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Drowning – 23
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Alice was still mulling over Bette’s words when a though struck her. In a small voice she began to speak, “But Bette, what if I don’t want to know why? What if Dana was right and this isn’t something I can understand? What if whatever it is that is making her act like this is bad? I mean, I never really thought of that. I kept thinking she was just being scared again, that something spooked her, but what if that isn’t it at all? What am I doing to do? It’s bad enough to think that your girlfriend can just walk away, I don’t know if I can handle it if it’s worse than that.”
Bette seemed to be weighing her options before speaking. She nodded her head as she listened to Alice and took a few seconds to speak after Alice had finished, “Then you’ll know, Al. Isn’t that a good thing? Whatever it is, you deserve to know about. More than that, it’s your right to know. For her to just change your entire life with no valid explanation is absolutely unacceptable. It’ll leave you with doubts forever and you’ll never be able to fully move on. No matter what, you deserve the truth and I think you need to demand it.”
“Demand? How do you suggest I do that? Just march over to Shane’s and demand that she talk to me? You know Dana, she’ll just hole up and shut herself down.”
“Then turn her back on, Alice. It really is simple, what she is doing is wrong. You have been through too much together for you to just sit back and let her make all the decisions and you not even know that why any decisions need to be made at all.” Bette was getting angry and it was noticeable. The strain in her voice was unmistakable and her hands were gesticulating wildly over the table. “I’m sorry to say it, but I am getting quite angry with our little Dana as we sit here talking about this.”
Robin quietly agreed, “You know, Alice, I think she has a point. Look at us. We love each other we both know that. But we have hit a ceiling with our relationship and without resolution regarding Tina, who knows what that’ll bring. That situation is different, the why was never in question. But they never spoke they never resolved anything. I can’t speak for Tina, but Bette has been in a holding pattern for years.”
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I have finally caught up with your story, i’ve been reading for weeks., and what a chapter i eventually get to comment on. I am nearly speechless. WOW, WOW, WOW! <-I said nearly.
That was really really excellent – you know I love this story but that was definitely your best chapter. I particularly enjoyed the interaction with Alice and Bette/Robin. So like a drunk Alice would be!!!!!! Really looking forward to the next chapter – what is in the letter???………oh yeah and the sex scene was kinda hawt!!!
wow. that was great. i actually got a bit teary-eyed. i love danish and thank you for dana finally showing alice the letter. can’t wait for the next update. great job!
Noooooooooooooooooo what a way to leave it,grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, i hate cliffhangers, dont leave us hanging for too long, this chapter was wonderful, i hope Alice stays and does’nt go to W.D.C. You have got my head spinning..lol.
Thank you.
oi,dont leave us hanging here!!!! What an amazing chapter…wow
God you are good at dragging this out, and yet its always enough to pull us in for more. Of course, i cant wait for the next chapter so get a move on it. :) *****
lol “you work for IC”, O_o really? haha ok better post soon, I only forgive you ’cause the sex scene and all the argument was great!
Oooh… what’s in the letter? What’s in it that causes so much drama? Where’s the next chapter?
CCCCCUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMM OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN! update soon i’m sooooooooooo p’od that we didn’t get to see it yet! Ah! But that was fuckin’ awesome chapter! Update as soooon as you possibly can, Love it as always!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, You’re going to make us wait a week aren’t you. You can’t do this to me. I’m running out of food, my friends think I’ve left the country. All I can do is wait and check my computer. LOL Looking forward to your next chapter.
You just wouldn’t tell, I’m on the verge of pulling my hair out lol. That was wonderful, the sex was hot and emotional at the same time. Please, please update soon before I really go crazy.
betru2u checking in. OMG this chapter was incredible. I think you managed to trigger every single emotion I have. Yet, you still had to keep us waiting just a little longer for the big secret to be revealed LOL! Admit it, you work for IC. ;) I’ll be waiting patiently for the next round. Btw, the sex was hot!
CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP!
That’s all I was thinking when I read how you ended this. Luce, you’re driving me crazy here! I hope you’re happy that I was crying for most of this one too – even during the HOT sex scene! I complain, but you know I love the tease. (hey, my “skip-a-chapter” plan worked!)
Ok, I have spent the majority of the day and night reading all of the chapters to this story. This is an outstanding story! I love it, love it, love it! Your writing ability to tell a story is fantastic. You are awesome at describing scenes, you use direct quotes perfectly and grammatical it’s wonderful. Keep up the unbelievable great work! I cannot wait to read the next chapter and the next and the next, etc… I love it!
Finally something happened! I hate (and LOVE) your cliffhangers :D Danish can solve the stalker problem together! Hopefully you are not going to make us too long *fingers crossed*. *5*
Loved the pace of this chapter. And the cliffhanger is so perfect that this time I don’t mind it all, provided you post again soon, that is!
just found your fic here and good job! just when i thought i could know the real reason, u left it there…please update ASAP.. :)
Were are you. I’m a little worried haven’t seen anything from you anywhere, here or the media boards. I hope your OK. I know you’re from the US I just hope not the Gulf coast.