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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 68

    Story written on July 26, 2005 by OCD.
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    Someone is kidnapped.

     

    Bette’s cell phone rang and as she answered all she heard was, “we’ve got Jordan and he’s ok.”  Whit said yelling into the phone.  Bette dropped her phone and Alice picked it up hearing Whit repeating that they had Jordan and he was safe.  Alice told everyone and handed the phone to Stacey.

     

    “They found Jordan.  He’s safe and they’re on their way back here.”  Alice announced as Tina burst into tears and everyone let out a sigh of relief. 

     

    With Jordan safely back in his parents arms 30 minutes later they all tried to figure out how this happened.  Bette and Tina didn’t care about that right now.  All they cared about was that Jordan was safe in their arms. 

     

    Detective Clements’s had the man in custody now at the station.  He put up a huge fight but was over come by a Taser gun.  Once he was taken down with that he cried like a child.  Cruz went to the station after seeing Whit and Jordan safely back to Dana’s. 

     

    Cruz pulled the arrest sheet on the guy’s brother and found his name, Jeffrey Clayton.  Only now Cruz was more confused because Mark Clayton had been killed in prison over drugs.  So how did Jeffrey get involved.  How did he know who Jordan was and  was Josh the intended victim?  Nothing made since now.  Cruz had suspected that Mark put his brother up to this for revenge, but that couldn’t happen now. 

     

    Cruz called Whit’s cell and explained her findings.  Jeffrey had the mind of a 6 year old so there was no way he came up with this on his own.  Most importantly Jeffrey didn’t know how to drive but Josh said blue car.  They found the car in the garage but who drove it?

     

    Jeffrey Clayton had been committed to the Mental Hospital after his brother died and he had no other family members to take him in.  He had warrants for his arrest after escaping from the Mental Ward.  But how?  He doesn’t have the mind to come up with an idea like this.  Someone else was behind this Whit and Cruz decided.  That was the person they had to find.  Until they did, no one was safe because they were not certain who the real victim’s were. 

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

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    2. My thoughts and prayers are with you and Petluvr. You need to take care of yourself, too. Here’s my crime solving thoughts, I think that Jennifer’s parents are behind the kidnapping!!!

    3. TK,
      You and Petlvr are in my thoughts and prayers. Wishing you both all good things and a full recovery.
      I am humbled by the brilliance of your storytelling especially in these difficult times.
      If you need anything then just let me know and I will endeavor to help you however I can.
      You have yet again set up a very intriguing plot line. I am equally puzzled and enthralled by this turn of events. Who is this mysterious woman and is she behind the re-emergence of Jennifer’s parents? Is this all a bit of subterfuge to cover up her true plan?
      I hope you can share the answers with us all real soon.
      Baited breathe until then.
      Thank you for this marvelous mystery,
      Your Loyal Fan.

    7. Hey, girl. Just hang in there. Be strong. We all root for you and wish you the best.

      When you look into an abyss, the abyss also looks into you.—Friedrich Nietzsche

      So, um… how about looking towards the horizon and seeing forever?

    11. OCD I’m sorry to hear about Petlvr and hope she will go through and get well soon! Good chapter. Damn who the hell is that and why that crazy basterd have to kidnap Bette’s son, and glad Jordon is ok. Please post soon, thanks!

    12. OCD, I am sorry about Petlvr. I know how hard it is to live through what you are experiencing now. Try not to ignore your health during this. She will need you later, also.

    15. Im so sorry abpout Petlvr. I hope you both get well and I will keep u in my prayers. That was crazy shit. I loved it!!!Great update as usual.

    16. OCD I am sorry to hear about Petlvr’s stroke. As you have researched this topic you know she is going to make it. It will take some time but with your Love, therapy and plenty of prayers she will get better. Now don’t neglect your own health issues during this crisis. We can wait for the next chapter under these circumstances.

    19. OMG!! Excellent as always and I am so sorry to hear about Petlvr I hope she makes a speedy recovery and you take care of yourself I haope you are feeling better..We are saying our prayers for you both…

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