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    Comfort Enough

    Story written on September 21, 2005 by fanficchick.
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    Chapter 35

     

    They sat in the car in silence for several minutes before Tina finally unbuckled her seat belt. “Not everyone is lucky enough to get a second chance, Al. It’s not too late for you to make this different. So don’t ***** blow it,” she grinned.

     

    “Let’s go eat some ***** cake,” Alice said, getting out of the car.

     

    Dana and Tonya were waiting in the display gallery with Patricia, the severe and slender customer relations specialist from Regent Cake Studio, when Alice and Tina entered. As Tonya was air kissing the new arrivals, Dana stood up to greet them, knocking her glass of sparkling water all over herself. Tonya abandoned Alice and Tina and immediately began fussing over Dana, sending Patricia off to find a towel. 

     

    “I’m such a klutz,” Dana said, horrified with herself.

     

    “You are a professional athlete, Sweetheart. You could never be a klutz,” Tonya said, dabbing at Dana’s pants suggestively.

     

    Alice turned to Tina with a look of pure disgust on her face as Shane strolled in.

     

    “Sorry I’m late guys,” she said.

     

    “You’re not late. We just got here,” Tina said, hugging her.

     

    “Good. I don’t want to miss anything,” Shane said, winking at Alice over Tina’s shoulder.

     

    Patricia led the group to a private tasting room where they took seats at a round table set for them.

     

    “Dana and Tonya have narrowed their choices down to four different cakes that you will be sampling today. The carrot cake with white chocolate cream cheese filling. The banana cake with a milk chocolate mousse filling. The white butter cake with lemon curd and fresh raspberries. And, our house specialty hazelnut cake with mocha mousse filling. Where shall we start?”

     

    “Let’s do the banana first, okay Darling?” Tonya said, squeezing Dana’s arm.

     

    “Great,” Dana said weakly, still fussing with her wet clothes.

     

    With a nod, Patricia cued a server to bring in the first sample round, and then stepped away from the table.

     

    “Look at Dana. She’s a nervous wreck,” Tina said, leaning in to whisper in Shane’s ear.

     

    Shane glanced casually across the table at Dana, assessing her demeanor for a few moments before replying. “Yeah. Something is definitely up with her.”

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    1. WOW….just been doing some catching up on your amazing story here FFC….keep going this is great stuff….love the Alice part in this chapter…way to go girl.

    2. Very witty dialogue throughout this chapter. There were just so many funny lines it would be difficult to choose just one. But I did enjoy Tina saying that Patricia could slip through a mailslot!

      Tonya’s saying that she, Dana and the kids could all grow up together was a riot. From a developmental stand point, she was right on target!

      Evidently, Bette’s talk with Dana was enough to unsettle her, but not quite enough for her to make the first move. Thankfully, Alice was just a powder keg waiting to go off.

      Shane, the master of understatement.

      This chapter was so much fun. You are bringing us along for quite a delightful ride.

    4. “lets put it this way. you could either send your litle bundle of joy to stanford for a year, or you could buy this fu …DOGONE cake.”

      “a little weight? i have my own zip code.” “you look great T” shane you have my heart.

      “you sleep with a teddy bear for christs sake.”

      “i guess this means we don’t get to ttry the house specialty.” “iguess not.”

      well i should hope not to the tonya.

      ffc. is there anything you cant write. and do it so spot on. this is fucking fantastic. i dont want this to end. thanks.

    6. Yes that was a great chapter, I wished that this had happened on the show. So Bette doesn’t know that Shane was going with Tina to all her medical appointments and apparently learning a lot about child birth. This story is amazing.

    13. Sometimes you forget how grown adult women can be so damn funny, And Shane wanted another piece of cake. Tina has her own zip code. {Please let it be mine} Thanks for a good beginning to a very hot Texas day.

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