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Drowning 18
Alice slowly started to wake and opened her eyes and found Cara sitting a few inches from her staring. Alice turned her head and saw that Dana was lying fully under the covers, head and all, lying on Alice. She started to groan from the noise and lifted her head from Alice and poked her head out from under the blankets.
Cara jumped back and screamed, not realizing there was someone else in the bed. The scream however did make sure that Alice and Dana were awake. Its ok, sweetie. Its just Aunt Dana. See. Alice said, pulling he covers down more to reveal Danas full face. Dana opened her eyes slowly and smiled at Cara, Hi sweetie.
Tina walked in the room, Im so sorry guys. She was excited to see you. Turning to Cara, Come on honey, lets give your aunts a few minutes to wake up.
But Mommy, Aunt Awice said I could wake her.
Alice looked up at the little girl, trying her best to smile, And you did such a good job at that. Now that Im awake, Ill come down in a few minutes and we can make pancakes.
OK. Bye! Cara said as she jumped off of the bed and ran out of the room. Tina turned to her friends before following her daughter out of the room, Im sorry guys. Take your time. Tina was smiling to herself left the room, glad to see them waking up together.
Dana looked over at Alice, her hair a tangled mess. Hi.
Alice smiled at Dana, Hi there. Ill never understand how you sleep totally under the covers. Id suffocate.
What? It feels safe. I like it. And since I lay on you when I do sleep like that, you should be happy, that way I dont steal the covers. You always yank the covers from me when I keep my head above the covers.
Thats because youre a blanket hog. Alice said smiling at Dana. She looked over at Dana who was also smiling, but it wasnt her real smile. You ok this morning, Dane?
Yeah, thank you for last night. Im sorry Im putting you through all of this.
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(54 votes, average: 4.46 out of 5)
I’m first! *Dances around* Can I just say how much I love that little girl? She’s so adorable, “Aunt Awice” so cute! Cant wait to see how she reacts to meeting Bette.
Between Cara meeting Bette and Tina being ‘Chris’, I can’t wait for the next chapter.
ALice and Dana in the begining just killed me! Sooo good!
This has got to be my fsv. fanfic ever! It’s awesome and it kinda incorperates all the best couples (danish, sharmen and bettina). Cara is a doll, can’t wait for bette to meet her! I hope you fix up all these broken realitionships soon, I don’t know if I can handle weeping like a baby again!
OMG – I was crying for like three pages! Hats off to you, luce! I love how involved the gang is in your story. And your original characters are so believable. You’re killing us AND Alice here –come on, what the flip has got Dana so freaked?! Post soon, i’m loving it.
“hot, hot, hot” to quote a one miss Leisha Hailey
Applause!! I think I have page two inscribed into my memory for all time now. Evil lucia keeping Alice on the edge of her seat with Dana’s big secret. ;-)
Superb!!!
Thank you.
The Alice and Dana was so touching…what’s up with Dana? Inquiring readers want to know.
Bette and Cara will be interesting. Julia and Chris…what’s the story there? I have a feeling that there is one.
Now I want pancakes.
Awww….so sweet and I *nearly* cried…numerous times…must be my stubborn qualities keeping it in…Love it!!!
I am just dying to find out what is going on in little Dana’s mind and heart.
I love it and I hope that dana speaks to alice soon and I also hope that they can sort though this as they are so good together please post soon
I like the way you have the rest of the group involved in the Danish story. I’m wondering what’s going to happen with all of them, but mostly wondering what’s going on with Dana. Loved the first scene, poor Alice. Please update soon (and your other fic).
K
great chapter. Can’t wait for lunch.
lucia- i am completely absorbed in this. that opening scene is just knee knockin, slack jaw good. what is going on with Dana?! really? what?? i too love how this tale is about the whole gang. the tina/bette/cara/robin/julia/CHRIS thing is juicy and fun.post soon. thanks!
That was great!! Cant wait to see whats next. Please please please post soon!
Great as always :) I’m afraid that Dana’s secret is something HUGE.. and Alice will freak out and.. but in the end I know (or hope, more likely) that there will be a happy DANISH ending :D
Awesome story! More please!!! Can’t wait!