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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 68
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“Son of a *****! You’re right. That is the same garage in the background that we busted. But he’s in jail.” Whit said.
“Yea but he had that huge brother remember? It took 12 officers’ to get him handcuffed because he was so huge.” Cruz said.
“*****!!! I remember now.” Whit said.
“Kelly, I know we’re right. I know it’s the same house and garage in the background with this puppy.” Cruz said showing Kelly the photo again. Cruz couldn’t remember the guys name but she knew where the house was.
Kelly, Whit and Cruz jumped into the Detective’s unmarked police car and sped off in the direction Cruz remembered. Once they arrived at the house Detective Clements’s ran the address and Cruz was right. The garage matched the photo and it was all they could do to keep Whit in the car at that point. Even though Whit had sobered up fast, she still had not returned to active duty yet. Anything she did could mess up the arrest if they found
Waiting for back up after Cruz advised Kelly of the size of the man she remembered. The SWAT Team showed up to make entry into the house. All Whit could do was watch as her fellow SWAT team members mapped out their plan.
“Bullshit!!” Whit said as she ducked away out of sight of Kelly and Cruz. Whit didn’t know what she was going to do since she did not have her gun, but that was Bette’s kid in there. At least she hoped to god they were in this house.
Moments later there was a loud crashing noise coming from inside the house when Kelly and Cruz noticed Whit was missing.
“OH GOD! Where’s Whit?” Cruz yelled running towards the house as she heard another crashing sound and glass breaking.
Kelly and the SWAT teams through their plan out the window when they saw Whit missing and heard sounds of a fight inside the house. Busting the front door in, the SWAT team entered as Cruz ran past them towards the sound of Whit’s voice.
Cruz ran up the stairs with the team behind her. She got to a room as she heard Whit yell as she crashed into the wall. Whit was being tossed around like a rag doll by this 6’4″ over 250 lbs man. Cruz started to run towards
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And the drama just keeps coming. Perhaps Candace is trying a little payback ploy from prison. Hurry & post again soon.
My thoughts and prayers are with you and Petluvr. You need to take care of yourself, too. Here’s my crime solving thoughts, I think that Jennifer’s parents are behind the kidnapping!!!
TK,
You and Petlvr are in my thoughts and prayers. Wishing you both all good things and a full recovery.
I am humbled by the brilliance of your storytelling especially in these difficult times.
If you need anything then just let me know and I will endeavor to help you however I can.
You have yet again set up a very intriguing plot line. I am equally puzzled and enthralled by this turn of events. Who is this mysterious woman and is she behind the re-emergence of Jennifer’s parents? Is this all a bit of subterfuge to cover up her true plan?
I hope you can share the answers with us all real soon.
Baited breathe until then.
Thank you for this marvelous mystery,
Your Loyal Fan.
MY PRAYERS ARE WITH YOU AND PETLUVR.TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF OCD,PETLUVR WILL NEED YOU HEALTHY TOO.THANKS FOR THE WONDERFUL CHAPTER…TAKE CARE
I enjoy reading your stories- in return i think i can help if you have any questions about strokes- i deal with stroke patients all the time. email amydawnech@sbcglobal.net
TK, I’m sorry to hear about Petlvr. Hang in there and don’t forget to take care of yourself! I will keep you both in my prayers.
Hey, girl. Just hang in there. Be strong. We all root for you and wish you the best.
When you look into an abyss, the abyss also looks into you.—Friedrich Nietzsche
So, um… how about looking towards the horizon and seeing forever?
K
Great chapter, can’t wait for more.
OCD, my thoughts and prayers are with both you and Petluvr.
As for your story – I simply love it. Its like a permanent rollercoaster of emotions.
you are both in my prayers…
this was a great chapter… write when you can
OCD I’m sorry to hear about Petlvr and hope she will go through and get well soon! Good chapter. Damn who the hell is that and why that crazy basterd have to kidnap Bette’s son, and glad Jordon is ok. Please post soon, thanks!
OCD, I am sorry about Petlvr. I know how hard it is to live through what you are experiencing now. Try not to ignore your health during this. She will need you later, also.
Great chapter OCD. How are you doing? I hope you’re resting.
If either of you needs anything let me know. Depression is quite common. My stroke was 2003 Jackiee1@podigy.net, There is a stroke site that is helpful, get as much therapy as available asap
Im so sorry abpout Petlvr. I hope you both get well and I will keep u in my prayers. That was crazy shit. I loved it!!!Great update as usual.
OCD I am sorry to hear about Petlvr’s stroke. As you have researched this topic you know she is going to make it. It will take some time but with your Love, therapy and plenty of prayers she will get better. Now don’t neglect your own health issues during this crisis. We can wait for the next chapter under these circumstances.
You’re both in my prayers. Be strong. Petluvr get well soon.
I will be here praying for Petluvr and for you
OMG!! Excellent as always and I am so sorry to hear about Petlvr I hope she makes a speedy recovery and you take care of yourself I haope you are feeling better..We are saying our prayers for you both…
Great post!!!!!!!! remember to take care of yourself too!!!
I will be praying for you both. Let me know if there is anything I can do to help since I am local.
hey OCD i hope Petlvr will be ok very soon i will pray for her..and about the story OMG fucking amazing..thanks