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“It’s a ***** cake, for God’s sake. Sugar and flour and eggs andwhatever else people put in cakes,” Alice sputtered. “Why does she need everyone to come and taste it? We’re not appointing Supreme Court justices, here. How hard is it to make a ***** decision about a ***** cake?”
Tina continued to look straight ahead as she maneuvered through the stop and start mid-day traffic. “It’s not just any ***** cake. It’s her ***** wedding cake.”
Alice couldn’t help but smile to hear Tina parroting her. “You know, after that baby is born, you’re not going to be able to say ***** all the time.”
“Neither are you,” Tina said, looking at Alice over the top of her sunglasses.
“Fine. But you still haven’t explained why she has to have a fu DARN committee to pick a cake,” Alice said, slouching back in her seat.
“Because she needs our support. This is a huge deal for Dana, and whether you agree with the wedding or not, she’s your best friend and she’s counting on you.”
“Some best friend. She’s so busy mooning after Tonya that she’s barely even around any more,” Alice pouted.
“Well maybe she’d be around more often if you didn’t give her such a hard time. You needle her constantly about the wedding, about Tonya. She probably feels like everybody’s ganging up on her,” Tina said.
“We need to gang up on her. She’s heading for a”
“a lifetime of misery. Yes. I heard you the first hundred times,” Tina finished the thought.
“Do you really think she’s going to go through with this?” Alice asked after a pause.
“It sure seems like it. Unless somebody gives her an especially compelling reason not to,” Tina added.
“I know, I know. I’m supposed to go sweep her off her feet. But it’scomplicated.”
“More complicated than me and Bette? I don’t think so. And you expected the two of us to work it out.”
“That was different. You two areyou’re different. You’re supposed to be together.”
“How do you know you and Dana aren’t supposed to be together? What if she is your destiny and you stand idly by while she goes off and marries thatwoman?” Tina pulled into a parking spot in front of Regent Cake Studio.
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WOW….just been doing some catching up on your amazing story here FFC….keep going this is great stuff….love the Alice part in this chapter…way to go girl.
Very witty dialogue throughout this chapter. There were just so many funny lines it would be difficult to choose just one. But I did enjoy Tina saying that Patricia could slip through a mailslot!
Tonya’s saying that she, Dana and the kids could all grow up together was a riot. From a developmental stand point, she was right on target!
Evidently, Bette’s talk with Dana was enough to unsettle her, but not quite enough for her to make the first move. Thankfully, Alice was just a powder keg waiting to go off.
Shane, the master of understatement.
This chapter was so much fun. You are bringing us along for quite a delightful ride.
YES!!! That’s what I’ve been hoping for. Love it, Can’t wait for the next chapter.
“lets put it this way. you could either send your litle bundle of joy to stanford for a year, or you could buy this fu …DOGONE cake.”
“a little weight? i have my own zip code.” “you look great T” shane you have my heart.
“you sleep with a teddy bear for christs sake.”
“i guess this means we don’t get to ttry the house specialty.” “iguess not.”
well i should hope not to the tonya.
ffc. is there anything you cant write. and do it so spot on. this is fucking fantastic. i dont want this to end. thanks.
go girl..that was awesome. post soon
Yes that was a great chapter, I wished that this had happened on the show. So Bette doesn’t know that Shane was going with Tina to all her medical appointments and apparently learning a lot about child birth. This story is amazing.
aww yay for dana and alice!! haha shane just wanted some fucking cake haha lol well tahtst great amazing chapter please post soon thanx byeness<3390285029357
you go alice!!!!!!!!!!! wow…admire her guts…really! LOL~ how i wish i could do the same. LOL
Oh shit!!!!!lol
“I guess this means we don’t get to try the house specialty,”
Tasty chapter!
Way To Go Alice – at last she said something!
& I’ll never get to find out how good the cake was!
Now will Tonya have her revenge – is she going to sue?
OMG that was the best post yet. I love it better than S2 ending of Tonya and Dana!!! so cute.
Sometimes you forget how grown adult women can be so damn funny, And Shane wanted another piece of cake. Tina has her own zip code. {Please let it be mine} Thanks for a good beginning to a very hot Texas day.
lol..good for you Alice..lol..some atitude..great chapter full of surprises
That was great. Tina has her own zip code, Shane wanted more cake, and Alice you go girl.