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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 47
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Why? After all weve been through. Why would you hurt Tina? Bette asked as she gritted her teeth.
She doesnt love you any more. She loves me. I didnt hurt Tina. We made love. She enjoyed it. She touched me in ways that she had never touched you. We share something you have never had with her. Shes leaving you and we are going to be together forever.
Over my dead body, Bette yelled as she raised the gun in front of her.
The tall framed body stepped towards Bette. Once you are dead Bette, nothing will ever stand in my way of having Tina and your children will become my own.
Bette felt her finger tighten against the trigger of the gun. Ill kill you before that happens, Bette said as she pulled the trigger. Nothing happened.
Do you really think I would be stupid enough to keep a loaded gun here? I have children you fool. I always lock the bullets in a separate place. Now taking an object in her hand and jerking it forward.
Bette could see the Expandable Police Baton as it snapped out to its full length and extended from their hand. She saw the shadow as it approached her so fast she froze. Bette raised her hand but too late, as she felt the first blow to her head knocking her backwards to the floor as the gun flew across the room. She felt the second blow to her body and curled into a ball grabbing her head to protect it. Feeling a kick to her ribs, Bette screamed out in pain.
Tina is mine screamed the shadow standing over Bette. As Bette looked up she could see the baton raised high above the tall shadows head. I’m going to kill you slowly. Then I am going home to my wife and children and make love to her as your lifeless body lays here alone in the darkness until it decays.
Bette felt the blows to her body, her legs, then to her head. She felt herself losing consciousness. She saw Tina standing there with her outstretched arms begging. Dont leave us, Bette. We need you. All she had left were these imagines in her mind of Tina and their babies as the last blow would surely take her life. Bette looked up at her killer with all the strength she had left in her body. ***** YOU Bette screamed as the baton started to lower towards her head.
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Holy friggin cow!!!! This was intense!!! great job great.
Holy shitting freak Tk! I knew it! Gah! I can’t say I knew it was Jen but I suspected damn it! Way to make us have a mini stroke though. Wow! Okay, now I’m off to listen to some Enya to calm my beating heart! Woo!
So nice for someone who types one handed you sure put this one together quickly. Wow you had it all and the kitchen sink and is was all go way to go.
OMG OMG OMG that was intense, and OMG, Great chapter. I would never have thought it was Jennifer. You took me by surprise ther. Loved it, please post soon
Bloody hell, I need a stiff drink after reading that. This was really intense. Thank you soooo much for writing such a brilliant fanfic.
WOW..just WOW…just un FUNCKING believeble..youre the best..Agatha OCD Cristie..lol..OMG i´m still in shock..very well done job and i hope only happy things for now i cant wait for next chapter..freaking amazing
Thank goodness now I can get back to my sleep! I was waiting for this update the whole nite ! Awesome ! Great Job – I seriously think it was Jen but like I said, you are a great suspense writer and truly this is one good job. :D you deserve the awards – of all the stories here – yours is the one that I look for first to read – like I said before some of the others are good but its so predictable that you know its the same story whereas yours is totally different.
Now, lets hope we can have an end to all the sufferings these two have gone through and no more, hospitals any more – pls ….:D
damn good chapter! I was thinking it might be her or Whit because Hell-ho was abit too obvious. Will we find out who the men that helped her were?
That was a terrific story! Please continue. I’m hooked. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
you know my dog has this toy that she shakes all over and then chews on day after day… kinda resembles bette in some ways. I wonder what kind of insurance coverage she has.
Keep up the drama and blood shed and pain and gosh Im so sadistic… but we all know drama keeps the readers happy!
you really have a gift of creating suspense and the shock effect. i truly had no idea how this was going to turn out. truly a great chapter. My heart is still beating fast and mouth still wide open on who it turned out to be. there are truly no words to describe how great your writing is. eagerly anticipating the next one.
The suspense is an EVEN BIGGER criminal than your Jennifer character. I had to go grab a couple of drinks while waiting for you to post.
(Oy! What’s this numbing sensation on my left arm? …Aaakk!)
Now that was some really SLICK stuff. I absolutely LOVED it and did not get that it was Jennifer until Bette entered the room with her. Of course in hind sight I now realize that she is the only new character that you did not fully incorporate more into the story and therefore she was expendable. But again I just LOVED this chapter and your writing. Please keep up the great work.
Oh my God I almost had stroke reading this it was great. Can you please write a story for whit now i feel so bad for her
OMG!! I was in major panic mode up until page 4…I was like WTF?? Very good chapter though…I love your writing! I hope this isn’t the end!
Honestly, I had to stop reading when Bette was revealed to be the offender…it really threw me. But happily things were corrected.
OMG!!! There’s a twist if I ever saw one. I never expected Jennifer to be the rapist, I was sure it was Helena. Geeez you are really good. More Please
K
Wonderful chapter. That was brilliant. Love it.
Outstanding….nothing short of brilliant. Thank you!
damn. that was seriously intense. I was on the esge of my seat the whole time.
All I can say TK right now is thank god I’m on pain meds. At this moment, I don’t have use of my left hand due to a fucking dog bite at work today, almost lost a finger. I knew it was Jennifer when tina said it was bette. TK what going to be next, you have taken me on an amazing ride so far, great fucking job. This is a awesome story, and I love every chapter.
Whoa! What an intense and exciting story! I was on the verge of falling off my seat! Great job! This has to be one of the best chapters I have ever read! Two thumbs up for you!
OMG…I almost stopped when Tina said it was Bette. Couldn’t take any more BUT I had to go on and darn was it worth it. I thought it was Whit or Helena, but Jennifer — that was truly GREAT. Pls. keep posting, but for God’s sake give Tina and Bette a break with all of the hospitals, surguries…at least for a while.
Damn this is so amezing and excellent. I just don’t even think is was Jennifer, I thought is was Helena or even Dana, that just crazy, and now we know is jennifer and she gone thank god. Ok now let all of that drama go and let the love began. Post soon, thanks! Excellent and Bravo!
this has got to be the best freakin fanfic i have ever read. oh my god oh my god oh my god. that is insane. BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO. excellent
I knew it too. When I caught up with the story I said out loud that it was Jennifer. I knew it.
Damn I didn’t even think of Jennifer as a suspect, her absence made me forget all about her. You are really good. All these twist and turns are amazing. Good Job.
That was FANTASTIC I forgot about how much Jenn looked like Bette. Great job I hope we have some happy times coming..Post soon great story!!!!
Wow……you took me all over the map this morning! great stuff
thanks
OMG… you had me too.. i forgot the jennifer looked just like bette… but you could have killed her off too… no loss…love this story and i would hate to see you end it so please continue
Talk about intense .. Good grief woman. That was great
i actually liked it a lot. loved the suspense and reveal of the rapist. very nice.
Oh man..that was so fvcking intense!! Awesome job TK !! you really know how to make us go crazy hehe And what a ride!! damn what is gonna be next for us ??. Thanks :D
great suspence you hade me worried. I love it when i can predict the out come excellent job.
This one really blow my brain way. Holy shit TK – you almost gave me a heartattack girl. I´m about to read your next chapter but do I dare. What else do you have up your sleeve. God you took my breath away with this story girl. Now I really need some air. Holy cow girl. Can´t wait for more drama.