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“You’re just feeling extra sensitive because you’ve gained a little weight,” Alice said, putting her arm around Tina’s shoulders and giving her a squeeze.
“A little weight? I have my own zip code,” Tina sighed, rubbing her belly.
“You look great, T,” Shane said quietly, busying herself with her napkin.
“You must be so excited, Tina. I can’t wait until Dana and I start a family. She’s going to be such an amazing mother,” Tonya said, kissing Dana’s nose.
“Dana? Our Dana? Dana Fairbanks?” Alice asked, incredulous. “A mother? Ofchildren?”
“Stop it,” Tina whispered, pinching Alice again.
“So when are you planning to have kids, Tonya?” Shane asked.
“We haven’t really talked about it yet, but I think it should be soon. We can fill the whole house with kids while we’re young and then we’ll all grow up together,” Tonya smiled blissfully.
“All right. That’s it,” Alice said, pushing her plate away. “I can not stand this one more ***** minute.”
“Alice,” Tina and Shane said at the same time.
“Is something wrong?” Patricia asked, walking up to the table anxiously.
“Yes. Something is very, very wrong. My friend here has lost her ***** mind. Dana, what is going on with you? Kids? You’re having kids? You are a ***** kid! You sleep with a teddy bear for Christ’s sake!” Alice ranted.
“Alice! You’re ruining everything! Why are you doing this to me?” Dana cried, picking up her untouched plate of white butter cake with lemon curd and fresh raspberries and smooshing it into Alice’s face.
Alice didn’t bother wiping the dripping frosting or filling from her face. For a moment she didn’t do anything. But then, very gently, she took Dana by the shoulders, pulled her close and kissed her. “Because I love you, you dope. I love you and I don’t want you to marry Tonya. I want you to be with me. I want you to give us a chance. Because I think we could be reallygreat,” Alice said quietly.
“Dana, Honey. Tell her to let go of you! Tell her to stop it!” Tonya squealed, tugging at Dana’s jacket.
“Forget about the wedding and the invitations and the flowers and the *****, ***** cake. Forget about everything but how you feel,” Alice said, not letting go of Dana. “Do you love me, even a little?”
Dana stared at Alice’s face, covered with gobs of lemon and raspberry and buttercream goo, and her eyes filled up with tears.
“Yes,” Dana whispered, smiling and crying at the same moment. “You dope.”
And with that, Alice kissed Dana again, covering her face with frosting.
“Dana!” Tonya wailed, throwing down her napkin and storming out of the gallery.
“This is not how I expected today to turn out,” Tina grinned, shaking her head.
“I guess this means we don’t get to try the house specialty,” Shane said philosophically.
“I guess not.”
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WOW….just been doing some catching up on your amazing story here FFC….keep going this is great stuff….love the Alice part in this chapter…way to go girl.
Very witty dialogue throughout this chapter. There were just so many funny lines it would be difficult to choose just one. But I did enjoy Tina saying that Patricia could slip through a mailslot!
Tonya’s saying that she, Dana and the kids could all grow up together was a riot. From a developmental stand point, she was right on target!
Evidently, Bette’s talk with Dana was enough to unsettle her, but not quite enough for her to make the first move. Thankfully, Alice was just a powder keg waiting to go off.
Shane, the master of understatement.
This chapter was so much fun. You are bringing us along for quite a delightful ride.
YES!!! That’s what I’ve been hoping for. Love it, Can’t wait for the next chapter.
“lets put it this way. you could either send your litle bundle of joy to stanford for a year, or you could buy this fu …DOGONE cake.”
“a little weight? i have my own zip code.” “you look great T” shane you have my heart.
“you sleep with a teddy bear for christs sake.”
“i guess this means we don’t get to ttry the house specialty.” “iguess not.”
well i should hope not to the tonya.
ffc. is there anything you cant write. and do it so spot on. this is fucking fantastic. i dont want this to end. thanks.
go girl..that was awesome. post soon
Yes that was a great chapter, I wished that this had happened on the show. So Bette doesn’t know that Shane was going with Tina to all her medical appointments and apparently learning a lot about child birth. This story is amazing.
aww yay for dana and alice!! haha shane just wanted some fucking cake haha lol well tahtst great amazing chapter please post soon thanx byeness<3390285029357
you go alice!!!!!!!!!!! wow…admire her guts…really! LOL~ how i wish i could do the same. LOL
Oh shit!!!!!lol
“I guess this means we don’t get to try the house specialty,”
Tasty chapter!
Way To Go Alice – at last she said something!
& I’ll never get to find out how good the cake was!
Now will Tonya have her revenge – is she going to sue?
OMG that was the best post yet. I love it better than S2 ending of Tonya and Dana!!! so cute.
Sometimes you forget how grown adult women can be so damn funny, And Shane wanted another piece of cake. Tina has her own zip code. {Please let it be mine} Thanks for a good beginning to a very hot Texas day.
lol..good for you Alice..lol..some atitude..great chapter full of surprises
That was great. Tina has her own zip code, Shane wanted more cake, and Alice you go girl.