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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter five
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“I.. no….yes…” she finally stuttered. Her head was a raging torrent of thoughts and images she had run through her head countless times and her heart thumped uncontrollably.
“Well then…” Bette smirked, “Let’s go Princess…” The brunette made a sweeping inviting gesture before marching away from the kneeling blonde back towards the chalet.
Tina stared for a second at the retreating form not knowing whether it was really an invitation or a cruel joke.
“Bette! “She called after the tall woman, but her cry was not heard as her voice became strangled in her panic stricken throat.
Tina stood quickly and ran in pursuit of the brunette. She had to make this right. Despite her wild attraction to her host, she simply could not allow it to happen this way; if it were or should happen at all!
She stormed through the wooden door, out of breath.
“My my… aren’t we in a hurry!” Her host derided as she finished hanging her heavy coat when Tina barged in.
“Bette, I’m sorry… I shouldn’t have…” The blonde was happy to realise the strength in her voice had returned. The inward panic that she had been experiencing had however not subsided. “The wine…you see.”
“Oh I’m sorry,” Bette interrupted sarcastically, “I should have known! Do you require a little more liquid courage?”
“Please Bette, “Tina pleaded as she in turn hurriedly took her boots and ski suit off. “I’m not used to drinking that much.” She followed Bette further into the chalet. “You have to believe me, I have never behaved that way!”
“I’m sure you haven’t!” Bette retorted, “You are probably more used to people throwing themselves at you.”
Tina blocked the brunette’s way, standing stock still but silent in front of the taller woman who once more had managed to express out loud another truth about her life. She felt the tell-tale sting of tears in her eyes and before she knew it she had started to sob quietly.
Tina cried and felt dizzy; the sudden rush to catch up with the brunette, the adrenaline which was now coursing through her veins, the deafening sound of her own blood; she heard her name spoken quietly in an exasperated huff and a quiet expletive although she wasn’t able to make it out. What was unmistakeable however was now the hand which ran up and down her arm gently in some form of comforting gesture. It added to the myriad of feelings Tina was experiencing.
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Sorry to hear about your computer problems. Glad you got to resort to plan D.
It was a absolutely 10 stars update.
I only didn’t see Tina’s first time with Bette like that coming, against a wall, but it shouldn’t be so surprising considering how Bette can be. Her second time was filled with tenderness.
I wonder how you are going to preceed with Tina returning to London and Bette staying behind.
I think Tina should mature and make something from her life, less partying, more working and less a daddy’s girl., before their is a healthy chance for a relationship between them.
oke, enough rambling, thanks for a great update!
….and that folks is how you write an NC17
Great chapter Kins my dear friend…Full of passion and desire for one another..A Tibette coming together..I bet
Tina wont be in any great hurry to return to London
So looking forward to the next chapter and possibly some more getting to know one another even better.
Loved it sweetie….PPS…C xx
That is how you do it!! Now, that my dear friends is love at its best! I’m having computer issues too. PPS
First the Dallas Cowboys win and now this..I am having a lucky day..gosh I love this story…now im waiting for their reaction afterwards
A lots of butterflies inside my stomach now…. Thank you for a great update. Pps
Absolutely beautifully written. I too was as dizzy as Tina as I read. It’s so good to have you back, Kins.
Just amazing! Bette devoured Tina. Your writing is simply sublime. And your NC-17s are passionate but not tawdry.
Wow!!! Tina has finally had her curiosity sated and questions answered in a magnificent way by the one and only Bette Porter. She can now say, “damn, so that’s what it is all about and how I’m supposed to feel after. My curiosity has been peaked regarding Bette since Tina first stumbled upon her and the chalet. What in the world is she doing in such an isolated area or is it really isolated, what does she do for a living and what has she been saying to Tina’s father to give him peace of mind about Tina being hurt and lost in such an isolated area. So many questions about our one and only. Fantastic story as always Kins. So happy to have you back with us. Thanks for posting and have a great week.
Wonderful to have you back posting Kins! You are a talented storyteller and writer with no need to resort to bad language to produce a truly passionate post. Thank you.
Sorry for your computer problems but good that you have enough reserve Plans to post!
Hoping the various Plan Options enable a follow up Chapter asap!
WOW! What chapter. I loved it, absolutely loved it.
although I still love the love of Tibette.
It was passionate, hot, and very gentle and loving. I love the way you write.
I wonder what will happen next. maybe it is a turning point in their relationship? or an eternal reminder?
I hope Tina stays for a while, and she realizes that this is what was missing in her life so far!
It was great and I look forward to the next chapter.
Great test drive! I bet this was more than Tina was hoping for! And now what? Hope your pc feels better. Wonderful to have you back!
The snow around the house should have melted all
! because it was too hot inside.
Love that NC 17 was of great quality.
Let’s see how they will look from now.
10 stars.
I have no doubt that you are simply one of the greatest here. I so love this story. I know that you have a lot of surprises for us regarding Bette’s background and I’m so excited for it.
I love you. Haha! Please post soon!
Scribe
Oh.My.God. It’s been a long time since I’ve read one of these NC-17. Yikes and holy smokes…all in a good way.
I wonder if Bette works for Tina’s father….hmm. I can’t wait to read more.
T
wow! That was HOT Kins!
Keep it coming dear friend! Amazing as always.
Oh damn that was hot and beautiful