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    Everything and Nothing: 15.) Sur la Table

    Story written on April 21, 2005 by november.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53369
    Author Notes:

    “She opens her eyes as the final wave of it hits her, looks into my eyes as it takes her, and that look resonates in my mind every second of every day for the next week. And I can’t say why. Except that sex is no longer just sex, and right now I can’t remember how it was ever less.”

    Whateva,” my mom says, the colloquialism sounding funny with her accent. Do you want us to come for your birthday?

    Yeah! Absolutely.

    Okay. Ill book our tickets today.

    Ill have the guest room fixed up by then. Oh, Im psyched. This is gonna be fun. I move my legs so Shane can sit on the couch.

    What would you like to do?

    I wanna have a big barbecue, with all my friends.

    In late September?

    ***** yes. This is California.

    Okay. One barbecue, coming right up.

    I laugh. So whats up with Navi?

    Hes been a grump lately. He started the post on the new film. He is driving me crazy.

    Well, smack him on the ***** and tell him to snap out of it.

    I did.

    Atta girl. I laugh. I have a bizarre relationship with my mother. Sometimes were so much like the Gilmore Girls its frightening.

    So, is Shane there right now?

    Yes. I roll my eyes. Here we go with the twenty questions. Weve been through this with half my friends, and every girlfriend Ive ever had.

    Is she pretty?

    Sickeningly.

    Is she nice?

    Yes, ma.

    Is she a good person?

    Yes, mother.

    Butch or a femme? she croons in that singsong tone she uses when shes pleased.

    Ma! I yell and Shane watches me, cutely baffled.

    Well, answer, Bibi.”

    Both. Neither. Its hard to describe. Youll find out soon enough.

    I cant wait.

    Me neither. Im gonna go, okay?

    Okay. Love you.

    You too.

    I hang up and look at Shane. Sorry.

    No problem. Why were you yelling at your mom?

    She was giving me the third degree.

    You told your mom to smack some guys *****?

    My step dad. Hes being all premenstrual and ***** over this movie hes editing.

    I cant believe you talk to your mom like that.

    I love my mom. Were cool. Thats how we interact.

    She shrugs. That is cool.

    Do you ever talk to your mom?

    No. she says, with a look in her eyes that makes me regret I said it. No. We dont really have contact.

    Thats too bad. Or not, I guess, depending on your situation.

    Her mouth twitches, then she speaks after a long second. She was never around so I dont miss her.

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    1. Y’know, if it weren’t for one thing, this chapter would be the hottest damn thing. Seeing words like ‘cunt’ in the midst of a love scene just snaps me right out of the moment in a very unpleasant way – especially considering this scene is supposed to be a very meaningful one between Darah and Shane. But it’s happened in previous chapters, as well. It’s just way, way, way too harsh a word for this context, I think.

      And, darnit, I’ve got chair sex in ch 15 of Parallels. *grump*

    2. Thanks guys.

      Lilpink, especially, thank you. I’m sorry you aren’t down with the C-word.

      I’ve gotten a lot of crit for using it in the past and choosing to use it was always a tough choice, but I decided to because that’s the way I think of it. I find “pussy” to be prissy, “twat” to be vulgar, “sex” (when used too much) to be cheesy, and “core” to be victorian and euphemistic.

      Personally for me the C-word connotates a certain rawness that is sexy. Though it’s a widely used insult, I generally tend to find that more of a reflection of society than inherent in the word itself.

      Sorry if the use offended; I’m a big fan of your work and was glad to know you enjoyed it otherwise.

    3. I usually don’t mind the c-word – matter of fact, it’s one of my favorite cuss words ever – in fic, in certain contexts, it can be very effective, but like I said – it clashes really badly with the emotions you’re trying to evoke here, I think.

      There’s no need to use euphemisms, though. I mean, I don’t use ‘core’ or ‘twat’ or ‘pussy’ or anything like that in my fics. I do use ‘sex’ but very sparingly. Usually, it doesn’t take much to give people a fairly clear idea of what’s going on without making it all about body parts and anatomy and the semantics of such. Because that’s usually not what the love scenes in Parallels are about, y’know?

    4. i really like the use of the c-word (i feel weird writing it like that but don’t wanna offend anyone). i find it honest and sexy. personally when i read your sex scenes they flow for me and i honestly don’t notice the words you use, whereas with some other fictions on this site i piss myself laughing evertime i get to “love canal” which seems to be extremely popular. yeah so, uhh, just wanted to say there are different ways of writing sex scenes that are not “just sex”, and i like your detail november and the way you wrote this.

    5. Exceptional dialogue writing, and the addition of the rabbit made it so much more real. And the sex really isn’t just sex anymore. Amazing chapter, I’m SURE you had a real good time writing that one.

    7. Can’t remember every having just sex, All loving. that was an excellent chapter. Hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it Thanks

    10. Thank you asrai, that means a lot to me. I mean, when you think of it to describe your own anatomy, it can only be so offensive. I was feeling bad though, so I’m glad to know I didn’t alienate everyone. Thanks for speaking up. :)

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