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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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Bette leaned forward, her fingers reaching for Tina’s chin, bringing her face upward, their eyes meeting, “Tina… baby… its you that’s turned my world upside down…, its you that has derailed me, its you that is the person that has changed me from wanting that single, loveless, lonely life, to one so full and complete and so… so… head over heels in love…” Bette took a deep breath as she finished her statement of truth, “I never thought it possible to want to spend my life with one person T… and that is you, that one person who I plan to spend the rest of my life with… if you’ll have me…”
Tina noticed the unshed vulnerable tears had now escaped the confines of Bette’s lower lids as they silently slipped down her cheeks. Tina gently wiped away the tears with her thumb, their eyes still locked together.
She leaned forward and gently placed her lips upon Bette’s, moving her lips lightly, caressing and tasting the salty tears as their lips merged together.
Tina parted her lips slightly and allowed her tongue to gently brush against Bette’s lower lip, her hand caressed Bette’s cheek as she deepened the kiss, she allowed her body to move closer to enable her other arm to encircle Bette’s shoulder pulling her closer into her arms.
Bette leaned into Tina’s kiss as her emotions changed from those of laying bare her emotions to allowing Tina to let their passion build, their kiss deepened further as their tongues began to collide within the hot confines of their joined lips.
Tina began to explore the inside layers of Bette’s lips with her tongue, allowing it to run along the upper edge of the soft lip, dragging it along the edge of Bette’s teeth to once again fight a passionate dual with its mate. Tina had never tasted anything so sweet or kissed anything so soft in her life.
As their kiss deepened, their breathing becoming shorter, their tongues entwining, battling for supremacy, this was a battle that neither wanted to win but they wanted to charge on regardless, fight on to not the bitter end but the very sweet beginnings. Tina’s breath became shorter, she broke the kiss with a sudden deep breath, “oh god Bette… I love you…,” Tina’s ragged breathing giving show to the effect the kiss was having on her.
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!