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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 47

    Story written on June 16, 2005 by OCD.
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    Dr. Berry stood and walked over to Tina.  Reaching out her hand, Tina took it and stood.  Come with me then Tina.  Come with me and you will see for your self, Dr. Berry said with tears in her own eyes now.  Tina reached behind her and grabbed Kits hand.

     

    Entering Bettes room Tina broke down at the sight of her beloved wife.  Not again, not my Bette, Tina cried.  Dr. Berry helped Tina over to the chair next to Bettes bed as the nurse stepped out of the way.  Kit stood behind Tina holding onto her shoulders.  Tina reached out and gently took Bettes hand cradled into her own.  Tina sweetly pressed her lips against the back of Bettes hand and whispered.  I love you, Bette.  Tina felt Bettes hand squeeze back as she said this.  Tina looked up to see the most loving eyes staring back at her.

     

    Bette:  I love you more. 

     

    Tina:  How are you feeling?

     

    Bette:  Like I got the ***** beat out of me.

     

    Tina:  Yea Id say you lost that one.  But, you won the most important fight of all. 

     

    Bette:  I did, didnt I?  I saw you Tina.  I saw you and the babies.  There was no way in ***** I was leaving you baby.  I held on to that imagine.  I’m going to be just fine.  No worries, ok.  Ill be out of here in no time.  Back home where I belong with my family.

     

    Tina:  Bette I  I am so sorry I thought it was you.  I was so afraid you were going to hurt yourself.  I didnt know you knew it was Jennifer.  I thought it was

     

    Bette:  Ssshh.  Hey, its ok baby.  I would have thought it was me too if I didnt know better.  She looked so much like me I had almost forgot the difference until I heard what you said. 

     

    Tina:  What did I say that told you it was Jennifer?

     

    Bette:   Long brown curly hair.  Mine hasnt grown back out long yet baby.

     

    Tina:  Oh god Bette.  I didnt even notice that.  Baby I am so sorry.  Please  forgi.

     

    Bette:  There is nothing to forgive.  We are safe and this is really finally over.  I want to get back to a normal life Tina.  Watch my babies grow up and love the only woman I have ever loved. 

     

    Bette pulled Tina down to her lips and kissed her ever so sweetly.  I love you Tina,  Forever, I promise.

     

     

     

     

     

     

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    2. Holy shitting freak Tk! I knew it! Gah! I can’t say I knew it was Jen but I suspected damn it! Way to make us have a mini stroke though. Wow! Okay, now I’m off to listen to some Enya to calm my beating heart! Woo!

    6. WOW..just WOW…just un FUNCKING believeble..youre the best..Agatha OCD Cristie..lol..OMG i´m still in shock..very well done job and i hope only happy things for now i cant wait for next chapter..freaking amazing

    7. Thank goodness now I can get back to my sleep! I was waiting for this update the whole nite ! Awesome ! Great Job – I seriously think it was Jen but like I said, you are a great suspense writer and truly this is one good job. :D you deserve the awards – of all the stories here – yours is the one that I look for first to read – like I said before some of the others are good but its so predictable that you know its the same story whereas yours is totally different.

      Now, lets hope we can have an end to all the sufferings these two have gone through and no more, hospitals any more – pls ….:D

    10. you know my dog has this toy that she shakes all over and then chews on day after day… kinda resembles bette in some ways. I wonder what kind of insurance coverage she has.
      Keep up the drama and blood shed and pain and gosh Im so sadistic… but we all know drama keeps the readers happy!

    11. you really have a gift of creating suspense and the shock effect. i truly had no idea how this was going to turn out. truly a great chapter. My heart is still beating fast and mouth still wide open on who it turned out to be. there are truly no words to describe how great your writing is. eagerly anticipating the next one.

    12. The suspense is an EVEN BIGGER criminal than your Jennifer character. I had to go grab a couple of drinks while waiting for you to post.

      (Oy! What’s this numbing sensation on my left arm? …Aaakk!)

    13. Now that was some really SLICK stuff. I absolutely LOVED it and did not get that it was Jennifer until Bette entered the room with her. Of course in hind sight I now realize that she is the only new character that you did not fully incorporate more into the story and therefore she was expendable. But again I just LOVED this chapter and your writing. Please keep up the great work.

    17. OMG!!! There’s a twist if I ever saw one. I never expected Jennifer to be the rapist, I was sure it was Helena. Geeez you are really good. More Please

    21. All I can say TK right now is thank god I’m on pain meds. At this moment, I don’t have use of my left hand due to a fucking dog bite at work today, almost lost a finger. I knew it was Jennifer when tina said it was bette. TK what going to be next, you have taken me on an amazing ride so far, great fucking job. This is a awesome story, and I love every chapter.

    22. Whoa! What an intense and exciting story! I was on the verge of falling off my seat! Great job! This has to be one of the best chapters I have ever read! Two thumbs up for you!

    23. OMG…I almost stopped when Tina said it was Bette. Couldn’t take any more BUT I had to go on and darn was it worth it. I thought it was Whit or Helena, but Jennifer — that was truly GREAT. Pls. keep posting, but for God’s sake give Tina and Bette a break with all of the hospitals, surguries…at least for a while.

    24. Damn this is so amezing and excellent. I just don’t even think is was Jennifer, I thought is was Helena or even Dana, that just crazy, and now we know is jennifer and she gone thank god. Ok now let all of that drama go and let the love began. Post soon, thanks! Excellent and Bravo!

    25. this has got to be the best freakin fanfic i have ever read. oh my god oh my god oh my god. that is insane. BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO. excellent

    27. Damn I didn’t even think of Jennifer as a suspect, her absence made me forget all about her. You are really good. All these twist and turns are amazing. Good Job.

    28. That was FANTASTIC I forgot about how much Jenn looked like Bette. Great job I hope we have some happy times coming..Post soon great story!!!!

    30. OMG… you had me too.. i forgot the jennifer looked just like bette… but you could have killed her off too… no loss…love this story and i would hate to see you end it so please continue

    33. Oh man..that was so fvcking intense!! Awesome job TK !! you really know how to make us go crazy hehe And what a ride!! damn what is gonna be next for us ??. Thanks :D

    35. This one really blow my brain way. Holy shit TK – you almost gave me a heartattack girl. I´m about to read your next chapter but do I dare. What else do you have up your sleeve. God you took my breath away with this story girl. Now I really need some air. Holy cow girl. Can´t wait for more drama.

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