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    Fix You…. Chapter 1

    Story written on September 6, 2006 by brunettegirl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=62352
    Author Notes:

    Bette gets teamed up on; Alice has good news; Dana comes to LA but can’t catch a break; Alice and Shane have lunch; Dana and Alice talk

    Prologue– 

    “Will I play tennis again?”  Dana managed to croak out through dry lips.

    “I don’t know.  It’s too early to tell yet.”  Dana was staring intently at the doctor and realized with a start that while his words were hopeful his eyes told her he didn’t believe she would live, much less compete again.  With this realization Dana slipped into unconsciousness as doctors and nurses frantically continued to work on the athlete’s body in a brave attempt to save her life.

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    Chapter 1

     

    “No.  Not again.  You want to throw a party have it at your place.  You want to go swimming go dunk your head in your bathtub.  You’re not having another party at Tina’s and my house.”  Bette said to Shane.  Bette, Tina, Shane, and Carmen were all sitting around their usual table for breakfast.  Alice had yet to arrive so the four were relaxing as they sipped their drinks.

     

    “Come on Bette.  You’re still mad about that last party?  It’s why you have a pool- for people to swim in.”  Shane said reasonably.

     

    “Those women were all NAKED Shane!”  When several heads from neighboring tables turned to look at Bette she quickly lowered her voice but continued to berate Shane.  “There were two dozen strange women skinny dipping in my pool because of you!”

     

    Shane looked at Bette with raised eyebrows.

     

    “Most of them were having sex in it!”  Bette hissed.

     

    Shane grinned.

     

    “The police came!”  Bette’s face was a deep shade of red that Shane had rarely seen.  While she was becoming fascinated by its color she knew it was time to stop her goading as Bette was fast approaching the stage where she strangled Shane in a public place.

     

    “Okay okay.  I’m sorry about that.  I’ll pay to have your pool cleaned.  When I said party I actually just meant us- the family.  I thought it would be nice if we had a BBQ at your place this weekend.  I’ll even grill.”  Shane smiled at Bette sweetly.

     

    “Babe, that does sound like fun.  It’ll be a nice welcome home for Jenny when she gets here.”  Tina offered, kissing Bette while she winked at Shane.

     

    “And I’ll provide the meats!  Come on Baby Sis.  You know you want to.”  Kit said as she swept by to drop off refills of their drinks.

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    1. PICKLES O.o Hahahahahaha Thats a good one LOL and this one ‘Alice said something about Dana having had better been run over by a herd of Hippos.’ OMFG! You’re hilarious! Please post another instalment very soon!

    3. “She was really not excited to talk to the woman who had called her a buttplug.” lol that was so funny! glad you had a good trip – i’m working on an update at the minute so hopefully there’ll be one ready soon! that was a great chapter – can’t wait to find out what happens when Alice and Dana finally meet up! :)

    4. OMG I was sure I was going to die from laughter on the whole Ms. Pickles part, that was an awsome chapter. Poor Dana has it rough, first the car then the stairs, lol thanks for the post, looking forward to the next chapter!

    5. It sounds like Dana’s 5 hour plane ride with her legs aching and her Mom ending her one sided conversation, is something that you recently went through ? Is that the experience you referred to in your comment? LOL! Very funny stuff with Alice Pickles and the jab at Jenny boring Gabby to death with a story about flashlight and a zebra, made me crack up! Keep up the great work.

    7. oh my god! i don’t think i’ve ever laughed that hard reading a fanfic before! alice pickles?! run over by a hippo?! buttplug?! hilarious!!! the whole chapter was great, not just the humor! looking forward to the journey you have in store for us.

    9. I’m still LMFAO. Miss Pickles. Would that be dill, sweet, or butter? On the Jenny front, just remember there’s a fine line between parody and scorn, (not that I personally mind if you cross that line). And the thing with Alice and the animals…OMG, you are on a roll! What did they feed you in that mysterious third world country with no internet access? Update soon!

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