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Do you remember when… Chapter 9
As Bette turned the corner into the area for the new exhibits, she slowed her pace, she wanted to watch Tina in the flesh, she had seen how animated and taken in she had seemed, she wanted to see it again, firsthand and not through the security monitor.
Bette could still not see Tina, but then she noticed a shadow passing behind the curtain of the Nebwenenef display, she quietly walked toward the curtain, so as not to startle Tina, for some unknown reason her heart began to pound, the feeling rising to her ears, the same pounding of anticipation when they were face to face, silent, eyes locked, reading each others thoughts, knowing that a pending intense sexual encounter was just around the corner.
Bette took a deep breath to calm herself, but it only served to make her breathing shallower, her chest rising and falling in quick succession, her throat constricting in expectation, but she didn’t know what that expectation was, her mind travelled a million miles an hour, her mouth grew dry, the pounding reverberating loudly between her ears, she swallowed hard, she clenched her fists…
Tina stopped, her hand still on the platform, her back to the curtained opening, in an instant the hairs on the back of her neck stood on end, her pulse quickened, her senses alert, goose bumps appearing on her body, she could feel a presence, she didn’t know whether to be excited or scared, the feelings mixed up and she didn’t know which one to acknowledge first, her body was responding to an unknown aura, her heart began to pound, her mind was reeling.
She stopped.
She smiled.
There was only one beings presence that brought out these feelings in her. Her own psyche responding to a sensation, an awareness of another mortal being close, but not just any mortal, not just any creature who walked on God’s green earth, not just any soul.
The matching half to her own soul, her mate, her whole life.
She was close, she was near, she could feel her.
Her Bette.
Bette saw Tina’s hesitation; she saw her come to a halt, her hand still on the platform, waiting, listening. She wanted this woman so much; she wanted her in every way possible, her whole being, to look into her eyes, to kiss her, to taste her, to love her, to protect her, to be the one to catch her when she fell, and to be caught by her when she also fell. Forever.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Hey…what a chapter…well you managed to bring my favorite chapter of all time……And if at all possible make it even better!…The Portard porn really should have a health warning on it ..not only for Bette..but for the rest of us!.lol..Ok So Bette was caught in a compromising position…but ya know!…Tina was teasing her way more than she could handle…so really i think it only right that Tina finish what she started…and What a finish..lol…as always loved this!…
Oh…my…gosh! That was so hot! I should have known better than to read this at work…. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I forgot to breathe while i was reading that.That was tooooo Hot.Thud job. The gallery scene was so intensely Hot, and erotic. And The portard porn collectionTinaloving..Oh my Gawd. Loss for words.B&T are freaks(iloveit). I need air!
Oh how I remember that day at the gallery oh so well..actually i just read that chapter not so long ago..I love your stories…Thanks for posting..I look forward to them everytime..
I can’t believe I’m reading this at work. I swear I was holding my breath. Here I am trying to have lunch thinking I’ll just check and see whats been posted. OMG, the rest of the day is going to be so long.
Poor Bette was caigh doing what come naturally when you want your soul mate and lover and she isn’t there That was one of the best charter your wrote and you brough it back in such a beautiful way. thanks
i’m speechless…….maybe later my mind can process this, for now it’s blank…all i can think of is Holy f***
Damn woman! *Thud* Mouth is dy and i think I stopped breathing for a minute! Post soon!
HOT!!!!! HOT!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!
That was the most erotic thing I’ve ever read.
This chapter only is the anthology of erotic “situations” and grandiose writing. You’re a maestro at building the scene and bringing it to its apogee, your description of the feelings going through their mind at those times leaves me breathless. Bravo!
What a great chapter. Love the story.
OMFG that was awesome! You made the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck! No one can write the Tibette chemistry like you do Jo! Yep, nobody even comes close! JB your the best!
Damn….this was pretty damn HOT!! – I have to add that while Tina wears her Nike Shox for running, I wear mine for fashion. A girl must always be cute!! ^_^
Jobadge, you’re AWESOME. That was????????? Go girl.
Damn, damn that was just toooo hoooot. I really need a copy of that tape of the very erotic gallery scene. You only enhanced that scene and brought out even more intense feelings and desires. I do believe that this chapter is tied with the original gallery scene as my favorite chapters. I also love your situations chapters.
Goodeness, Jo, I think I’m almost as dazed as Bette. Could my nub be swollen? I’ll have to sashay someplace to check it out. I think I told you when you put out the original gallery chapter about how slowly I read it, the better to enjoy it. Well, you did it to me again.
Jo….You’re just amazing. Your NC-17s are off the chain! I can barely breathe. I can hardly write a simple note and look what you can do w/moments.
wow…
wheeeeeeeeew wut a hot chapter! i very much enjoy ur writing! those cute lil situation chapters too! keep on writing! hope to see more (a lot more) posts soon!!! =)
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Triple THUD!! Jo you’re simply the best. Better than all the rest. Oh my God. What a way to start the weekend. Thank you for what you do.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lmao@honda90. Problems typing, sweetie? ;) As if I’m one to talk I typed “swttie” at first. lol I’d kinda like to see you write a short collection of gallery chapters.
This was just as hot, amazing and mind-blowing as I had expected, thanks for listen to my advise :o))
Cold shower… Be right back!!!
That’s what I’m talking about!
damn that waz hottttttttttttttttttt
Holy WOW!… What can I say? Awesome! Just absolutely awesome!!!!!