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Finale – Frozen Beginning
“And what? What if Henry touched me?” She declared spitefully.
Tina realised that she suddenly had the upper hand and relaxed a little. Bette had no right to dictate how she should live her life and even less the right to enter her house without her permission.
“He better not have.” Bette warned. Her voice was just a murmur, akin to the low rumble rolling over the land before thunder during a storm. The financier shot across the room and took a seat next to Tina. The decorator jumped back, hitting the armrest with her back in the process. She was determined to avoid all contact with the brunette but Bette reached over and captured a lock of her hair slowly wrapping it around her finger.
“I’m not like those… men, who once they have their deed done…run never to be heard from again.”
Tina sat rod straight determined to not let Bette’s sensual touch unnerve her. Her heart was drumming loudly in her ears and she was certain it could be heard outside her skin.
“What does it matter to you?” It’s not like we’re together Bette. I do whatever I want with whomever I want! Maybe you’d consider it normal to play the field while I’d wallow alone thinkin….” Tina stop just in time avoiding confessing how much the financier occupied her lonely thoughts.
“I do not play the field…” Bette spoke softly.
A few seconds of silence fell between them. It seemed to last an eternity before Tina exclaimed throwing a stern look in Bette’s direction.
“Is that right? Kelly the sultry civil engineer who ‘makes an impact wherever she goes’! Candace, the carpenter who would be such a ‘perfect professional fit’!”
“Mere distractions….”
Tina could not believe her ears and sat staring at the brunette with eyes and mouth wide opened. Never had Tina felt so antagonised and before she had time to think, her hand flew up and connected with a sharp stinging slap on the financier’s cheek. The loud smack echoed in the high-ceilinged room.
“Oh My God… I’m so sorry!” Tina exclaimed a split second later looking on horrified as Bette cheek grew crimson red in the perfect shape of her hand. “Did I hurt you? Let me get some ice…”
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Bibi28 says
So good to see a update! But did it had to be the last one :-(
But the promise you made to return is making me happy.
Bette totally deserved that slap, i certainly could feel and hear it.
Awesome story! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
dunnthat says
A finale i enjoyed reading.BETTE/TINA together and a little one,thanks .
kiwipit says
Thanks for giving us this wonderful story! I like how Bette finally dropps her slightly arrogant behaviour and sacastic remarks and finally confesses her feelings to Tina. Although she already kind of did that at the end of chap. 8, didn’t she? I love the elevator scene when Bette whispers “I cannot forget” to Tina. :-)
I’m a little sad that FB has come to an end but I’m happy to read that you already work on new stories. I think you are a very talented writer and I enjoy your stories immensely.
els73 says
I enjoyed you story. Thankyou. I’m happy that they are together. Thx for a great end. can’t wait for your new storie
mscully says
Damn life! Unfortunately this story came to an end ..
Bette finally opened her heart to Tina, is
that slap, ours! Bette well it deserved.
It was a perfect end with pregnant Tina.
Congratulations for this NC 17 was wonderful !.
You are an excellent writer.
The complete constellation.
SassyGran says
Thanks so much for finishing this story Kins, I’ve loved it from the start :)
Look forward to more of your great posts with my favourite couple :)
wkm says
Loved this story. Sorry to see it end but looking forward to more stories. Thanks for giving me many enjoyable hours
dazzlecarol says
Aaaaw so pleased it all worked out in the end.At one point there I thought
Tina was going to rebel and tell Bette where to go.Loved the slap.Bette was so arrogant at times.So full of herself..but in the end she managed to sweet talk Tina
and profess her true feelings for her.
A lovely NC17 ending.Lovingly told.
Great last chapter Kins my dear friend.A true Tibette ending…xx C
cellphone48 says
Thanks! Sorry to see it end but happy to get another story soon! Be Blessed! PPS
meloveslu says
Yeah, I’m thinking you didn’t tag me with this posting since my 44 page vs. your 9 page and 18,000+ written word vs. your 3,800 written word post is no fair trade.
You’ve got more work to do, my dear. I’ll wait patiently for those 2 new docs you’ve got in the works.
OneStorm1 says
Loved every word of this fic, hope to read more of your work soon :)
Tanishaa says
Another master piece! Thankyou Kins!! Love your writing. Keep going please :)
Martha10 says
I’m really sad to see this end, this was a portrayal of Bette and Tina that always had us wanting more. A pity we didn’t get to see more of their life together. Maybe we could have a few snippets of their life, before and after their marriage and pregnancy? Here’s to hoping! And even if that’s not possible, I’m glad to know you have other stories in the works! I’ll read anything you write. :)
RobbieRob says
So so good kins! Loved it! Especially the very end. I’m a sucker for babies! Haha!
Jamie says
I loved every bit of this story! Beautifully written with such an amazing storyline. I had a feeling there was a connection between Bette and Tina’s father and your story was brilliant in how it came together. I love how he knew there was something between even though he didn’t say and how persistent Bette was. Absolutely brilliant! And the ending perfect!