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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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“Your Temple?” Tina questioned grinning at the way Bette made her quirky face.
“Tina, I cannot divulge any information about the location until you arrive, if I tell you I’ll have to kill you after…” Bette gave her best James Bond impression which made Tina laugh out loud.
Tina loved seeing this playful side of Bette, she got the impression from the others and also from Bette that the majority of her life was pretty serious and it wasn’t often that she had the opportunity or inclination to really let her hair down and be herself. Tina thought about the short three months since they had been together, the times alone when she could actually see the relaxed expressions drawing across Bette’s face, the stress just disappeared, and when they were alone, she saw the laughter, she saw the teasing, and she relished every moment of seeing Bette ‘laid bare’, every facet of the woman she had fallen in loved with.
“Do you like driving Bette, you seem like the more miles that you drive the more relaxed your getting?” Tina asked smiling.
“Yeah, I do like driving actually; it can be one of those times where it can clear your mind or it can give you time to think. Today I think it’s the company in my car that is having a relaxing affect on me, and also the place I’m taking you also has that affect on me so I get a double whammy of relaxation today! We’re nearly there T, so you won’t have to wait much longer.” Bette looked over smiling.
Bette was amazed at Tina’s perception of what state of mind Bette was in, seeing as they had only met three months ago, but it amazed her how Tina could read her, from day one, she had been completely spot on with all of her intuitions so far.
Bette had always had the reputation of being not only the Lesbian Jedi but also a master of masking her feelings and emotions. Bette Porter, the real person was nicely ensconced within a fortress of walls built very solidly around her emotions and her heart, the fortress was very well depicted from the outside for everyone to see the façade that Bette Porter had created, and she was happy in her fortress, until Tina Kennard came across the moat and knocked on the door.
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!