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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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“Or else my ass!” Tina muttered under her breath with a giggle.
“Oi, I heard that,” Bette was chuckling at Tina’s antics.
Bette gently guided them through the overgrown pathway, glancing back now and again to make sure that Tina’s eyes were tightly shut, each time she looked back she admired the sight before her, taking in the calming aura that Tina was giving off, Bette thought about how relaxed she was feeling in Tina’s company, how easy it was to talk to her about anything, she had found herself opening up to Tina in ways that she hadn’t with anyone before, she gave a contented sigh as the feeling of being in love washed over her.
As Bette led them into the clearing, the view took her breath away, as it always did. “Don’t open them yet Tina, I’ll let you know when,” Bette wanted to make sure she got them in the right position to best appreciate their surroundings. This particular place just made Bette automatically feel calm, serene and it always allowed her to let go of anything that was on her mind or that she needed to let go of emotionally, the tensions and stresses from work were the usual thing she needed to let go of, but occasionally, something personal brought her here, like last week when Tina had pushed here away, she had come here only a few days before, trying to find some element of calmness in her torrid week without the woman she loved.
Bette positioned herself behind Tina; she brought her arms around her and covered her eyes with her hands. She brought her face closer to Tina’s hair, breathing in the familiar scent that she loved to savour, her face slowly travelled around towards her ear, she gently whispered to Tina, “Open your eyes baby…” Bette moved her hands from Tina’s eyes, allowing her to take in her surroundings, Bette’s hands rested on Tina’s arms, her chin resting on her shoulder.
Tina looked around her, speechless, not able to formulate any words appropriate for what she saw before her. She slowly turned to look at Bette, looking deep into her eyes, her own filling with unshed tears, the sight before taking her breath away, Tina wasn’t aware of any scene that had quite affected her in that way before. She liked scenery, the ocean, visiting new places, old buildings and historic places, but never before had a place instantly given her a sense of serenity.
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!