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Coming Full Circle—Chapter 4
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Emma chuckles and looks at her watch and sits up “I hate to run off but my Uber will be here soon”
Kit pulls her and Emma up off the sofa “You want me to drive you back?”
Emma shakes her head “No. Thanks though”
Kit walks over to her desk picking up a pen and writing something down on her notepad. Emma watches as she finishes and tears off the note and hands it to her
“Here is my phone number. You call me any time and when you get a chance I want you to come spend some time with me at my house ok”
“I’d love that”. Emma says staring at the note and feels herself enveloped in another hug. She wraps her arms tightly around Kit’s back
“Emma Grace I’m so glad you came to see me…..You have just lit up my world seeing your grown up beautiful face”. Kit said pulling away from Emma to look at her.
“Me too..And now that I know you don’t hate me. You will be seeing a lot of me”
Kit cupped Emma’s cheeks with her hands “I could never hate you Baby girl. Don’t you ever think that. You hear me”
Emma nods “Perfectly”
“Good so let me walk you out. We can walk around through the back” Kit offers and walks out with Emma her arm holding her close as they walked from the alley and appeared around the front to wait on Emma’s ride
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Later that night, Mallory was sitting in her car on yet another surveillance. This time trying to catch a wife coming out of hotel room with a man that the husband is sure she was having an affair with although Mallory had not found any proof after a week of tailing her. Either she was very careful or there was nothing going on. She was brought out of her thoughts with her cellphone ringing and without tearing her eyes away from the hotel room the subject supposedly was in she grabbed the phone and answered it
“Mallory Parker” she answered
“Well Mallory Parker. Kit Porter here”
“Oh my God Kit!..Hi!” Mallory exclaimed
“How have you been girl. I ain’t seen you around in awhile”
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Wow, Kit connected the dots so fast and knew for sure that Emma is the daughter of Tina.
I quote:
“Kit did her best to push down her discovery to focus on Emma and would put a call into Mallory once Emma left. It was important that she let Mallory handle this and then bring it to Tina. The last thing she wanted to do was cause anymore problems where Bette would be involved”
I am not so sure how Bette is going to react that it was Kit who made the discovery because of Kit’s stunt six years earlier.
I think Emma would react cool when she is told Tina is her birth mother, Tina would be very happy she has found her daughter, again i am not sure how Bette is going to react, will she first see Tina as a competitioner for the love and attention of Emma? Emma and her do have a incredible bond and Bette can feel threatened by Tina. Or am i too negative and will they all click immediately and start a friendship what will develop in a relationship between Bette and Tina and Emma will be their daughter?
I am very intrigued how this story will continue!
Girl,girl,girl! All I know is I can’t wait until after the fireworks and the possible fallout. Then the sparks will fly and strike Bette and Tina who have both needed love; and then we will have our girls back together with a shared daughter after a few bumps in the road. Oh almost forgot to say how much I am loving this story! Please don’t keep me waiting too long.
The only criticism I have with this post is that it is not long enough
Please, please post again soon it’s such a great story and I’m so impatient for Bette to move.
SG
Wow…this is a really small world….Emma shows up just as Tina completes her story. And the similarities in Emma and Tina, I knew Kit would see them. And when Bette sees them together, she will see it too. I think that as close as Bette is to Emma, that no one will replace Bette as her mom. And once she finds out that Tina is her birth mom, then there will be an entirely different relationship which will be just beginning. It will take time for Tina and Emma to get to know each other as people. They have only had a couple of interactions which are student/teacher type interactions. Its not like they have this friendship in which they suddenly discover they are related. Enter Bette into the mix who will be working on a new computer system which will require another relationship for Tina. Bette and Tina are possibly going to be attracted to each other immediately, and may have some casual interaction due to Emma. Bette is going to see so much of her daughter in Tina that she cannot help but be attracted to her. Bette has the advantage in that she has been living with Emma for years and Tina will be new to the relationship. And the fact that Bette and Tina are ready for a relationship will tip the scales in their favor. As to Kit, sooner of later, Bette will forgive her sister. Emma is an adult and the threat of Kit trying to take away her child is over. Kit’s intentions were good, but her method was horrible. Wasn’t there not some other method Kit could use to bring Bette back into Emma’s life?
If I were Kit, I would tell Emma the truth about why her mother cut off relations with Kit. Kit needs to show Emma that she is not some innocent victim in their dispute and that Bette’s response was a natural one in order to protect her child. I think that Emma would take the situation better if it came from Kit. At least she could say that Bette did not act out of vengeance but of defense of her child.
This is a very good story. It may be going rapidly, but I have been involved in similar reunion stories which went just as rapidly. Sometime the stars just all line up in a row and the best results.
Thanks for this chapter.
StarGazzy!!
Boy if nothin’ else, you have the perfect title for this little doozie! Gosh I’m lovin’ Kit. Please keep her in this saga. Chuckle that she just about fainted after having figured out that Emma is Tina’s biological daughter.
And the fact that Emma is soooo drawn to Tina but can’t figure out why makes it even sweeter. Bette is gonna get her socks blown off with her second encounter with the hazel-eyed Art Proff.
Not sure how you envision Bette meeting Tina, but please do not let her go jumping to conclusions and blaming Kit for orchestrating a meet between her long-time friend Tina and estranged Sis.
So anyway . . . . Bette get your butt to LA!!!
S
loving this story. Such a twist. I love reading stories that are not all about Tina and Bette separating and getting back together. Their relationship is so ripe for different stories.
Can’t believe Tina did not see the resemblance but I guess she wasn’t looking for it like Kit was at the time they were all together.
Bette is gonna shit a brick, but she is I would assume smittened by Tina so we will see interesting sparks fly in all directions.
Again, love this creative story.
K