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    Everything and Nothing: 15.) Sur la Table

    Story written on April 21, 2005 by november.
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    “She opens her eyes as the final wave of it hits her, looks into my eyes as it takes her, and that look resonates in my mind every second of every day for the next week. And I can’t say why. Except that sex is no longer just sex, and right now I can’t remember how it was ever less.”

    Well, I wanted to break it off because of my business relationship with Steve, and because I had this weird friendship thing going with the daughter, cause he asked me to hang out with her.

    Steve is the husband?

    Yeah. She drags her fingers through my hair, checking that it is straight, then unclips another section and starts cutting again. But Cherie didnt want to end it, and truthfully, I didnt want to either, so I didnt push.

    You guys were serious?

    Yeah, kinda. It was weird, because she was married. Keep your head down.

    Sorry.

    Sokay. So one day I was hanging out with Clea, the daughter, and Clea made a move like she was going to kiss me. I stopped her, explained that I was involved with someone, but I dont think she ever got that. She must have told Steve and Cherie that we had something going on, which we didnt, and Steve was pissed, and Cherie was livid, thinking I was ***** her daughter as well as her.

    *****. ***** drama, hello.

    Really. So I went to Cherie and told her how it was, and she believed me, but then Clea walked in and saw us together, and that was the end of it. and I tried to talk to her at this exhibit of Bettes, but Steve came up and threatened to kill me if I ever went near either of them.

    I gasp. Kill? Shane? Alice has told me this before, but I didnt think it was literal. Hearing Shane retell it, I can believe it. Please tell me youre kidding.

    Nope.

    Oh my god. What if he saw that scene at the…

    I think he did. I saw him when I was walking out. He saw that I was running in the opposite direction, so I think Im safe.

    You think? Oh my god, Shane, youre really freaking me out.

    It really freaked me out. But if he did really think that I was putting the moves on her, Id be dead by now.

    I feel a shiver that has nothing to do with the cold hair on my neck. Dont say stuff like that.

    Its true.

    I bite my lip. I dont like this at all.

    So you never saw her again?

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    1. Y’know, if it weren’t for one thing, this chapter would be the hottest damn thing. Seeing words like ‘cunt’ in the midst of a love scene just snaps me right out of the moment in a very unpleasant way – especially considering this scene is supposed to be a very meaningful one between Darah and Shane. But it’s happened in previous chapters, as well. It’s just way, way, way too harsh a word for this context, I think.

      And, darnit, I’ve got chair sex in ch 15 of Parallels. *grump*

    2. Thanks guys.

      Lilpink, especially, thank you. I’m sorry you aren’t down with the C-word.

      I’ve gotten a lot of crit for using it in the past and choosing to use it was always a tough choice, but I decided to because that’s the way I think of it. I find “pussy” to be prissy, “twat” to be vulgar, “sex” (when used too much) to be cheesy, and “core” to be victorian and euphemistic.

      Personally for me the C-word connotates a certain rawness that is sexy. Though it’s a widely used insult, I generally tend to find that more of a reflection of society than inherent in the word itself.

      Sorry if the use offended; I’m a big fan of your work and was glad to know you enjoyed it otherwise.

    3. I usually don’t mind the c-word – matter of fact, it’s one of my favorite cuss words ever – in fic, in certain contexts, it can be very effective, but like I said – it clashes really badly with the emotions you’re trying to evoke here, I think.

      There’s no need to use euphemisms, though. I mean, I don’t use ‘core’ or ‘twat’ or ‘pussy’ or anything like that in my fics. I do use ‘sex’ but very sparingly. Usually, it doesn’t take much to give people a fairly clear idea of what’s going on without making it all about body parts and anatomy and the semantics of such. Because that’s usually not what the love scenes in Parallels are about, y’know?

    4. i really like the use of the c-word (i feel weird writing it like that but don’t wanna offend anyone). i find it honest and sexy. personally when i read your sex scenes they flow for me and i honestly don’t notice the words you use, whereas with some other fictions on this site i piss myself laughing evertime i get to “love canal” which seems to be extremely popular. yeah so, uhh, just wanted to say there are different ways of writing sex scenes that are not “just sex”, and i like your detail november and the way you wrote this.

    5. Exceptional dialogue writing, and the addition of the rabbit made it so much more real. And the sex really isn’t just sex anymore. Amazing chapter, I’m SURE you had a real good time writing that one.

    7. Can’t remember every having just sex, All loving. that was an excellent chapter. Hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it Thanks

    10. Thank you asrai, that means a lot to me. I mean, when you think of it to describe your own anatomy, it can only be so offensive. I was feeling bad though, so I’m glad to know I didn’t alienate everyone. Thanks for speaking up. :)

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