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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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And now here she was, with the woman who had made it all better, lying on the grass next to her with their fingers entwined, gazing at the bluest sky she had ever seen. Tina knew her life would never be the same again, and although it broke her heart that her family was now in conflict, she knew that the woman that she was lying beside was her life now, the person who she knew deep in her heart she would be spending the rest of her life with.
Tina sat up and looked over at Bette.
“Is your Temple working its magic…? You look miles away”, Tina had noticed the faraway look and the quietness that seemed to be shrouding the earlier jovial Bette.
Bette looked into Tina’s eyes, searching the deep pools that were looking intently at her, thoughts of being lost crossed her mind.
“What are you thinking that’s making you feel like that, surely it can’t be all that bad?” Tina said quietly, not sure what on earth could be crossing the confines of Bette’s mind in order for her demeanour to have altered so much. “Does it have anything to do with you and I and what has happened between us this week, when I pushed you away…?”
“Kind of, but please don’t think that I’m thinking negative thoughts about you Tina, because that couldn’t be farther from the truth,” Bette gave Tina a small smile “I suppose the things that have happened between you and I do have something to do with my train of thought but the only thing I can say is that, this last three months… you’ve……. derailed me – I thought I knew what I wanted in my life, to be a single, successful, happy and healthy person. I’m not so sure anymore, some things in life are what you get used to having – like being single, I’ve never wanted the pressure or commitment of sharing my life with someone, I’ve seen my friends looking for ‘that special someone’ and all I can say is they have been looking for as long as I can remember and all they are doing to themselves in the process is getting hurt, I never have and never will let anyone hurt me like that. I’m used to doing what I want, when I want to and not having to consider anyone else but myself. That makes me happy…, made me happy…, now I’m finding that the thoughts of doing that for…, however many years seems pretty lonely. I’ve never contemplated sharing my life with someone, never thought there would be anyone out there that I’d even want to share things with.”
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!