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Drowning – 23
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Before she consciously awoke, Dana heard Alice’s cries in her sleep. In her dreams, she took Alice in her arms and held her. She softly stroked Alice hair while whispering to her. Dana held Alice tight, tight enough for the blonde to know that she would always be safe with Dana, tight enough to know that she would always find Dana there, waiting to comfort her when she needed. Dana smiled into Alice hair as she held her, but the cries didn’t diminish, they grew louder. As Dana tried harder and harder to comfort Alice, she felt her body shake with the sobs that she couldn’t control. And Dana head’s shot up as she awoke.
She looked up at Alice and saw the tears streaming down her face. Dana moved to the couch, put her arms around Alice, and pulled her towards her. “Alice, what’s wrong?”
Alice didn’t move from within Dana’s arms. She buried her head deeper and continued to cry. The comfort she felt within Dana’s arms was at one moment both the safety that she so badly needed and the pain that forced the tears she could not control. She longed to feel safe in Dana’s arms. She longed for a time when she was too naive to ever believe that Dana could hurt her and that for as long as Dana held her Alice could hold on to the belief that no matter what happens, she will make it through. Sadly as quickly as that comfort came, it left again, and it was a crushing loss.
“I’m fine now Dana, thanks.” Alice said, her voice raw from tears. She pushed herself away from Dana and left herself sitting upright on the couch. She wiped her eyes, as though she could hide the tears from Dana, not wanting to show Dana that much pain. It wasn’t a very altruistic thought it was selfish. She didn’t want Dana to think she held that much power over her. Silly, right? As though she could hide the connection and the pain that came from severing that connection, but for the moment, that gave Alice a little strength. She needed that strength for the conversation she knew they needed to have.
“Are you sure you’re ok, Al? Can I do anything?” Dana asked, her voice small and concerned. She couldn’t move her eyes from Alice’s face.
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I have finally caught up with your story, i’ve been reading for weeks., and what a chapter i eventually get to comment on. I am nearly speechless. WOW, WOW, WOW! <-I said nearly.
That was really really excellent – you know I love this story but that was definitely your best chapter. I particularly enjoyed the interaction with Alice and Bette/Robin. So like a drunk Alice would be!!!!!! Really looking forward to the next chapter – what is in the letter???………oh yeah and the sex scene was kinda hawt!!!
wow. that was great. i actually got a bit teary-eyed. i love danish and thank you for dana finally showing alice the letter. can’t wait for the next update. great job!
Noooooooooooooooooo what a way to leave it,grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, i hate cliffhangers, dont leave us hanging for too long, this chapter was wonderful, i hope Alice stays and does’nt go to W.D.C. You have got my head spinning..lol.
Thank you.
oi,dont leave us hanging here!!!! What an amazing chapter…wow
God you are good at dragging this out, and yet its always enough to pull us in for more. Of course, i cant wait for the next chapter so get a move on it. :) *****
lol “you work for IC”, O_o really? haha ok better post soon, I only forgive you ’cause the sex scene and all the argument was great!
Oooh… what’s in the letter? What’s in it that causes so much drama? Where’s the next chapter?
CCCCCUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMM OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN! update soon i’m sooooooooooo p’od that we didn’t get to see it yet! Ah! But that was fuckin’ awesome chapter! Update as soooon as you possibly can, Love it as always!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, You’re going to make us wait a week aren’t you. You can’t do this to me. I’m running out of food, my friends think I’ve left the country. All I can do is wait and check my computer. LOL Looking forward to your next chapter.
You just wouldn’t tell, I’m on the verge of pulling my hair out lol. That was wonderful, the sex was hot and emotional at the same time. Please, please update soon before I really go crazy.
betru2u checking in. OMG this chapter was incredible. I think you managed to trigger every single emotion I have. Yet, you still had to keep us waiting just a little longer for the big secret to be revealed LOL! Admit it, you work for IC. ;) I’ll be waiting patiently for the next round. Btw, the sex was hot!
CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP!
That’s all I was thinking when I read how you ended this. Luce, you’re driving me crazy here! I hope you’re happy that I was crying for most of this one too – even during the HOT sex scene! I complain, but you know I love the tease. (hey, my “skip-a-chapter” plan worked!)
Ok, I have spent the majority of the day and night reading all of the chapters to this story. This is an outstanding story! I love it, love it, love it! Your writing ability to tell a story is fantastic. You are awesome at describing scenes, you use direct quotes perfectly and grammatical it’s wonderful. Keep up the unbelievable great work! I cannot wait to read the next chapter and the next and the next, etc… I love it!
Finally something happened! I hate (and LOVE) your cliffhangers :D Danish can solve the stalker problem together! Hopefully you are not going to make us too long *fingers crossed*. *5*
Loved the pace of this chapter. And the cliffhanger is so perfect that this time I don’t mind it all, provided you post again soon, that is!
just found your fic here and good job! just when i thought i could know the real reason, u left it there…please update ASAP.. :)
Were are you. I’m a little worried haven’t seen anything from you anywhere, here or the media boards. I hope your OK. I know you’re from the US I just hope not the Gulf coast.