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Drowning – 23
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“I’m ok. I just….I got overwhelmed. I had a lot to drink tonight, I’m still recovering from that.” Alice looked at the wall and then the ceiling and then the wall again. Pretty much anywhere she could that would avoid the intense stare she could feel.
“You’re sure?” Alice just nodded. “Good. I hate seeing you so sad, Al. It hurts me.” Dana raised her hand to Alice’s cheek and Alice flinched in response. Dana, oblivious to it’s meaning, just continued to reach out to Alice.
“Please stop Dana. It’s too hard, please.” Alice begged, pulling her face away again.
“Oh.” Dana said, obliging Alice’s request and pulled her hand back. “What are you doing here, Al? Not that I mind, I’m just surprised.”
“I needed to talk to you. Shane let me in and told me I could wait. She left to go somewhere.”
Dana moved herself further away from Alice on the couch and sat back. “What did you want to talk about?”
“Why?”
Dana didn’t answer, she was waiting for something more than the one word to go on.
“Why Dane? I want to understand why you did this and I don’t plan on leaving here until you explain this to me. I can’t go on waiting. It’s torture and it’s totally unfair of you to ask that of me.”
Dana took a deep breath and exhaled slowly. “I’m not sure what to say. We’ve spoken about this. We spoke last night. You said you’d wait.”
“Yeah, well I changed my mind. You aren’t the only one who can do that by the way.”
Dana flinched at the tone in Alice’s voice, “I didn’t change my mind.”
Alice let out a sardonic laugh, “You didn’t, huh? What the ***** do you call walking out on me and telling me it’s over? Since you had previously said that you loved me and wanted to spend your life with me and now you don’t, I’d call that changing your mind. I never took you for a fickle woman, Dana.”
Dana was taken aback by the anger in Alice’s words. She knew that the pleasantries of the last couple of days wasn’t going to last forever, but for some reason she just wasn’t ready for this. She wasn’t ready to see the anger in Alice’s eyes. She wasn’t ready to accept that her actions brought her full circle. She wasn’t ready to tell Alice the truth. She wanted a little more time. Just a little more time.
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I have finally caught up with your story, i’ve been reading for weeks., and what a chapter i eventually get to comment on. I am nearly speechless. WOW, WOW, WOW! <-I said nearly.
That was really really excellent – you know I love this story but that was definitely your best chapter. I particularly enjoyed the interaction with Alice and Bette/Robin. So like a drunk Alice would be!!!!!! Really looking forward to the next chapter – what is in the letter???………oh yeah and the sex scene was kinda hawt!!!
wow. that was great. i actually got a bit teary-eyed. i love danish and thank you for dana finally showing alice the letter. can’t wait for the next update. great job!
Noooooooooooooooooo what a way to leave it,grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, i hate cliffhangers, dont leave us hanging for too long, this chapter was wonderful, i hope Alice stays and does’nt go to W.D.C. You have got my head spinning..lol.
Thank you.
oi,dont leave us hanging here!!!! What an amazing chapter…wow
God you are good at dragging this out, and yet its always enough to pull us in for more. Of course, i cant wait for the next chapter so get a move on it. :) *****
lol “you work for IC”, O_o really? haha ok better post soon, I only forgive you ’cause the sex scene and all the argument was great!
Oooh… what’s in the letter? What’s in it that causes so much drama? Where’s the next chapter?
CCCCCUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMM OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN! update soon i’m sooooooooooo p’od that we didn’t get to see it yet! Ah! But that was fuckin’ awesome chapter! Update as soooon as you possibly can, Love it as always!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, You’re going to make us wait a week aren’t you. You can’t do this to me. I’m running out of food, my friends think I’ve left the country. All I can do is wait and check my computer. LOL Looking forward to your next chapter.
You just wouldn’t tell, I’m on the verge of pulling my hair out lol. That was wonderful, the sex was hot and emotional at the same time. Please, please update soon before I really go crazy.
betru2u checking in. OMG this chapter was incredible. I think you managed to trigger every single emotion I have. Yet, you still had to keep us waiting just a little longer for the big secret to be revealed LOL! Admit it, you work for IC. ;) I’ll be waiting patiently for the next round. Btw, the sex was hot!
CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP!
That’s all I was thinking when I read how you ended this. Luce, you’re driving me crazy here! I hope you’re happy that I was crying for most of this one too – even during the HOT sex scene! I complain, but you know I love the tease. (hey, my “skip-a-chapter” plan worked!)
Ok, I have spent the majority of the day and night reading all of the chapters to this story. This is an outstanding story! I love it, love it, love it! Your writing ability to tell a story is fantastic. You are awesome at describing scenes, you use direct quotes perfectly and grammatical it’s wonderful. Keep up the unbelievable great work! I cannot wait to read the next chapter and the next and the next, etc… I love it!
Finally something happened! I hate (and LOVE) your cliffhangers :D Danish can solve the stalker problem together! Hopefully you are not going to make us too long *fingers crossed*. *5*
Loved the pace of this chapter. And the cliffhanger is so perfect that this time I don’t mind it all, provided you post again soon, that is!
just found your fic here and good job! just when i thought i could know the real reason, u left it there…please update ASAP.. :)
Were are you. I’m a little worried haven’t seen anything from you anywhere, here or the media boards. I hope your OK. I know you’re from the US I just hope not the Gulf coast.