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    Comfort Enough

    Story written on September 21, 2005 by fanficchick.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=56706
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    Chapter 35

     

    They were each served a small slice of the banana cake, and as they brought their forks to their mouths, a chorus of oohs and ahhs filled the small room.

     

    “Am I dead? Because I feel like I’ve died and gone to heaven,” Tonya gushed, feeding Dana a bite of cake.

     

    “I wish you would die and go to heaven,” Alice muttered under her breath.

     

    “Stop it,” Tina hissed, pinching Alice under the table.

     

    “Okay, okay,” Alice said.

     

    “Next,” Patricia intoned, appearing once again, “we have the carrot cake.”

     

    “So how are the wedding plans going you guys?” Shane asked, as the server placed another round of exquisite confections on the table.

     

    “Fantabulous. Aren’t they, Honey? Dana tried her dress on yesterday and she looks absolutely to-die-for gorgeous in it. I am going to be the envy of every woman on the planet,” Tonya giggled.

     

    “Whoa. Dane. Sounds pretty hot,” Shane smirked.

     

    Dana shrugged, taking a deep gulp from her water glass.

     

    Tina turned to Shane once again. “Something is not right,”

     

    “Nope.”

     

    “I did a story on designer wedding cakes once. Do you have any idea how much these things cost?” Alice said.

     

    “Not a clue,” Tina replied, closing her eyes to savor every bit of flavor she was tasting.

     

    “Let’s put it this way. You could either send your little bundle of joy to Stanford for a year, or you could buy this fu DOGGONE cake. That bite in your mouth probably costs as much as my monthly car payment,” Alice asserted.

     

    “She’s not asking you to pay for it. She’s asking you to eat it,” Shane said, raising her eyebrows pointedly.

     

    “We’re all going to pay for it, believe me,” Alice snorted, shoving another forkful into her mouth.

     

    “Our third selection is the very refreshing white butter cake with lemon curd and fresh raspberries,” Patricia said, her tone almost seductive.

     

    “That’s a woman who loves her work,” Shane said appreciatively, watching Patricia cue the server for the next sample round.

     

    “That’s a woman who has never eaten a piece of cake in her entire life,” Tina said. “She could slip through a mail slot.”

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    1. WOW….just been doing some catching up on your amazing story here FFC….keep going this is great stuff….love the Alice part in this chapter…way to go girl.

    2. Very witty dialogue throughout this chapter. There were just so many funny lines it would be difficult to choose just one. But I did enjoy Tina saying that Patricia could slip through a mailslot!

      Tonya’s saying that she, Dana and the kids could all grow up together was a riot. From a developmental stand point, she was right on target!

      Evidently, Bette’s talk with Dana was enough to unsettle her, but not quite enough for her to make the first move. Thankfully, Alice was just a powder keg waiting to go off.

      Shane, the master of understatement.

      This chapter was so much fun. You are bringing us along for quite a delightful ride.

    4. “lets put it this way. you could either send your litle bundle of joy to stanford for a year, or you could buy this fu …DOGONE cake.”

      “a little weight? i have my own zip code.” “you look great T” shane you have my heart.

      “you sleep with a teddy bear for christs sake.”

      “i guess this means we don’t get to ttry the house specialty.” “iguess not.”

      well i should hope not to the tonya.

      ffc. is there anything you cant write. and do it so spot on. this is fucking fantastic. i dont want this to end. thanks.

    6. Yes that was a great chapter, I wished that this had happened on the show. So Bette doesn’t know that Shane was going with Tina to all her medical appointments and apparently learning a lot about child birth. This story is amazing.

    13. Sometimes you forget how grown adult women can be so damn funny, And Shane wanted another piece of cake. Tina has her own zip code. {Please let it be mine} Thanks for a good beginning to a very hot Texas day.

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