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Do you remember when… Chapter 9
As Bette watched Tina, she saw that she started to turn quickly, looking around her, giving the impression that she thought someone was behind her; Bette switched the camera onto Tina’s face, noticing a slight panic. She quickly got up, logged off her computer, grabbed her bag, flowers and closed her office door.
She slowly made her way down to the gallery, the carpeted floor silencing her footsteps.
Tina assured herself that she was indeed alone and took a deep breath to calm her breathing, she continued to look at the south gallery, when she came face to face with a deep burgundy see-through curtain, she put her hand out to feel the soft gentle material, running her hand downwards along the voile, she allowed her fingertips to feel the material as she walked the length of the opening, the gentle sensation causing material to ripple beneath her fingers. She walked back to the centre of the curtains and allowed her hand to part the material, her curiosity was getting the better of her as she needed to see properly what was behind this curtain, although she could see through the material, the shadow of its folds gave an ever so slightly obscured view, she thought the overall look gave an extremely sensual feel.
As Tina stepped into the small room, she felt completely enveloped into a warm, exotic retreat, the colours around her bringing a settled, contented feeling to wash over her. She once again brushed her fingers against the loose material hanging around her, the long golden colour ribbons adding to ambiance of the room, she looked above to see the same voile as the entrance curtain, with ruches creating the apex above the platform, the lighting behind the voile, creating an erotic ambiance.
As she continued to walk slowly around the perimeter of the room, she let her hand wander across the floating platform, the structure quite hard to the touch, but with the material covering it, it had a seemingly cushioned look about it. She felt overwhelmed in this haven, engulfed by how intense it felt, but it also felt comfortable, warm, erotic and sensual.
Bette turned into the south gallery and looked around, she couldn’t see Tina anywhere. She placed her bag and flowers quietly on the public seating and wandered around to look for her love.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Hey…what a chapter…well you managed to bring my favorite chapter of all time……And if at all possible make it even better!…The Portard porn really should have a health warning on it ..not only for Bette..but for the rest of us!.lol..Ok So Bette was caught in a compromising position…but ya know!…Tina was teasing her way more than she could handle…so really i think it only right that Tina finish what she started…and What a finish..lol…as always loved this!…
Oh…my…gosh! That was so hot! I should have known better than to read this at work…. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I forgot to breathe while i was reading that.That was tooooo Hot.Thud job. The gallery scene was so intensely Hot, and erotic. And The portard porn collectionTinaloving..Oh my Gawd. Loss for words.B&T are freaks(iloveit). I need air!
Oh how I remember that day at the gallery oh so well..actually i just read that chapter not so long ago..I love your stories…Thanks for posting..I look forward to them everytime..
I can’t believe I’m reading this at work. I swear I was holding my breath. Here I am trying to have lunch thinking I’ll just check and see whats been posted. OMG, the rest of the day is going to be so long.
Poor Bette was caigh doing what come naturally when you want your soul mate and lover and she isn’t there That was one of the best charter your wrote and you brough it back in such a beautiful way. thanks
i’m speechless…….maybe later my mind can process this, for now it’s blank…all i can think of is Holy f***
Damn woman! *Thud* Mouth is dy and i think I stopped breathing for a minute! Post soon!
HOT!!!!! HOT!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!
That was the most erotic thing I’ve ever read.
This chapter only is the anthology of erotic “situations” and grandiose writing. You’re a maestro at building the scene and bringing it to its apogee, your description of the feelings going through their mind at those times leaves me breathless. Bravo!
What a great chapter. Love the story.
OMFG that was awesome! You made the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck! No one can write the Tibette chemistry like you do Jo! Yep, nobody even comes close! JB your the best!
Damn….this was pretty damn HOT!! – I have to add that while Tina wears her Nike Shox for running, I wear mine for fashion. A girl must always be cute!! ^_^
Jobadge, you’re AWESOME. That was????????? Go girl.
Damn, damn that was just toooo hoooot. I really need a copy of that tape of the very erotic gallery scene. You only enhanced that scene and brought out even more intense feelings and desires. I do believe that this chapter is tied with the original gallery scene as my favorite chapters. I also love your situations chapters.
Goodeness, Jo, I think I’m almost as dazed as Bette. Could my nub be swollen? I’ll have to sashay someplace to check it out. I think I told you when you put out the original gallery chapter about how slowly I read it, the better to enjoy it. Well, you did it to me again.
Jo….You’re just amazing. Your NC-17s are off the chain! I can barely breathe. I can hardly write a simple note and look what you can do w/moments.
wow…
wheeeeeeeeew wut a hot chapter! i very much enjoy ur writing! those cute lil situation chapters too! keep on writing! hope to see more (a lot more) posts soon!!! =)
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Triple THUD!! Jo you’re simply the best. Better than all the rest. Oh my God. What a way to start the weekend. Thank you for what you do.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lmao@honda90. Problems typing, sweetie? ;) As if I’m one to talk I typed “swttie” at first. lol I’d kinda like to see you write a short collection of gallery chapters.
This was just as hot, amazing and mind-blowing as I had expected, thanks for listen to my advise :o))
Cold shower… Be right back!!!
That’s what I’m talking about!
damn that waz hottttttttttttttttttt
Holy WOW!… What can I say? Awesome! Just absolutely awesome!!!!!