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    Drowning 18

    Story written on June 29, 2005 by lucia.
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    The night isn’t over yet…just read!

     

    Dana laid herself down on top of Alice, forcing her way between Alices legs and began a smooth rhythm. Alices moved her hands across the brunettes back, her fingers softly pulling at the top of Danas shorts. Their continued kiss was growing in passion. It was no longer a simple kiss, but a kiss grown out of need. A kiss meant to last a lifetime, even if it all ended tonight.

     

    Alices emotions were over taking her. Her eyes, started to water, while staring into Danas beautiful blue eyes. She was lost in her, drowning. In an attempt to gain control, to not lose this moment to sadness and fear, she flipped Dana over so that she was on top of her. They won their struggle to keep their lips touching.

     

    Alice moved her hands across Danas stomach, stopping to circle her belly button, and let her hands drift lower to the rim of Danas shorts. She played with the fabric, teasing. Dana groaned into the kiss, Al, please.

     

    Somehow the words broke the spell that was clouding Alices mind. Unable to move her eyes from Danas, she simply closed her eyes and pulled away from the kiss, yet not moving from atop of Dana. Why Dane?

     

    Why what Al? What happened? Whats wrong? Dana looked nervously at Alice.

     

    This is a mistake. We shouldnt do this.

     

    But…

     

    No but. Dana, you moved out. We shouldnt do this. Tomorrow is going to come and nothing will have changed. Alice said softly, looking away from Dana, trying to hide the tears that were forming.

     

    Im sorry. It just felt so good, so right.

     

    Alice buried her head into Danas shoulder. It did, Alice said sadly. She went to roll off of Dana, who wouldnt let her.

     

    No, please, dont move. Just stay like that for a little bit. Dana pleaded, Im sorry, Al. I just keep hurting you. Im sorry.

     

    I know Dane. Its ok. And there were two of us here, not just you. Alice didnt want this night to end in crying and sadness. She needed it to be light. Just one more good night in what should have been a lifetime. Alice looked up at Dana and gave her a devilish grin, And I knew you were still asleep when you started kissing my neck. I could have just ignored it. You do that every time I put you to sleep.

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    Comments

    1. I’m first! *Dances around* Can I just say how much I love that little girl? She’s so adorable, “Aunt Awice” so cute! Cant wait to see how she reacts to meeting Bette.

    4. This has got to be my fsv. fanfic ever! It’s awesome and it kinda incorperates all the best couples (danish, sharmen and bettina). Cara is a doll, can’t wait for bette to meet her! I hope you fix up all these broken realitionships soon, I don’t know if I can handle weeping like a baby again!

    5. OMG – I was crying for like three pages! Hats off to you, luce! I love how involved the gang is in your story. And your original characters are so believable. You’re killing us AND Alice here –come on, what the flip has got Dana so freaked?! Post soon, i’m loving it.

    7. Applause!! I think I have page two inscribed into my memory for all time now. Evil lucia keeping Alice on the edge of her seat with Dana’s big secret. ;-)

    9. The Alice and Dana was so touching…what’s up with Dana? Inquiring readers want to know.
      Bette and Cara will be interesting. Julia and Chris…what’s the story there? I have a feeling that there is one.
      Now I want pancakes.

    12. I love it and I hope that dana speaks to alice soon and I also hope that they can sort though this as they are so good together please post soon

    13. I like the way you have the rest of the group involved in the Danish story. I’m wondering what’s going to happen with all of them, but mostly wondering what’s going on with Dana. Loved the first scene, poor Alice. Please update soon (and your other fic).

    15. lucia- i am completely absorbed in this. that opening scene is just knee knockin, slack jaw good. what is going on with Dana?! really? what?? i too love how this tale is about the whole gang. the tina/bette/cara/robin/julia/CHRIS thing is juicy and fun.post soon. thanks!

    17. Great as always :) I’m afraid that Dana’s secret is something HUGE.. and Alice will freak out and.. but in the end I know (or hope, more likely) that there will be a happy DANISH ending :D

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