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Drowning – 23
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“If that was her only reason for doing that, then why did she pull away from me when I went to hug her hello?”
“Are you sure she really pulled away? You have to be pretty sensitive right now, maybe you just read it wrong.”
“Do you seriously think I can’t read Dana after all of these years. I’m telling you, she recoiled, like, like, like” Alice responded, “Like I stung her or something. It was an actual flinch! Fine, so she doesn’t want to be with me anymore. But, how did I become so repulsive to her? It was like she couldn’t stand to be touched by me.” Her voice began to break, betraying the pain she had been trying to hide all night.
Bette moved her chair closer to Alice and placed her arm around her shoulder. “I’m sorry, Al. Maybe she is just having a hard time too and being too close to you is just too hard for her.”
“Ha! That is so not the problem.”
“How do you know that isn’t it?”
“Because, if I hadn’t stopped it, we would have had ***** last night. And let me tell you it would have been some good *****.” Alice answered, a wicked grin forming as she thought about the night before.
“No details, Alice, please.”
“Right. Sorry.”
“But Alice, if she wanted to be with you yesterday, then wouldn’t it mean that you were wrong about why she pulled away from you?”
Alice sat quietly. She had an intense look on her face as though she was pondering a deep philosophical question, when in actuality she was looking for an answer to prove her own theory, hating it when Bette proved her wrong. Her eyes lit up as she answered, “See, push-pull, push-pull. No wonder I’m confused. She is like two people. And I do not like this second chick.”
Robin had been quiet throughout most of the conversation, “Alice? You say she keeps doing this push-pull thing right?”
“Yeah.”
“Well then don’t let her.”
“Thanks, I wouldn’t have come up with that gem on my own.” She reached down and took another sip of her drink, “Sorry Robin, on edge.”
“It’s ok. I know this is rough. It isn’t like I’ve been a barrel of laughs lately.”
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I have finally caught up with your story, i’ve been reading for weeks., and what a chapter i eventually get to comment on. I am nearly speechless. WOW, WOW, WOW! <-I said nearly.
That was really really excellent – you know I love this story but that was definitely your best chapter. I particularly enjoyed the interaction with Alice and Bette/Robin. So like a drunk Alice would be!!!!!! Really looking forward to the next chapter – what is in the letter???………oh yeah and the sex scene was kinda hawt!!!
wow. that was great. i actually got a bit teary-eyed. i love danish and thank you for dana finally showing alice the letter. can’t wait for the next update. great job!
Noooooooooooooooooo what a way to leave it,grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, i hate cliffhangers, dont leave us hanging for too long, this chapter was wonderful, i hope Alice stays and does’nt go to W.D.C. You have got my head spinning..lol.
Thank you.
oi,dont leave us hanging here!!!! What an amazing chapter…wow
God you are good at dragging this out, and yet its always enough to pull us in for more. Of course, i cant wait for the next chapter so get a move on it. :) *****
lol “you work for IC”, O_o really? haha ok better post soon, I only forgive you ’cause the sex scene and all the argument was great!
Oooh… what’s in the letter? What’s in it that causes so much drama? Where’s the next chapter?
CCCCCUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMM OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN! update soon i’m sooooooooooo p’od that we didn’t get to see it yet! Ah! But that was fuckin’ awesome chapter! Update as soooon as you possibly can, Love it as always!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, You’re going to make us wait a week aren’t you. You can’t do this to me. I’m running out of food, my friends think I’ve left the country. All I can do is wait and check my computer. LOL Looking forward to your next chapter.
You just wouldn’t tell, I’m on the verge of pulling my hair out lol. That was wonderful, the sex was hot and emotional at the same time. Please, please update soon before I really go crazy.
betru2u checking in. OMG this chapter was incredible. I think you managed to trigger every single emotion I have. Yet, you still had to keep us waiting just a little longer for the big secret to be revealed LOL! Admit it, you work for IC. ;) I’ll be waiting patiently for the next round. Btw, the sex was hot!
CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP!
That’s all I was thinking when I read how you ended this. Luce, you’re driving me crazy here! I hope you’re happy that I was crying for most of this one too – even during the HOT sex scene! I complain, but you know I love the tease. (hey, my “skip-a-chapter” plan worked!)
Ok, I have spent the majority of the day and night reading all of the chapters to this story. This is an outstanding story! I love it, love it, love it! Your writing ability to tell a story is fantastic. You are awesome at describing scenes, you use direct quotes perfectly and grammatical it’s wonderful. Keep up the unbelievable great work! I cannot wait to read the next chapter and the next and the next, etc… I love it!
Finally something happened! I hate (and LOVE) your cliffhangers :D Danish can solve the stalker problem together! Hopefully you are not going to make us too long *fingers crossed*. *5*
Loved the pace of this chapter. And the cliffhanger is so perfect that this time I don’t mind it all, provided you post again soon, that is!
just found your fic here and good job! just when i thought i could know the real reason, u left it there…please update ASAP.. :)
Were are you. I’m a little worried haven’t seen anything from you anywhere, here or the media boards. I hope your OK. I know you’re from the US I just hope not the Gulf coast.