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Drowning – 23
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As she thought about how lucky she was to have Alice in her life, she realized that she has hurt Alice and left her the same way that her father had hurt and left her mother. It didn’t matter if it was West Side Story love or not, they both just ended anyway. In a matter of seconds, she went from thanking fate to cursing it and within a few more seconds, she was back to thanking it. When it came down to it, she did get to have the umph kind of love and in the time she was with Alice, she had experience more love, support and happiness than she had ever expected within her entire her life. So even if it had to end, she was given an unconditional love that couldn’t end, because could real love really end, even if the relationship did?
She would have that blanket of love to wrap herself in for the rest of her life. She would be sad because it was gone, but she could also be happy, because she had it to lose. People search their entire lives for ‘the one’. The person you were born to love, and Dana did believe that everyone had that one person. And she also knew she got to love hers. So even if she didn’t get to live it forever, doesn’t she deserve to be happy that she even got to experience it? Most people go through a break up and start dating again, searching yet again to find that person. Dana didn’t need to look anymore. She got to the love Alice and have Alice love her in return. What could ever make her angry at fate for that? Whether it ended or not, she got to love Alice, that was enough.
Dana was somewhat aware that she was fooling herself that she was trying to deceive her own heart by rationalizing a belief that because she was given the opportunity to love Alice, then she would be ok to lose that love. She was acutely conscious of the fact that a life without the blonde was a thought so saddening, that she refused to think it fully through. Instead she sat on the floor in front of the couch gazing at a woman that she had loved almost instantly. A woman she was too scared to love for so many years, a woman who had later fulfilled so many of Dana’s dreams, a woman who allowed Dana to believe that life was good. So instead of acknowledging how sad her life would soon become, she lightly placed her hand over Alice’s and just stared at her. Enjoying something that for so long was a staple in her life like water and breathing but that would soon go away. That was how she fell asleep and that was exactly how Alice found Dana a little while later when she woke up.
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I have finally caught up with your story, i’ve been reading for weeks., and what a chapter i eventually get to comment on. I am nearly speechless. WOW, WOW, WOW! <-I said nearly.
That was really really excellent – you know I love this story but that was definitely your best chapter. I particularly enjoyed the interaction with Alice and Bette/Robin. So like a drunk Alice would be!!!!!! Really looking forward to the next chapter – what is in the letter???………oh yeah and the sex scene was kinda hawt!!!
wow. that was great. i actually got a bit teary-eyed. i love danish and thank you for dana finally showing alice the letter. can’t wait for the next update. great job!
Noooooooooooooooooo what a way to leave it,grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, i hate cliffhangers, dont leave us hanging for too long, this chapter was wonderful, i hope Alice stays and does’nt go to W.D.C. You have got my head spinning..lol.
Thank you.
oi,dont leave us hanging here!!!! What an amazing chapter…wow
God you are good at dragging this out, and yet its always enough to pull us in for more. Of course, i cant wait for the next chapter so get a move on it. :) *****
lol “you work for IC”, O_o really? haha ok better post soon, I only forgive you ’cause the sex scene and all the argument was great!
Oooh… what’s in the letter? What’s in it that causes so much drama? Where’s the next chapter?
CCCCCUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMM OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN! update soon i’m sooooooooooo p’od that we didn’t get to see it yet! Ah! But that was fuckin’ awesome chapter! Update as soooon as you possibly can, Love it as always!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, You’re going to make us wait a week aren’t you. You can’t do this to me. I’m running out of food, my friends think I’ve left the country. All I can do is wait and check my computer. LOL Looking forward to your next chapter.
You just wouldn’t tell, I’m on the verge of pulling my hair out lol. That was wonderful, the sex was hot and emotional at the same time. Please, please update soon before I really go crazy.
betru2u checking in. OMG this chapter was incredible. I think you managed to trigger every single emotion I have. Yet, you still had to keep us waiting just a little longer for the big secret to be revealed LOL! Admit it, you work for IC. ;) I’ll be waiting patiently for the next round. Btw, the sex was hot!
CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP!
That’s all I was thinking when I read how you ended this. Luce, you’re driving me crazy here! I hope you’re happy that I was crying for most of this one too – even during the HOT sex scene! I complain, but you know I love the tease. (hey, my “skip-a-chapter” plan worked!)
Ok, I have spent the majority of the day and night reading all of the chapters to this story. This is an outstanding story! I love it, love it, love it! Your writing ability to tell a story is fantastic. You are awesome at describing scenes, you use direct quotes perfectly and grammatical it’s wonderful. Keep up the unbelievable great work! I cannot wait to read the next chapter and the next and the next, etc… I love it!
Finally something happened! I hate (and LOVE) your cliffhangers :D Danish can solve the stalker problem together! Hopefully you are not going to make us too long *fingers crossed*. *5*
Loved the pace of this chapter. And the cliffhanger is so perfect that this time I don’t mind it all, provided you post again soon, that is!
just found your fic here and good job! just when i thought i could know the real reason, u left it there…please update ASAP.. :)
Were are you. I’m a little worried haven’t seen anything from you anywhere, here or the media boards. I hope your OK. I know you’re from the US I just hope not the Gulf coast.