Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 57
Login to add story to favorites
(45 votes, average: 3.80 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Scoping the room she saw the mans wife tied up on the living room floor, beaten, but still alive. Just then the woman saw Whit and made a gasping noise causing her husband to turn facing Whit. Whit was just about to pull the trigger and take the ***** out when he pushed a button.
The flash from the explosion blew Whit backwards knocking her partner to the floor. Turning back to face the fire Whit knew they had to be dead. The wall had been blown out the front of the house of the living room. Stepping closer seeing that both were in fact dead and the house was now on fire Whit had to find the kids.
BREAKING NEWS
The TV News Station rolled the film showing the explosion over and over again as Stacey watched in horror. Bette and Tina watched the explosion again as Tina covered her mouth. Bette reached over and held Stacey in her arms. It’s going to be ok Stacey. I’m sure Whit wasnt in there. Bette said trying to convince her self as well.
Tina gasped bringing all attention back to the TV. The fireman had put out the fire coming from the front right room of the house. The camera zoomed to the front door of the residence. Someone was coming out.
Oh my God, it’s Whit. Shes hurt, see shes limping badly. Stacey said pointing at the TV.
It is Whit. She has her helmet off. It is her, Tina said.
But look shes ok Stacey. Shes alive. Bette said.
Staring at the TV all three women began to cry at the sight of their friend and wife coming out the front door with a small child in her arms. The camera showed Whit makes it to the bottom steps before collapsing. Sitting on the steps the paramedics took the small child from her arms and began working on her. Whits partner now exited with the little boy in his arms.
The TV cut away showing repeats of the explosion and replaying scene from earlier in the day. The names of the victims were now being released. Both suspect and his wife were reportedly dead from the explosion. Other than that no further injuries have been released.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
This was heartbreaking. Wonderful…tense…makes me want to run over to my best friends house (who is a police officer) and hug her like crazy!! Thank you for this.
It’s time for Whit to be the stay at home mom. Stacey can go back to being a brain surgeon.
Stacey?..me either…OMG..i´m about to be in a cold sweat..woman..amzing chapter
Wow! Talk about intense. Don’t know if I could handle being in Stacey’s shoes. Glad Whit wasn’t hurt to bad.
That was a great chapter, please post soon
K
WOnderful two chapters. Just love your story.
Intense and heartbreaking. I like Whit and Stacey. Thanks…great as always.
i know what stacy means.. whit it time to retire to a desk job…love this story..
wow great chapter TK !! you da best! Please write more about Stacy and Whit…maybe Stacy talking more about her fears to Whit and what Whit feels about all this situation..it would be interesting. Post soon!.
I sense this may just be the beginning of the drama.
Hey It’s me again I just really wrong name sorry OCD.
Hey ODC I’m been reading your Story I love it Whoa! and your really good writer Thank you your Awesome Writer and really good Whoa! this is my first comment your Amazing Writer Please post soon.
That was intense TK – wonderful job, it was like being there myself. Thanks for that one. Post soon
Damn this is scare the hell out of me, and glad that Whit ok, and now we know Whit and Stacy will have problem coming and hope they will talk about it. Post soon, thanks! Good chapter!
Thank you!!!! I love this story I think that she is a interesting charcter and deserved her own story with stacy . Fantasic keep it going POST SOON!!!!
Good Chp. I feel bad for Stacey it must be hard to go through that every not knowing if it day might be the last day with Whit. But i have a feeling that Whit can’t just give it up it is part of who she is. How many other kids dose Whit have? And were do they live. I don’t comment often but i think your story is great.
Hey OCD, I had to do quite a bit of reading today to catch up (though I still didn’t finish). I love your stories, this new twist with Stacey and Whit is great. It adds dimension to the story (something to prolong the story until TLW returns.) Hey I’m a bit confuse, didn’t u call Whit “Uncle Whit” on xmas and I thought Whit got custody of his 2 kids he had with Jennifer. Help me out here?