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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 68

     

    “Whit there is one thing for certain that was never a lie.  You have two of the most beautiful children.  That could never be a lie.  No matter what Jennifer kept from you, I’m sure she had her reasons.  I’m not saying it was right, but you don’t know her parents.  I will call Charles and get them to check these people out.  Find out why they had been out of her life, why all of a sudden they want to the kids.”  Bette said trying to comfort her friend. 

     

    “Bette, none of this makes any sense.”  Whit kept saying.

     

    “I know honey.  I know but we will fight this.  Oh, by the way, I think you crutches are screwed.”  Bette said as she let out a soft laugh.

     

    “Yea I know.  The madder I got the better I could walk.  I didn’t even realize it until I got all the way down her by myself.”  Whit said.

     

    “Yea, I was kinda wondering how that happened.  So even though this feels really bad right now about the kids.  Look what happened.  You finally got rid of your crutches.”  Bette said knowing that Whit had held onto the crutches after they were no longer needed.  Whit just needed that extra push to let go and walk again.

     

     

    LATER AT THE PLANET

     

    Alice and Cruz waited for everyone else to arrive.  They all agree to have lunch together at least once a month.  Never missing their morning coffee, everyone gathered together but even that seemed a bit rushed now.  With Tina and Dana pregnant, everyone seemed to rush off to work to avoid their hormones. 

     

    With Charles and Kit joined everyone for lunch as the last of the gang arrived.  Seated in the back at a large table Kit has set aside just for her family, they started to order lunch.   Somehow the conversations became divided.  Tina, Dana, Carmen, Alice, Stacey, and Kit talked about baby stuff.  Whit, Bette, Shane, Lara, Charles and Cruz talked about fixing up the room for Dana and Lara’s new arrival.  There was Bette talking about adding on to there house again.  Moving was out of the question because this had been their dream home. 

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    1. My thoughts and prayers are with you and Petluvr. You need to take care of yourself, too. Here’s my crime solving thoughts, I think that Jennifer’s parents are behind the kidnapping!!!

    2. TK,
      You and Petlvr are in my thoughts and prayers. Wishing you both all good things and a full recovery.
      I am humbled by the brilliance of your storytelling especially in these difficult times.
      If you need anything then just let me know and I will endeavor to help you however I can.
      You have yet again set up a very intriguing plot line. I am equally puzzled and enthralled by this turn of events. Who is this mysterious woman and is she behind the re-emergence of Jennifer’s parents? Is this all a bit of subterfuge to cover up her true plan?
      I hope you can share the answers with us all real soon.
      Baited breathe until then.
      Thank you for this marvelous mystery,
      Your Loyal Fan.

    3. Hey, girl. Just hang in there. Be strong. We all root for you and wish you the best.

      When you look into an abyss, the abyss also looks into you.—Friedrich Nietzsche

      So, um… how about looking towards the horizon and seeing forever?

    4. OCD I’m sorry to hear about Petlvr and hope she will go through and get well soon! Good chapter. Damn who the hell is that and why that crazy basterd have to kidnap Bette’s son, and glad Jordon is ok. Please post soon, thanks!

    5. OCD, I am sorry about Petlvr. I know how hard it is to live through what you are experiencing now. Try not to ignore your health during this. She will need you later, also.

    6. Im so sorry abpout Petlvr. I hope you both get well and I will keep u in my prayers. That was crazy shit. I loved it!!!Great update as usual.

    7. OCD I am sorry to hear about Petlvr’s stroke. As you have researched this topic you know she is going to make it. It will take some time but with your Love, therapy and plenty of prayers she will get better. Now don’t neglect your own health issues during this crisis. We can wait for the next chapter under these circumstances.

    8. OMG!! Excellent as always and I am so sorry to hear about Petlvr I hope she makes a speedy recovery and you take care of yourself I haope you are feeling better..We are saying our prayers for you both…

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