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Alice suddenly shivered and burrowed further into the cushions of the couch. Dana grabbed a throw blanket and walked back to Alice. She knelt besides the couch and gently placed the blanket over Alice. She leaned in close enough to smell the alcohol on Alice’s breath. Dana softly kissed her cheek, sat down on the floor next to Alice, and continued to stare at her.
She brought her eyes to Alice’s lips, where that smile would form. Dana swore that if she thought back, she would be able to count each and every time she was blessed enough to kiss those lips. And that is how she thought of it, that she was blessed. It might take days and days to do it, but she remembered each kiss. To Dana, it was a gift, each kiss a gift. To be given the opportunity to kiss the woman you loved each and every day, who could get to do that and not think of it as a gift.
Dana loved her parents. She loved her family and though she grew up in a house that was filled with love, it was without passion. The only thing she could liken it to was a memory of seeing Fiddler on the Roof as a child and the song that Tevya sings to his wife, “Do you love me?” The song has a married couple, 25 years later, asking and acknowledging that they do in fact love each other. She had asked her mother why they didn’t know that before they got married, don’t you always marry the person you love. Sharon simply stated, “Not everyone has that opportunity.” So when she thinks of her parents, it isn’t the magic Hollywood love she pictures, it’s simple love and companionship. That was the home she grew up in. Not exactly a West Side Story kind of love and passion, but more like I’ve spent a lifetime with you, so I got used to you kind of love. It’s a genuine affection, but lacking in that umph factor that makes each day different and a surprise, that lets you fight and make up because there is so much emotion and passion that logic just doesn’t work anymore. So for Dana, that she got to kiss Alice every day was a blessing, she got the West Side Story kind of love. She just hoped for a different ending.
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I have finally caught up with your story, i’ve been reading for weeks., and what a chapter i eventually get to comment on. I am nearly speechless. WOW, WOW, WOW! <-I said nearly.
That was really really excellent – you know I love this story but that was definitely your best chapter. I particularly enjoyed the interaction with Alice and Bette/Robin. So like a drunk Alice would be!!!!!! Really looking forward to the next chapter – what is in the letter???………oh yeah and the sex scene was kinda hawt!!!
wow. that was great. i actually got a bit teary-eyed. i love danish and thank you for dana finally showing alice the letter. can’t wait for the next update. great job!
Noooooooooooooooooo what a way to leave it,grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, i hate cliffhangers, dont leave us hanging for too long, this chapter was wonderful, i hope Alice stays and does’nt go to W.D.C. You have got my head spinning..lol.
Thank you.
oi,dont leave us hanging here!!!! What an amazing chapter…wow
God you are good at dragging this out, and yet its always enough to pull us in for more. Of course, i cant wait for the next chapter so get a move on it. :) *****
lol “you work for IC”, O_o really? haha ok better post soon, I only forgive you ’cause the sex scene and all the argument was great!
Oooh… what’s in the letter? What’s in it that causes so much drama? Where’s the next chapter?
CCCCCUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMM OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN! update soon i’m sooooooooooo p’od that we didn’t get to see it yet! Ah! But that was fuckin’ awesome chapter! Update as soooon as you possibly can, Love it as always!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, You’re going to make us wait a week aren’t you. You can’t do this to me. I’m running out of food, my friends think I’ve left the country. All I can do is wait and check my computer. LOL Looking forward to your next chapter.
You just wouldn’t tell, I’m on the verge of pulling my hair out lol. That was wonderful, the sex was hot and emotional at the same time. Please, please update soon before I really go crazy.
betru2u checking in. OMG this chapter was incredible. I think you managed to trigger every single emotion I have. Yet, you still had to keep us waiting just a little longer for the big secret to be revealed LOL! Admit it, you work for IC. ;) I’ll be waiting patiently for the next round. Btw, the sex was hot!
CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP!
That’s all I was thinking when I read how you ended this. Luce, you’re driving me crazy here! I hope you’re happy that I was crying for most of this one too – even during the HOT sex scene! I complain, but you know I love the tease. (hey, my “skip-a-chapter” plan worked!)
Ok, I have spent the majority of the day and night reading all of the chapters to this story. This is an outstanding story! I love it, love it, love it! Your writing ability to tell a story is fantastic. You are awesome at describing scenes, you use direct quotes perfectly and grammatical it’s wonderful. Keep up the unbelievable great work! I cannot wait to read the next chapter and the next and the next, etc… I love it!
Finally something happened! I hate (and LOVE) your cliffhangers :D Danish can solve the stalker problem together! Hopefully you are not going to make us too long *fingers crossed*. *5*
Loved the pace of this chapter. And the cliffhanger is so perfect that this time I don’t mind it all, provided you post again soon, that is!
just found your fic here and good job! just when i thought i could know the real reason, u left it there…please update ASAP.. :)
Were are you. I’m a little worried haven’t seen anything from you anywhere, here or the media boards. I hope your OK. I know you’re from the US I just hope not the Gulf coast.