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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 57
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The news flashed across the screen again showing the SWAT team. Stacey jumped towards the TV trying to see better. Looking closely at each officers uniform trying to see if one of them were Whit. The only update was that SWAT may attempt a rescue since negotiations had broken down.
Stacey had a look of panic on her face from hearing this. Whit is on the Entry team. Shell be one of them going in. Stacey said as her hands began to shake.
Time and time gain Whit told Stacey. Do not watch the news if I am on a call. This was different. Two police officers were dead and Stacey couldnt stop watching until she had word that Whit was ok.
SWAT van.
Whit and her Entry team were going over the floor plan of the residence with their Captain. They had sent a patrol car to pick it up from the home owner.
It’s a one story brick home with a basement. From what the Negotiator could tell over the phone, the suspect and his wife were in one of the front rooms. He had heard the children crying at first, but nothing since the gunfire exchange with Swat.
The Police were trying to get news cameras away because they were filming live and the suspect would be able to see the Team approaching the house on TV. Since it was getting dark out, Police had the camera crews turn off the big overhead lighting.
Nine hours since the standoff began; the Entry Team would be able to approach in the dark now. There had been no movement inside the home for hours. The Team was assigned different Entry points.
Whit and her partner will enter though a basement window. Once inside the plan was for them to clear the basement, and then move up into the main part of the home. The door leading up from the basement was in the kitchen near the rear of the house. Hopefully the suspect was still in the front of the home.
The team is given the green light, Whit and her partner entered through the basement window. The rest of the Team would wait outside unless something bad went down inside. Whit and her partner would be given a chance to end this siege without anyone else getting hurt.
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This was heartbreaking. Wonderful…tense…makes me want to run over to my best friends house (who is a police officer) and hug her like crazy!! Thank you for this.
It’s time for Whit to be the stay at home mom. Stacey can go back to being a brain surgeon.
Stacey?..me either…OMG..i´m about to be in a cold sweat..woman..amzing chapter
Wow! Talk about intense. Don’t know if I could handle being in Stacey’s shoes. Glad Whit wasn’t hurt to bad.
That was a great chapter, please post soon
K
WOnderful two chapters. Just love your story.
Intense and heartbreaking. I like Whit and Stacey. Thanks…great as always.
i know what stacy means.. whit it time to retire to a desk job…love this story..
wow great chapter TK !! you da best! Please write more about Stacy and Whit…maybe Stacy talking more about her fears to Whit and what Whit feels about all this situation..it would be interesting. Post soon!.
I sense this may just be the beginning of the drama.
Hey It’s me again I just really wrong name sorry OCD.
Hey ODC I’m been reading your Story I love it Whoa! and your really good writer Thank you your Awesome Writer and really good Whoa! this is my first comment your Amazing Writer Please post soon.
That was intense TK – wonderful job, it was like being there myself. Thanks for that one. Post soon
Damn this is scare the hell out of me, and glad that Whit ok, and now we know Whit and Stacy will have problem coming and hope they will talk about it. Post soon, thanks! Good chapter!
Thank you!!!! I love this story I think that she is a interesting charcter and deserved her own story with stacy . Fantasic keep it going POST SOON!!!!
Good Chp. I feel bad for Stacey it must be hard to go through that every not knowing if it day might be the last day with Whit. But i have a feeling that Whit can’t just give it up it is part of who she is. How many other kids dose Whit have? And were do they live. I don’t comment often but i think your story is great.
Hey OCD, I had to do quite a bit of reading today to catch up (though I still didn’t finish). I love your stories, this new twist with Stacey and Whit is great. It adds dimension to the story (something to prolong the story until TLW returns.) Hey I’m a bit confuse, didn’t u call Whit “Uncle Whit” on xmas and I thought Whit got custody of his 2 kids he had with Jennifer. Help me out here?