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Drowning – 23
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Alice looked at Dana and in an instant an excess of emotions ran through her. Her initial instinct was happiness. After all these years, her favorite few seconds every day were still opening her eyes and seeing Dana. But as she lifted her head, the headache reminded her of the alcohol she drank, and the alcohol reminded her of her anger and the anger was instantly turned to sadness. It was so much easier to be angry when Dana wasn’t inches from her. Somehow, when in that proximity, she couldn’t hold on to the anger. Especially now, that Dana was asleep. Somehow the calm, peaceful look that took hold of Dana in sleep found a way to affect Alice. This has been one of the many benefits of her life with Dana. There was just no way to feel anxiety with Dana right there, all relaxed in sleep. It was Alice’s own personal version of Xanex.
Alice stole a long glance at the woman sleeping on the floor next to her. She was still dressed from dinner. Her head was resting on the edge of the couch, her hand still over Alice’s. Alice had no idea how long she had slept or how long Dana had been there. She vaguely remembered coming to Shane’s house, talking to Shane and Shane leaving. The details however, were a bit fuzzy.
Alice stayed where she was, though she hadn’t fallen asleep in the most comfortable position, she didn’t want to move and risk waking Dana. Instead she stayed where she was and tried to clear some of the cobwebs from her head and make her fuzzy memories clearer. Though she remembered coming to Shane’s house, she wasn’t entirely sure of the reason behind it.
She remembered the Jack Daniels, which led to remembering why she typically didn’t drink it to begin with, oops. Then she remembered Bette and Robin, which led to remembering what she had said to Bette and Robin, oops again. She couldn’t for the life of her remember what happened next. She replayed the night over and over and each time, a few more details came out, until she finally had enough to piece together a pretty good representation of the night.
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“Alice, so are you ready to talk to us yet?” Robin asked, “I hate seeing you look this sad.”
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I have finally caught up with your story, i’ve been reading for weeks., and what a chapter i eventually get to comment on. I am nearly speechless. WOW, WOW, WOW! <-I said nearly.
That was really really excellent – you know I love this story but that was definitely your best chapter. I particularly enjoyed the interaction with Alice and Bette/Robin. So like a drunk Alice would be!!!!!! Really looking forward to the next chapter – what is in the letter???………oh yeah and the sex scene was kinda hawt!!!
wow. that was great. i actually got a bit teary-eyed. i love danish and thank you for dana finally showing alice the letter. can’t wait for the next update. great job!
Noooooooooooooooooo what a way to leave it,grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, i hate cliffhangers, dont leave us hanging for too long, this chapter was wonderful, i hope Alice stays and does’nt go to W.D.C. You have got my head spinning..lol.
Thank you.
oi,dont leave us hanging here!!!! What an amazing chapter…wow
God you are good at dragging this out, and yet its always enough to pull us in for more. Of course, i cant wait for the next chapter so get a move on it. :) *****
lol “you work for IC”, O_o really? haha ok better post soon, I only forgive you ’cause the sex scene and all the argument was great!
Oooh… what’s in the letter? What’s in it that causes so much drama? Where’s the next chapter?
CCCCCUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMM OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN! update soon i’m sooooooooooo p’od that we didn’t get to see it yet! Ah! But that was fuckin’ awesome chapter! Update as soooon as you possibly can, Love it as always!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, You’re going to make us wait a week aren’t you. You can’t do this to me. I’m running out of food, my friends think I’ve left the country. All I can do is wait and check my computer. LOL Looking forward to your next chapter.
You just wouldn’t tell, I’m on the verge of pulling my hair out lol. That was wonderful, the sex was hot and emotional at the same time. Please, please update soon before I really go crazy.
betru2u checking in. OMG this chapter was incredible. I think you managed to trigger every single emotion I have. Yet, you still had to keep us waiting just a little longer for the big secret to be revealed LOL! Admit it, you work for IC. ;) I’ll be waiting patiently for the next round. Btw, the sex was hot!
CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP!
That’s all I was thinking when I read how you ended this. Luce, you’re driving me crazy here! I hope you’re happy that I was crying for most of this one too – even during the HOT sex scene! I complain, but you know I love the tease. (hey, my “skip-a-chapter” plan worked!)
Ok, I have spent the majority of the day and night reading all of the chapters to this story. This is an outstanding story! I love it, love it, love it! Your writing ability to tell a story is fantastic. You are awesome at describing scenes, you use direct quotes perfectly and grammatical it’s wonderful. Keep up the unbelievable great work! I cannot wait to read the next chapter and the next and the next, etc… I love it!
Finally something happened! I hate (and LOVE) your cliffhangers :D Danish can solve the stalker problem together! Hopefully you are not going to make us too long *fingers crossed*. *5*
Loved the pace of this chapter. And the cliffhanger is so perfect that this time I don’t mind it all, provided you post again soon, that is!
just found your fic here and good job! just when i thought i could know the real reason, u left it there…please update ASAP.. :)
Were are you. I’m a little worried haven’t seen anything from you anywhere, here or the media boards. I hope your OK. I know you’re from the US I just hope not the Gulf coast.