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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 68

    Story written on July 26, 2005 by OCD.
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    Someone is kidnapped.

     

    “NO!!!  He’s my friend.  I won’t let you hurt him.”  The man said picking Jordan up in his arms as if protecting him. 

     

    Whit and Cruz sat side by side on the floor confused as ***** by what this guy just said and how Jordan clung to his neck as if safe from them.  The SWAT team came bounding in and Cruz ordered them to back out. 

     

    “Jordan, are you ok honey?”  Cruz asked the little boy.

     

    “He’s my friend Auntie Cruz.  We were eating chicken nuggets and playing Go fish.”  Jordan said smiling holding onto his new friend.

     

    “He’s my friend the huge man said.  You, you not hurt him.”  He stuttered.

     

    “Oh *****, He’s retarded.”  Whit whispered.  I remember now.  He’s like 6 years old in his mind.”  Whit said to Cruz.

     

    “Hey what’s your name?”  Cruz asked the huge man now speaking to him as she would Jordan.

     

    “I am not suppose to talk to strangers.”  The huge man said to them.

     

    “It’s ok.  We’re Police Officers.”  Cruz said.  “We’re here to help you.  We didn’t know you were friends with Jordan and we got worried about him.  Are you both ok?”  Cruz said trying to gain the man’s trust.

     

    “We fine.  We were playing Go Fish.  Then that mean lady messed up our cards trying to take my friend away.”  The man said.

     

    “I’m sorry.  She doesn’t know how to play Go Fish.  Can you teach her?”  Cruz said trying to get the man to put Jordan down and sit on the floor with them.  Once on the floor with Jordan safe.  Cruz could grab him and SWAT could grab the man.

     

    They sat down on the floor but Jordan remained sitting in the man’s lap as they started to play. 

     

    “I think we are missing a card there buddy?”  Cruz said as she pointed to a card behind the man.  As soon as he turned to get the card Cruz grabbed Jordan from his lap and the SWAT team charged the man.

     

    Backing away leaving the room with Jordan, Whit and Cruz got down stairs with him and out to the car.  Checking Jordan over to make sure he had not been harmed or molested, Whit held him in her arms and would not let go.

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    2. My thoughts and prayers are with you and Petluvr. You need to take care of yourself, too. Here’s my crime solving thoughts, I think that Jennifer’s parents are behind the kidnapping!!!

    3. TK,
      You and Petlvr are in my thoughts and prayers. Wishing you both all good things and a full recovery.
      I am humbled by the brilliance of your storytelling especially in these difficult times.
      If you need anything then just let me know and I will endeavor to help you however I can.
      You have yet again set up a very intriguing plot line. I am equally puzzled and enthralled by this turn of events. Who is this mysterious woman and is she behind the re-emergence of Jennifer’s parents? Is this all a bit of subterfuge to cover up her true plan?
      I hope you can share the answers with us all real soon.
      Baited breathe until then.
      Thank you for this marvelous mystery,
      Your Loyal Fan.

    7. Hey, girl. Just hang in there. Be strong. We all root for you and wish you the best.

      When you look into an abyss, the abyss also looks into you.—Friedrich Nietzsche

      So, um… how about looking towards the horizon and seeing forever?

    11. OCD I’m sorry to hear about Petlvr and hope she will go through and get well soon! Good chapter. Damn who the hell is that and why that crazy basterd have to kidnap Bette’s son, and glad Jordon is ok. Please post soon, thanks!

    12. OCD, I am sorry about Petlvr. I know how hard it is to live through what you are experiencing now. Try not to ignore your health during this. She will need you later, also.

    15. Im so sorry abpout Petlvr. I hope you both get well and I will keep u in my prayers. That was crazy shit. I loved it!!!Great update as usual.

    16. OCD I am sorry to hear about Petlvr’s stroke. As you have researched this topic you know she is going to make it. It will take some time but with your Love, therapy and plenty of prayers she will get better. Now don’t neglect your own health issues during this crisis. We can wait for the next chapter under these circumstances.

    19. OMG!! Excellent as always and I am so sorry to hear about Petlvr I hope she makes a speedy recovery and you take care of yourself I haope you are feeling better..We are saying our prayers for you both…

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