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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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“I’ve never told anyone about this place Tina, and in all the years I’ve been coming here, I have never met anyone at this particular place, I see people wandering around the lake all the time but never in here, it feels like its all mine, that not one single soul knows about it, which is silly because I’m sure other people come here too, but because I’ve never shared it with anyone or have always been here alone it feels almost as if I don’t want anyone to know about it, do you know what I mean?” Bette was feeling giddy with excitement, this was her temple and it always struck her in so many ways with so many emotions, and now by letting someone in, it didn’t destroy that feeling, as she thought it could possibly, but it gave it new meaning to share it and for the feeling to be reciprocated.
Tina turned to Bette, looking deep into the pools, the words that Bette had just shared gave a new meaning to what Bette had shared with her today, having been coming here for years and never mentioning it or bringing anyone to this place gave Tina a new deep respect for the woman standing in front of her, she knew that this meant a lot to Bette and to be the chosen one of sharing this sanctuary made Tina feel like she was the only one who existed on this earth. No one had ever done something like this for her, granted it was just a place to be brought to, but because this place held so much meaning for Bette, that’s what made it monumental in Tina’s eyes. Tina wanted to say just two words and she hoped that Bette knew how much meaning was behind them.
“Thank you”.
Bette understood the full extent behind the words, she leaned forward and planted a small kiss upon Tina’s lips, “your welcome.”
“Now Ms Kennard, may I tempt you into a tour of my Temple?” Bette gave a little laugh, there wasn’t a lot to give a tour of, they could see all there was to see from where they were standing, but Bette wanted to take Tina inside the church and sit with her, it gave another dimension to be able to sit and watch the dancing colours of the stained glass window on the grass at your feet. “Come into my sanctuary T,” Bette took Tina’s hand and led her through the arched entrance into what looked like a very well manicured lawn.
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!