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Coming Full Circle—Chapter 4
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“Apparently L.A. is full of cheating spouses lately. I have been booked solid these past few months” Mallory said putting her phone on speaker and setting it in the cradle on her dashboard.
“On top of finding biological children?”
Mallory’s eyes went wide “She told you?”
“Yeah she did. Tonight actually”
“I’m actually surprised she talked to you about that. She was nervous as hell to tell me”
“Well If she didn’t I wouldn’t be able to help you” Kit said nervously
Mallory scrunched her face as she picked up her camera to zoom in on the hotel door
“What do you mean Kit?”
Mallory heard Kit sigh heavily through the speaker
“I’m not 100 percent sure. But I’m 99.9 percent sure..” Kit begins and Mallory cuts her off
“Sounds like you are pretty sure either way”
“Well yeah but this where you come in. When Tina told me where her daughter was born and gave me the birthdate, it was the same hospital my niece Emma was born who also has the same birthdate”
“Kit are you serious?”
“Yes and not only that my niece shows up right after Tina told me the story..And I swear Mallory if that isn’t her daughter then I’ll sell my soul to the Devil”
Mallory couldn’t speak. She just blinked trying to process what Kit was telling her. The search which seemed would be marred in red tape could actually turn out to be easier than she thought
“Mallory?” Kit called out “Mallory!” She shouted
Mallory jumped “Yeah I’m here. Did you say anything to Tina?”
“Are you kidding. I’m not about to get my hands in this without definitive proof and that’s where you come in”
Mallory put down her camera and grabbed a notepad and pen from the glove compartment
“Alright Kit…I’m listening”
Mallory wrote down everything Kit was telling her shaking her head at how unbelievable the situation was.
“And that’s about it”. Kit finished and Mallory set the notepad down beside her
“Shit!” Mallory said slamming her hands down on the steering wheel
“What’s the matter?”
“I’m on a stake out and my subject is gone. Well I don’t know if it was my subject was with the gentleman but the car is gone now. ..Crap…My client is not going to like this”
“I’m sorry Mallory. I figured I would call at a bad time”
“No Kit!…This is important. Tina is more important than anything I have got going on so thank you so much for this. This is going to make my job a lot easier and once I can secretly pull that birth certificate that is officially sealed we will have our proof”
“Oh Dear Lord. I don’t even want to know what illegal method you are going to use” Kit says exasperated
“It’s not illegal Kit when you know someone who knows someone who knows someone that can obtain those records discretely”
“Still I don’t even want to know. Let me know what you find though. If it confirms what I assume to be true I guess I should be there with you when you tell Tina. She will know that I would have known so I don’t want to hide that from her”
“That’s a good idea. You definitely don’t want her to think that”
“No. I messed up with my sister before and it ruined our relationship and I don’t want that to happen with Tina. I just hope she understands why I came to you about it first”
“Well if she doesn’t I will make her understand. Don’t worry Kit. I will get on this right away. I’ll be in touch”
Kit sighs “Alright. I feel this thing is coming full circle soon…And with my sister moving to town I wonder how she is going to take the news Emma’s birth mother is non other than Emma’s college advisor and my close friend”
“It’s like Lifetime movie Kit” Mallory quips
Kit chuckles “Girl I can’t even deal with you. You let me know what you find out..Night”
Kit ends the call and Mallory sighs
“Wow” she says buckling her seatbelt and starting her car “Hopefully real soon Tina you will find out the child you gave up for adoption over 18 years ago is someone already in your life”
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Wow, Kit connected the dots so fast and knew for sure that Emma is the daughter of Tina.
I quote:
“Kit did her best to push down her discovery to focus on Emma and would put a call into Mallory once Emma left. It was important that she let Mallory handle this and then bring it to Tina. The last thing she wanted to do was cause anymore problems where Bette would be involved”
I am not so sure how Bette is going to react that it was Kit who made the discovery because of Kit’s stunt six years earlier.
I think Emma would react cool when she is told Tina is her birth mother, Tina would be very happy she has found her daughter, again i am not sure how Bette is going to react, will she first see Tina as a competitioner for the love and attention of Emma? Emma and her do have a incredible bond and Bette can feel threatened by Tina. Or am i too negative and will they all click immediately and start a friendship what will develop in a relationship between Bette and Tina and Emma will be their daughter?
I am very intrigued how this story will continue!
Girl,girl,girl! All I know is I can’t wait until after the fireworks and the possible fallout. Then the sparks will fly and strike Bette and Tina who have both needed love; and then we will have our girls back together with a shared daughter after a few bumps in the road. Oh almost forgot to say how much I am loving this story! Please don’t keep me waiting too long.
The only criticism I have with this post is that it is not long enough
Please, please post again soon it’s such a great story and I’m so impatient for Bette to move.
SG
Wow…this is a really small world….Emma shows up just as Tina completes her story. And the similarities in Emma and Tina, I knew Kit would see them. And when Bette sees them together, she will see it too. I think that as close as Bette is to Emma, that no one will replace Bette as her mom. And once she finds out that Tina is her birth mom, then there will be an entirely different relationship which will be just beginning. It will take time for Tina and Emma to get to know each other as people. They have only had a couple of interactions which are student/teacher type interactions. Its not like they have this friendship in which they suddenly discover they are related. Enter Bette into the mix who will be working on a new computer system which will require another relationship for Tina. Bette and Tina are possibly going to be attracted to each other immediately, and may have some casual interaction due to Emma. Bette is going to see so much of her daughter in Tina that she cannot help but be attracted to her. Bette has the advantage in that she has been living with Emma for years and Tina will be new to the relationship. And the fact that Bette and Tina are ready for a relationship will tip the scales in their favor. As to Kit, sooner of later, Bette will forgive her sister. Emma is an adult and the threat of Kit trying to take away her child is over. Kit’s intentions were good, but her method was horrible. Wasn’t there not some other method Kit could use to bring Bette back into Emma’s life?
If I were Kit, I would tell Emma the truth about why her mother cut off relations with Kit. Kit needs to show Emma that she is not some innocent victim in their dispute and that Bette’s response was a natural one in order to protect her child. I think that Emma would take the situation better if it came from Kit. At least she could say that Bette did not act out of vengeance but of defense of her child.
This is a very good story. It may be going rapidly, but I have been involved in similar reunion stories which went just as rapidly. Sometime the stars just all line up in a row and the best results.
Thanks for this chapter.
StarGazzy!!
Boy if nothin’ else, you have the perfect title for this little doozie! Gosh I’m lovin’ Kit. Please keep her in this saga. Chuckle that she just about fainted after having figured out that Emma is Tina’s biological daughter.
And the fact that Emma is soooo drawn to Tina but can’t figure out why makes it even sweeter. Bette is gonna get her socks blown off with her second encounter with the hazel-eyed Art Proff.
Not sure how you envision Bette meeting Tina, but please do not let her go jumping to conclusions and blaming Kit for orchestrating a meet between her long-time friend Tina and estranged Sis.
So anyway . . . . Bette get your butt to LA!!!
S
loving this story. Such a twist. I love reading stories that are not all about Tina and Bette separating and getting back together. Their relationship is so ripe for different stories.
Can’t believe Tina did not see the resemblance but I guess she wasn’t looking for it like Kit was at the time they were all together.
Bette is gonna shit a brick, but she is I would assume smittened by Tina so we will see interesting sparks fly in all directions.
Again, love this creative story.
K