belonged together
Such a flood of emotions… so sad, yet so perfectly written.
THE END? I SOOO HOPE YOU DONT MEAN THE……END……….I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS…..IT WAS AMAZING…..AWESOMELY WRITTEN, AND SOOO SAD…..BUT ONE OF THE BEST BY FAR……PLEASE CONTINUE….DONT STOP NOW…..
You did warn us from the beginning, so I guess I can’t complain :). I cannot believe this is your first story. Where have you been hiding? Please come back soon. As I said before, please feel free to alter any of the depressing B&T stuff we’ve had to endure for 3 seasons. Your writing is amazing. Thank you for sharing your story.
wow that so didnt go the way i expected but it was rly well written thank you for sharing pp again it was nice to read rly good writing
Thanks everybody for the comments. Was very nervous with my first story. I’ve been throwing around other ideas. Especially one about some “allegedly” reknowned artist in upstate new york being killed by a piece of her own artwok. apparently a huge metallic 7 fell on her head from 30 feet high. she died instantly. In fact, I just wrote it. What do you think? :-)
really good, but sad ending…it was really short story, but i hope to see that you come back with a new story…
let them find their way back RH!
That was really good, the only bad thing about it was it was the end.
I like how you ended this. Plus, didn’t Bette wake up the next day in pajamas? I think I once watched that episode and wondered how the hell she managed to change clothes if she ended up passing out cold due to being really drunk.
There’s more psychological depth in this exquisitely written story than in a season’s worth of TLW. Thanks for posting, and I hope we hear from you again (the sooner the better). The Jodi-killed-by-own-artwork storyline would be a definite crowd pleaser.
Even though this story is over and Tina said that they were through I am like Bette, they have hope. Even with all that has taken place in the show they still love one another and there is always hope until one is gone (like death and they are both very much alive). Thank you for the story and please come to us with another of your thoughts.
That was sad and emotional and hope they will get back together, they belonged together. Thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you again! Sorry to hear about the artist, my prayed for her family and friend!
Hearbreaking chapter, but very very good like Bette i hope Tina will come home soon. Congrats for this story i hope that you continue posting
that was bloody hard to read…so sad…