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Drenched Ch 10
Tina’s first instinct was to nuzzle the beautiful skin of Bette’s back and draw her lover into the sensuality that was currently encroaching on her mind and body. But as strong as this urge was it wasn’t stronger than her need to step into a hot, pelting shower as soon as humanly possible.
And so she slowly extracted her leg from between Bette’s and headed quietly to the bath.
After scrubbing, shaving, shampooing, drying off and moisturizing herself, Tina was ready for a nice cup of coffee.
As she was sipping her first cup and beginning to prepare breakfast, sleeping beauty walked groggily into the kitchen rubbing her eyes.
“T, did we do what I think we did last night?”
“That would depend on what you think we did?” Tina teased.
“It’s easy for you to play, because you’ve had your first cup of coffee but I haven’t and I really need one.”
“And why might that be my dear …are we still tired?”
“Probably because I can’t wake up…I haven’t slept that deeply in I don’t know how long.”
“Ha ha …haaaah…” Tina started giggling, then laughing and having a hard time stopping.
“What? What’s so funny?” Bette couldn’t help giggling too.
“Mmmm hhmmph haa..hhaaa…well if I had to guess, I’d say Shane blasted the last ounce of inhibitions and control freakiness out of your body with that final orgasm, hmmh hmmmm…” Tina started coughing she was laughing so hard.
“That kind of cleansing can make a girl tired you know?(*&*&(* ?? ha ha haaaa.”
Bette could no longer resist the humor of the situation and she hugged Tina tightly as they giggled with hilarity together.
“Ok, I need some coffee now that you’ve woken me up by way of my funny bone.” Bette breathed as their laughter subsided.
“And besides I regularly let you subdue my “control freaky” side when you are so inclined.” Bette countered.
“Well sweetie that’s true, I may subdue it on occasion, but last night I’d have say Shane not only subdued it but spanked it and exiled it to Siberia.” Tina replied giggling again.
“Smart ass.” Bette chuckled as she took her first sip of coffee.
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Aww…that’s awesome! Glad to see that Bette can talk to Shane, need to make the wrongs right Shane, it’s the only way! Great chapter…
I’ll be sad to see this end, but I loved the talk between Bette and Shane. I hope Shane will find happiness with Carmen (and B&T will have more amazing sex). Thanks
It’s good to know that they didn’t hurt their friendship with SHane. I hope that Bette’s talk with prompt Shane to go after the love of her life. Oh and LACOOP, keeping someone on the edge is not as much fun as taking them over it. (LOL)But them I’m sure you already know that. Great chapter.
I’m gald that their threesome has alerted Shane to her feelings for Carmen. Maybe this experience not only served as sex between the best of friends, but the door leading to Shane’s soul mate.
lacoop, I seem to have come late to the party. Had a day off, caught up. In an effort to give away my advancing age, I quote a ‘T Rex’ song from my youth: “You’re dirty sweet and you’re my girl”.
Man although the ex scene has been hot as hell I am still trying to process that they had a threesome with Shane. It’s not the threesome just that it was with a friend. Aside from that I am loving this story! This had potential to turn into some drama but I don’t beleive you will go there. Post Soon!
nicely done coop – glad they can talk! & you are continuing?
So thanks to Bette Shane might go try and reclaim Carmen–good for her. And hi praise from the one and only Bette Porter on her sexual prowess has to make her feel good–it is Bette after all.
Awesome! Thanks for letting Bette be Shane’s shoulder. I never liked Carmen. Could we possibly find Shane another true sole mate other than Carmen, PRETTY PLEASE!!!!
awesome chapter…glad to see that Bette was there for Shane just like Shane has been there for Bette. When she started talking about muscle memory…I thought she was gonna say something like when you hugged me Bette, my thigh muscles locked up like they were locking around your head as you….oh I’m sorry I just went off in my own little world…lol….please post soon.
Darlin Thank you so much for the most Amazing ride you took us on ….I would hate to see this story end but you knwo wht? What a fuckin ride love it love it love it
You know as much fun that the three of them had together, it takes Bette to break into Shane’s overwhelming grief over loosing Carman. Hopefully, Shane will do what Bette has suggested and then go after her woman.
1.) Bette and Tina secure in their relationship? Nah. Never happen.2.) Bette calling Shane by a bunch of pet names (‘sweetie, sweetheart, kiddo – kiddo?!) is out of character.3.) Writing script-style stage directions mid-dialogue is lame.
Good chapter. Good to see Bette and Shane have a talk and their friendship is awesom. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Well, coop, I’m happy that you have someone to share your imagination with, because a mind is a terrible thng to waste and so are multiple orgasms. ;-)
cool
Last orgasm, fireside?? What did I miss? Awesome story. Your sensitive ending wrapped up the hottest story I ever read! Thanks for the ride.
Wow what a great and amazing chapter, you really nailed the feelings and emotions in this one!!!!!……..I hope you will continue with this story, let B&T get little Angel home, I would love to see how the happy famiy is doing and how B&T are struggleling with their desire for eachother with a baby around LOL. And there are of course Shane, will she ever get Carmen back??? – you have to let us know :o))……..Do I have to beg???????
Hell, what the f*ck was that????I just read your whole story and I´m totally amazed. That´s really a great story! I love the way Tina and Bette care about Shane even in a sexual way.Awesome story line! Great!
I’m so glad that they were able to all talk through their feelings about what has happened. Though I’m not as convinced that Carmen and Shane belong together, I’ll go on for the ride if that’s your plan! You’ve made it a plausible thing, and I thank you for continuing this awesome story!
Excellent twist!! The threesome triggers Shane’s muscle memory and makes her crave for Carmen. Congrats are in order. You good…Can we please have more sex now?? (LOL)