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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 47
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Riding in the ambulance with Bette to the hospital, Whit called Charles. Everyone would meet them there. Now as Whit paced back and fourth praying her best friend would live. Officer Cruz walked up to Whit guiding her over to the chairs in the waiting room. Whit just lowered her head into her hands and began to cry.
Whit: Cruz, what am I going to do now? Shes dead!
Just as Whit said this Tina stopped, her body frozen as she heard these words leave Whits mouth. Tina ran over and grabbed Whit from her chair shaking Whit and screaming at her. She not dead!!! You said you were going to get Bette. You said youd fix this. WHIT she cant be dead?!!!!
Whit grabbed Tina in her arms feeling Tina beating into her chest with her fist. NO!!! Tina, NO! Bettes not dead. Bettes alive! Shes been beaten pretty badly, but shes still alive Tina! Tina its Jennifer. Jennifers dead. It was Jennifer, Tina. Jennifer raped you. Not Bette. Tina raised her head from Whits chest wiping her eyes so she could focus on Whits face and what she was hearing.
Tina: Jennifer? But why? She was our friend. Why would she do this to us? Whit tell me! Answer me!! Why?!
Whit: She was sick Tina. Off her meds. I swear to god Tina, I never knew she could do something like this. Never Jennifers mind Tina, she believed you loved her since you kissed her in the hospital that day.
Tina: I thought it was Bette! Foxworthy said I described Bette. Her hair, her skin color. Oh god, how could I have not known!!!! Bette would never have done this to me. How could I have ever thought it was my Bette? Shell never forgive me for thinking it was her. How did I ever think it was Bette?
Whit: Jennifer, Tina. She looks just like Bette. Same hair, same skin tone, same height, everything. It wasnt until you described it to me at your house that I knew. I knew it was Jennifer. Tina, please forgive.
Tina: Wheres Bette? Ive got to see her. Where is she Whit? How bad is she? Tell me!
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Holy friggin cow!!!! This was intense!!! great job great.
Holy shitting freak Tk! I knew it! Gah! I can’t say I knew it was Jen but I suspected damn it! Way to make us have a mini stroke though. Wow! Okay, now I’m off to listen to some Enya to calm my beating heart! Woo!
So nice for someone who types one handed you sure put this one together quickly. Wow you had it all and the kitchen sink and is was all go way to go.
OMG OMG OMG that was intense, and OMG, Great chapter. I would never have thought it was Jennifer. You took me by surprise ther. Loved it, please post soon
Bloody hell, I need a stiff drink after reading that. This was really intense. Thank you soooo much for writing such a brilliant fanfic.
WOW..just WOW…just un FUNCKING believeble..youre the best..Agatha OCD Cristie..lol..OMG i´m still in shock..very well done job and i hope only happy things for now i cant wait for next chapter..freaking amazing
Thank goodness now I can get back to my sleep! I was waiting for this update the whole nite ! Awesome ! Great Job – I seriously think it was Jen but like I said, you are a great suspense writer and truly this is one good job. :D you deserve the awards – of all the stories here – yours is the one that I look for first to read – like I said before some of the others are good but its so predictable that you know its the same story whereas yours is totally different.
Now, lets hope we can have an end to all the sufferings these two have gone through and no more, hospitals any more – pls ….:D
damn good chapter! I was thinking it might be her or Whit because Hell-ho was abit too obvious. Will we find out who the men that helped her were?
That was a terrific story! Please continue. I’m hooked. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
you know my dog has this toy that she shakes all over and then chews on day after day… kinda resembles bette in some ways. I wonder what kind of insurance coverage she has.
Keep up the drama and blood shed and pain and gosh Im so sadistic… but we all know drama keeps the readers happy!
you really have a gift of creating suspense and the shock effect. i truly had no idea how this was going to turn out. truly a great chapter. My heart is still beating fast and mouth still wide open on who it turned out to be. there are truly no words to describe how great your writing is. eagerly anticipating the next one.
The suspense is an EVEN BIGGER criminal than your Jennifer character. I had to go grab a couple of drinks while waiting for you to post.
(Oy! What’s this numbing sensation on my left arm? …Aaakk!)
Now that was some really SLICK stuff. I absolutely LOVED it and did not get that it was Jennifer until Bette entered the room with her. Of course in hind sight I now realize that she is the only new character that you did not fully incorporate more into the story and therefore she was expendable. But again I just LOVED this chapter and your writing. Please keep up the great work.
Oh my God I almost had stroke reading this it was great. Can you please write a story for whit now i feel so bad for her
OMG!! I was in major panic mode up until page 4…I was like WTF?? Very good chapter though…I love your writing! I hope this isn’t the end!
Honestly, I had to stop reading when Bette was revealed to be the offender…it really threw me. But happily things were corrected.
OMG!!! There’s a twist if I ever saw one. I never expected Jennifer to be the rapist, I was sure it was Helena. Geeez you are really good. More Please
K
Wonderful chapter. That was brilliant. Love it.
Outstanding….nothing short of brilliant. Thank you!
damn. that was seriously intense. I was on the esge of my seat the whole time.
All I can say TK right now is thank god I’m on pain meds. At this moment, I don’t have use of my left hand due to a fucking dog bite at work today, almost lost a finger. I knew it was Jennifer when tina said it was bette. TK what going to be next, you have taken me on an amazing ride so far, great fucking job. This is a awesome story, and I love every chapter.
Whoa! What an intense and exciting story! I was on the verge of falling off my seat! Great job! This has to be one of the best chapters I have ever read! Two thumbs up for you!
OMG…I almost stopped when Tina said it was Bette. Couldn’t take any more BUT I had to go on and darn was it worth it. I thought it was Whit or Helena, but Jennifer — that was truly GREAT. Pls. keep posting, but for God’s sake give Tina and Bette a break with all of the hospitals, surguries…at least for a while.
Damn this is so amezing and excellent. I just don’t even think is was Jennifer, I thought is was Helena or even Dana, that just crazy, and now we know is jennifer and she gone thank god. Ok now let all of that drama go and let the love began. Post soon, thanks! Excellent and Bravo!
this has got to be the best freakin fanfic i have ever read. oh my god oh my god oh my god. that is insane. BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO. excellent
I knew it too. When I caught up with the story I said out loud that it was Jennifer. I knew it.
Damn I didn’t even think of Jennifer as a suspect, her absence made me forget all about her. You are really good. All these twist and turns are amazing. Good Job.
That was FANTASTIC I forgot about how much Jenn looked like Bette. Great job I hope we have some happy times coming..Post soon great story!!!!
Wow……you took me all over the map this morning! great stuff
thanks
OMG… you had me too.. i forgot the jennifer looked just like bette… but you could have killed her off too… no loss…love this story and i would hate to see you end it so please continue
Talk about intense .. Good grief woman. That was great
i actually liked it a lot. loved the suspense and reveal of the rapist. very nice.
Oh man..that was so fvcking intense!! Awesome job TK !! you really know how to make us go crazy hehe And what a ride!! damn what is gonna be next for us ??. Thanks :D
great suspence you hade me worried. I love it when i can predict the out come excellent job.
This one really blow my brain way. Holy shit TK – you almost gave me a heartattack girl. I´m about to read your next chapter but do I dare. What else do you have up your sleeve. God you took my breath away with this story girl. Now I really need some air. Holy cow girl. Can´t wait for more drama.