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Cruel Intentions – Introductions Part 1
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“Do I know you?” Bette asked with her usual confidence and arrogance even though just the sight of this girl had unnerved her.
“You probably know my brother. Tim Haspel.” Bette nodded, she did know Tim. “Yeah.” Tina nodded. “Everyone knows Tim.”
“Are you working on something?” Bette asked the blonde girl. “Should I come back?”
Tina shivered a little as she studied the girl in front of her. She was beautiful. And Elegant, but it was her eyes that captivated Tina. They were so dark that they were almost black and Tina could see the sadness behind them that she was sure the other girl tried to hide form everyone. “No.” Tina said a little too quickly. She smiled at her haste and then, “No, don’t go. I’m not working on anything important.”
“All art is important.” Bette said, giving her own smile at the fact that she wanted her to stay.
“Oh,” Tina laughed. “I’m not an artist.” She motioned to the other side of the room. “I’m here painting in the scenery for the theater department. Like I said nothing important. Please go ahead. I’m probably the one bothering you. I just wanted to come over and tell you how amazing the piece was.”
“You’re not bothering me.” Bette paused not sure what to say. She was completely thrown by the feeling. She had never been nervous around anyone before, but this girl had reduced her to the clumsy teenager that she had never been before. “I’m Bette.” She offered holding out her hand.
“Tina.” Bette smiled at the warmth of Tina’s hand in her own and couldn’t seem to rip her gaze away from Tina’s beautifully sincere eyes. Finally she looked away embarrassed at the way she was behaving. “Well, Tina. It’s a pleasure to meet you, but I really should get back to work. I have to have this piece finished in a week, and I have a lot ahead of me. I’m sorry.”
“It’s ok. Maybe I’ll see you up here again when you have more time.” Tina said still not dropping her hand. Finally with a knowing smile Tina did drop the dark girl’s hand and turned back in the direction of her own work
Back in the courtyard Helena, Alice and Tonya got up and made their way over to Harrison. “What was going on?” Tonya asked. Alice wondered of she was always this nosy.
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this if fucking awesome meth!!! luv it continue soon!
awesome story! love the concept, love the characters, love the writing. keep it up and dont leave us waiting too long!! :)
oh this is the best fanfic ive ever read!! hope you post soon :o) xx
LMAO this is fucking awesome and how really funny is it that alice is from napa, dude she could of been my neighbor LOL.
LOL, goood stuff, can’t wait for the next post!!!
Hey, where’s Mr. Piddles?
This is a great start on this story..LOVE IT…Thanks..
Keep going, its good. Cruel Intentions and Dangerous Liasons are actually both based on Shakespears “The Taming of the Shrew” Change the title, and maybe add a few more witty sarcastic quips please.
wow that was great please continue!!!!!
LOL this is great! Wonderful adapation of the cruel intentions, I kep cracking up at Dana the virgin.
ROTFLMO. This is a great take on my fav guilty pleasure.
I love this! this is hilarious! it has almost everyone! But where is Kit, and Carmen and Shane? Please continue. I love this story alot.
It’s the movie – yet new&improoved version..Great Sexci stry!..’Cruel Intentions’ is Hot – this is SCORCHING..I would definitely pay 2 watch this..Sum of these kids may be swt..But they not that Swt..Bad gurlz&Bad boiz – I like it..Dana – ideal candidate 4 perfect innocent virgin?..I dun think Dana&Tina r as swt&innocent as they play out?..& if Dane is straight(SO gay)&Al looses the bet, in the end it’s still a win-win situation..I expect sum crazy sexci scenarios in the future for these cats..Like is Shane in this?..MarinA&orCarmeN?..Jenny with Tim?..w.e you write..Thnk u, I’m looking forward 2 it..I love the way you write..Thnx 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
Hey, this is a great start. I wasn’t sure if the situation change would work but it does. You write the characters so well, I think the story would still be good even if the situation didn’t fit. Thank you.
great beginning! please post soon!
Great Start! Cruel Intentions is one of my favorite movies as well as the orginal it was adapted from (Dangerous Liasons). I was trying to figure you out the two main and I got it! :) Great job and can’t wait for the next installment
Hey crystalmeth this is great made me giggle the whole way through you’ve pinned everyone down really well – hope to see the next part soon
That’s one “fucking” amazing story you’ve got there. I love it. Pleas continue. I just hope that Alica doesn’t has to sleep with Helena. But if you follow the movie she wins. so that’s cool. Thank u for this great story, but that’s only so if everything goes perfect with Bette and Tina. Please post soon, love the story if i havent said it before
This story is so fucking good and funny, great start and all the characters in here is so funny and love the way it is. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Thisis really good. I enjoyed it a lot and if you don’t post somemore I think I might cry! Cruel Intentions is one of my favortie movies!
This is very funny, thanks for the idea. Helena, Helena everybody knows that Dana is Aice’s girl and viceversa, lol. Waiting for the next.
“Why not?” Bette asked. “The girl is hot even if she is a walking disaster.” LOL! you NAILED the characters!
i’m LOVING THIS!!! really looking forward to the next chapter (don’t forget about How Hard Can it Be? though!! )
i’m totally loving it…it’s a great twist on the movie. Where’s Shane? and Kit? and Carmen? and I don’t know but I have a pretty good feeling we’ll be seeing some of Lara later on. Keep it up….it’s fucking hilarious
ROTFLMAO this is great hope you continue and post soon!!
crystal – great job. i love it. i love how you’ve integrated so many characters. haven’t seen cruel intentions in forever – but its one of my favorites – not i need to go watch it. as always, you’re an amazing writer.
k. this is just way too fun. lol. i love it.