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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 47

    Story written on June 16, 2005 by OCD.
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    Whit:  Tina, Its bad.  The doctors are working on her now.  Jennifer beat her badly with her police baton.  She deliberately hit Bette in the head Tina.  The doctors dont think shes going to pull through…  Its just so bad.  (crying)

     

    Tina:  NO!!!  Not again.  Not my Bette!!!

     

    The doctors would not let Tina go into see Bette.  There wasnt room.  There wasnt even time to let Tina say good bye.  The entire E.R. Trauma team was in that room, working so hard to save Bettes life.  They had already lost her once and were trying desperately to stabilize her.  She had internal bleeding from the kicks and blows to her head and body.  As soon as she stabilized in the ER she was rushed to surgery. 

     

    This was the last time Tina would ever walk through the doors of the surgical waiting area.  This was the last time she swore as she sat down beside Kit.  Everyone just sat there.  Stacey held Whit as the events of the day had finally taken there toll on her.  Carmen, Shane, Dana and Alice sat together trying to be strong once again for Tina and Kit.  Charles and Joe stood there refusing to let their emotions show though a few tears slipped past them hands.  Charles rested his hand on Tinas shoulder as she began to cry a bit harder as Kit embraced her.

     

    Finally the doors opened.  Tina looked up to see two doctors approaching her.  She didnt have the strength to stand any more.  So she waited.  Dr. Berry and Dr. Thompson sat down in the chairs across from them. 

     

    Ms. Porter is out of surgery and has been in recover for a few hours.  I’m sorry I didnt come out sooner, but I had another emergency surgery right after hers.  Ms. Porter had internal bleeding and injuries, but nothing that could not be repaired.  She has already been moved to ICU.  I have no doubt Ms. Kennard, no doubt what so ever that Ms. Porter will recover 100%.  She is truly a fighter.  She is going to be ok.  Dr. Berry said as she looked out upon Bettes family. 

     

    Tina sat still.  Shed heard this all said before.  Bleeding, injuries, surgery, recovery, ICU…  But Tina had not really heard anything else.  She just sat there crying.  She had prepared herself for the worst this time.  Nothing anyone could say to her right now would make her believe otherwise.  Not until she saw Bette.  I have to see her, Tina finally said as she looked up at Dr. Berry.  I dont believe you. Not until I see her.

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    2. Holy shitting freak Tk! I knew it! Gah! I can’t say I knew it was Jen but I suspected damn it! Way to make us have a mini stroke though. Wow! Okay, now I’m off to listen to some Enya to calm my beating heart! Woo!

    6. WOW..just WOW…just un FUNCKING believeble..youre the best..Agatha OCD Cristie..lol..OMG i´m still in shock..very well done job and i hope only happy things for now i cant wait for next chapter..freaking amazing

    7. Thank goodness now I can get back to my sleep! I was waiting for this update the whole nite ! Awesome ! Great Job – I seriously think it was Jen but like I said, you are a great suspense writer and truly this is one good job. :D you deserve the awards – of all the stories here – yours is the one that I look for first to read – like I said before some of the others are good but its so predictable that you know its the same story whereas yours is totally different.

      Now, lets hope we can have an end to all the sufferings these two have gone through and no more, hospitals any more – pls ….:D

    10. you know my dog has this toy that she shakes all over and then chews on day after day… kinda resembles bette in some ways. I wonder what kind of insurance coverage she has.
      Keep up the drama and blood shed and pain and gosh Im so sadistic… but we all know drama keeps the readers happy!

    11. you really have a gift of creating suspense and the shock effect. i truly had no idea how this was going to turn out. truly a great chapter. My heart is still beating fast and mouth still wide open on who it turned out to be. there are truly no words to describe how great your writing is. eagerly anticipating the next one.

    12. The suspense is an EVEN BIGGER criminal than your Jennifer character. I had to go grab a couple of drinks while waiting for you to post.

      (Oy! What’s this numbing sensation on my left arm? …Aaakk!)

    13. Now that was some really SLICK stuff. I absolutely LOVED it and did not get that it was Jennifer until Bette entered the room with her. Of course in hind sight I now realize that she is the only new character that you did not fully incorporate more into the story and therefore she was expendable. But again I just LOVED this chapter and your writing. Please keep up the great work.

    17. OMG!!! There’s a twist if I ever saw one. I never expected Jennifer to be the rapist, I was sure it was Helena. Geeez you are really good. More Please

    21. All I can say TK right now is thank god I’m on pain meds. At this moment, I don’t have use of my left hand due to a fucking dog bite at work today, almost lost a finger. I knew it was Jennifer when tina said it was bette. TK what going to be next, you have taken me on an amazing ride so far, great fucking job. This is a awesome story, and I love every chapter.

    22. Whoa! What an intense and exciting story! I was on the verge of falling off my seat! Great job! This has to be one of the best chapters I have ever read! Two thumbs up for you!

    23. OMG…I almost stopped when Tina said it was Bette. Couldn’t take any more BUT I had to go on and darn was it worth it. I thought it was Whit or Helena, but Jennifer — that was truly GREAT. Pls. keep posting, but for God’s sake give Tina and Bette a break with all of the hospitals, surguries…at least for a while.

    24. Damn this is so amezing and excellent. I just don’t even think is was Jennifer, I thought is was Helena or even Dana, that just crazy, and now we know is jennifer and she gone thank god. Ok now let all of that drama go and let the love began. Post soon, thanks! Excellent and Bravo!

    25. this has got to be the best freakin fanfic i have ever read. oh my god oh my god oh my god. that is insane. BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO. excellent

    27. Damn I didn’t even think of Jennifer as a suspect, her absence made me forget all about her. You are really good. All these twist and turns are amazing. Good Job.

    28. That was FANTASTIC I forgot about how much Jenn looked like Bette. Great job I hope we have some happy times coming..Post soon great story!!!!

    30. OMG… you had me too.. i forgot the jennifer looked just like bette… but you could have killed her off too… no loss…love this story and i would hate to see you end it so please continue

    33. Oh man..that was so fvcking intense!! Awesome job TK !! you really know how to make us go crazy hehe And what a ride!! damn what is gonna be next for us ??. Thanks :D

    35. This one really blow my brain way. Holy shit TK – you almost gave me a heartattack girl. I´m about to read your next chapter but do I dare. What else do you have up your sleeve. God you took my breath away with this story girl. Now I really need some air. Holy cow girl. Can´t wait for more drama.

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