LesFan

Lesbian Fan Social Network

    Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 10, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 68

    Story written on July 26, 2005 by OCD.
     Login to add story to favorites
     Login to add author to favorites
    32 votes, average: 3.53 out of 532 votes, average: 3.53 out of 532 votes, average: 3.53 out of 532 votes, average: 3.53 out of 532 votes, average: 3.53 out of 5 (32 votes, average: 3.53 out of 5)
    You need to be a registered member to rate this post.     Loading ... Loading ...
    Genre(s):
    Rating:
    fanfiction(s):
    Character(s): , , , , , ,
    Number of Comments: 22
    Words: 12890
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55622
    Author Notes:

    Someone is kidnapped.

     

    With lunch and chit chat all finished.  Plans made for the girls to go shopping for baby clothes while Bette and her group would spend the next weekend fixing up the room and Dana’s house.  Since Jordan enjoyed his own private room now, Bette and Tina had a little more time for their addition.  Their baby girl due in a few months would sleep in Amy’s room to start with. 

     

     

    SATURDAY MORNING

     

    Amy and Jordan came running into the bedroom seeing Bette sound asleep on her back.  Amy motioned for Jordan to be quiet by placing her finger up to her lips.  Standing at the foot of their parents bed Amy started to tickle Bette’s foot.  Each time Bette would stir the kids would duck down hiding.  Peaking up to see that she had gone back to sleep, Amy tickled her foot again.  Jerking her leg up and then back down again Bette mumbled in her sleep.  Finally Amy’s head popped up again to see Bette asleep again.  This time Amy gave Jordan the feather so he could tickle his Mom’s foot. 

     

    Jordan raised his head to tickle Bette’s foot as Amy covered her mouth giggling.  All of a sudden Jordan disappeared from beside Amy as Bette grabbed him up onto the bed.  Jordan squealed as Bette tickled him and Amy popped her head up to see her brother being attacked by the tickle monster.  Crawling up onto the bed to save Jordan, Amy jumped onto her Mom’s back. 

     

    Wrestling with both kids finally woke Tina who now joined in the fun.  “Be careful now.  Don’t hit Mom ok.”  Bette said as the kids kicked and laughed.

     

    “Mommy, save us.”  Jordan cried out laughing for Tina to save them. 

     

    “Oh no, you started this.  Now Mom’s gonna finish.”  Tina said protecting her stomach from flying legs. 

     

    “MOM!!!!    I’ve gota pee.”  Amy laughs out loud trying to get away.

     

    “Bette you Bette let her go before you have to change the sheets.”  Tina said laughing at the look on Amy’s face. 

     

    Letting go of them, Amy ran for her mother’s bathroom as Jordan ran for the other one.  Returning to their parents bedroom door they met and stood there whispering. 

    Page 3 of 9‹ Previous12345Next ›Last »
    «
    FF Main Page
    »

    Comments

    2. My thoughts and prayers are with you and Petluvr. You need to take care of yourself, too. Here’s my crime solving thoughts, I think that Jennifer’s parents are behind the kidnapping!!!

    3. TK,
      You and Petlvr are in my thoughts and prayers. Wishing you both all good things and a full recovery.
      I am humbled by the brilliance of your storytelling especially in these difficult times.
      If you need anything then just let me know and I will endeavor to help you however I can.
      You have yet again set up a very intriguing plot line. I am equally puzzled and enthralled by this turn of events. Who is this mysterious woman and is she behind the re-emergence of Jennifer’s parents? Is this all a bit of subterfuge to cover up her true plan?
      I hope you can share the answers with us all real soon.
      Baited breathe until then.
      Thank you for this marvelous mystery,
      Your Loyal Fan.

    7. Hey, girl. Just hang in there. Be strong. We all root for you and wish you the best.

      When you look into an abyss, the abyss also looks into you.—Friedrich Nietzsche

      So, um… how about looking towards the horizon and seeing forever?

    11. OCD I’m sorry to hear about Petlvr and hope she will go through and get well soon! Good chapter. Damn who the hell is that and why that crazy basterd have to kidnap Bette’s son, and glad Jordon is ok. Please post soon, thanks!

    12. OCD, I am sorry about Petlvr. I know how hard it is to live through what you are experiencing now. Try not to ignore your health during this. She will need you later, also.

    15. Im so sorry abpout Petlvr. I hope you both get well and I will keep u in my prayers. That was crazy shit. I loved it!!!Great update as usual.

    16. OCD I am sorry to hear about Petlvr’s stroke. As you have researched this topic you know she is going to make it. It will take some time but with your Love, therapy and plenty of prayers she will get better. Now don’t neglect your own health issues during this crisis. We can wait for the next chapter under these circumstances.

    19. OMG!! Excellent as always and I am so sorry to hear about Petlvr I hope she makes a speedy recovery and you take care of yourself I haope you are feeling better..We are saying our prayers for you both…

    Leave a Reply