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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 57
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Making their way around the basement they noticed an arsenal of weapons, handguns, rifles, AK-47 assault rifles and Cop Killers. These bullets can go right through a car. Whits bullet proof vest would be like a paper towel to this type. Whits partner found a case of grenades. Not the round can used during the war, but a canister type. No matter what the shape was, it was still deadly. Now their concern heightened. They suspect definitely had a strong knowledge of weapons. Possibly even ex military which meant the house could be set up with booby-trapped.
Whit and her partner proceeded with extreme caution looking for trip wires. With the basement cleared they headed toward the stairs. Whits partner checked the underside for trip wires or grenades. Once the steps were cleared they began making their way towards the entrance door to the kitchen.
Whit traced the seam of the door with her small flashlight until she found what she was looking for. A trip wire attached to the door at the bottom side. Had she opened the door the grenade would have exploded. Gently taking out her tool she cut the wire praying there wasnt a second trigger. With that done they were ready to open the door into the house.
Stacey was unable to move as the News cameras rolled. Reporters were giving details and updates as to the procedures for the SWAT Team entry. The only damn thing Stacey wanted to see was Whit. Bette and Tina just sat there. All they could do now was wait with their friend. Stacey wouldnt drink, wouldnt eat nothing. Tina had to put Josh down for bed even. Stacey had breast feed Josh, but other than that she just couldnt move.
This is a nightmare. Some manic beats up his wife, then kills two cops that were trying to help. Now my wifes life is in danger trying to save another mans family from him self. This is crazy was all Stacey could say as Bette and Tina sat speechless.
Opening the door gently, Whit could see into the kitchen towards the front of the house. She whispered back to her partner, Clear. They moved into the kitchen staying low. Once the Kitchen was cleared Whit moved down the hallway towards the front room. Just as she eased up to the corner there stood the man holding something in his hands.
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This was heartbreaking. Wonderful…tense…makes me want to run over to my best friends house (who is a police officer) and hug her like crazy!! Thank you for this.
It’s time for Whit to be the stay at home mom. Stacey can go back to being a brain surgeon.
Stacey?..me either…OMG..i´m about to be in a cold sweat..woman..amzing chapter
Wow! Talk about intense. Don’t know if I could handle being in Stacey’s shoes. Glad Whit wasn’t hurt to bad.
That was a great chapter, please post soon
K
WOnderful two chapters. Just love your story.
Intense and heartbreaking. I like Whit and Stacey. Thanks…great as always.
i know what stacy means.. whit it time to retire to a desk job…love this story..
wow great chapter TK !! you da best! Please write more about Stacy and Whit…maybe Stacy talking more about her fears to Whit and what Whit feels about all this situation..it would be interesting. Post soon!.
I sense this may just be the beginning of the drama.
Hey It’s me again I just really wrong name sorry OCD.
Hey ODC I’m been reading your Story I love it Whoa! and your really good writer Thank you your Awesome Writer and really good Whoa! this is my first comment your Amazing Writer Please post soon.
That was intense TK – wonderful job, it was like being there myself. Thanks for that one. Post soon
Damn this is scare the hell out of me, and glad that Whit ok, and now we know Whit and Stacy will have problem coming and hope they will talk about it. Post soon, thanks! Good chapter!
Thank you!!!! I love this story I think that she is a interesting charcter and deserved her own story with stacy . Fantasic keep it going POST SOON!!!!
Good Chp. I feel bad for Stacey it must be hard to go through that every not knowing if it day might be the last day with Whit. But i have a feeling that Whit can’t just give it up it is part of who she is. How many other kids dose Whit have? And were do they live. I don’t comment often but i think your story is great.
Hey OCD, I had to do quite a bit of reading today to catch up (though I still didn’t finish). I love your stories, this new twist with Stacey and Whit is great. It adds dimension to the story (something to prolong the story until TLW returns.) Hey I’m a bit confuse, didn’t u call Whit “Uncle Whit” on xmas and I thought Whit got custody of his 2 kids he had with Jennifer. Help me out here?